The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

[KittyStripes]

Well. I luv you fer putting this up, I'll put the button in my signature, & I might just be able to critique every other day, every day, or much more often. c:
A quick, friendly bump, too, for you!

[tanner]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: tanner
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=352084&start=940#p15832169
Adoption Agency you are applying for: break of dawn
Deadline for your form: unknown, the person is on vacation
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? either is fine.

[RαrєHuskíєs]

I must say, your forms are well put together; but I would suggest you punctuate correctly, such as capitalizing in the correct spots, and also, making complete sentences. Another thing, I would suggest spelling correctly, for when spelling is even slight mistaken, it can seem sloppy sometimes, and maybe adding more to teh form parts. Don't get me wrong, your forms are quite splendid, and there's not too much I would change. :3 Hope I helped.

[Sapphirescript]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: Tasha999
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=535432&p=15730239#p15730239
Adoption Agency you are applying for:The Silver Lining
Deadline for your form: I'm not quite sure...
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM please

[KittyStripes]

This is a critique for Tanner
Who the critique is for: Tanner
What you had to say about it: I think the story is lovey. I enjoyed the first drawing, too, but I didn't like the second one too much. The way the hoof is facing makes it look like it's leg is on sideways. ( just barely. ) I just don't like the second picture, but I think that's just me. Might I say, I like the title.

[Sapphirescript]

This is a critique for Tanner
Who the critique is for: Tanner
What you had to say about it: I think the story is lovey. I enjoyed your drawings, too, but I didn't like the second one too much. The way the hoof is facing makes it look like it's leg is on sideways. ( just barely. ) I just don't like the second picture, but I think that's just me. Might I say, I like the title.

I just wanted to say the first drawing is by BlackHorseBeth and the second one is a lineart from CS. Tanner didn't draw them.

[KittyStripes]

This is a critique for Tanner
Who the critique is for: Tanner
What you had to say about it: I think the story is lovey. I enjoyed your drawings, too, but I didn't like the second one too much. The way the hoof is facing makes it look like it's leg is on sideways. ( just barely. ) I just don't like the second picture, but I think that's just me. Might I say, I like the title.

I just wanted to say the first drawing is by BlackHorseBeth and the second one is a lineart from CS. Tanner didn't draw them.

Oh. Well, I'll get rid of the first one because i dont know if blackhorsebeth wants critique on his drawings. But i'll keep the second one up. I don't like that lineart.

[Sapphirescript]

I don't mean to be rude but this is a form to critique forms of writing, not the art that's in them.

[Keriae]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: Tasha999
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=535432&p=15730239#p15730239
Adoption Agency you are applying for:The Silver Lining
Deadline for your form: I'm not quite sure...
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM please

I don't really know what to say about the actual form, but I can tell you that the CD was supposed to happen on Friday, but Africa has been really busy lately.

[neonfrozen]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: koowie
Link to your form: {x}
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Symphony Character Adoption Agency
Deadline for your form: August 19th
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM, please!


I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: koowie
Link to your form: {x}
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Only Heart Adoption Agency
Deadline for your form: August 12th
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? I would love PM, thank you!