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by ZombiePoodle » Sat Jul 30, 2011 7:49 am
I added a bit to ch. 4, but it's not much because it's really late/early and I'm on my iPod...
EDIT: Ummm....so, I reread what I've typed so far... And found a few grammar mistakes. I'll fix and edit and stuff when I'm done and...stuff.
Anyways, I um, realized that Spencer sounds like a stalker...especially in ch 3 where he talks... But I assure you that it's more complicated than that... Eheheh... I'll just leave it at 'keep reading and all will be revealed...at least if I can get off my lazy butt and spend more time typing this up'
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Have a nice day/night... I should get to bet, it's really late/early.
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by ZombiePoodle » Mon Aug 01, 2011 4:37 pm
Ch. 5
I stared up at me ceiling, a smile playing on my lips. I tried to recall my dream. The one from last night...the one with Spencer. All I could remember is feeling safe and warm. His arms may or may not have been around me. He may or may not have whispered something in my ear. If he did, I could not remember.
WIP I finnised ch. 4 ... Actually, it's kinda short. I'm on my iPod in the middle of the night... So I should be getting to bed. I will try to type more later, promise.
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