When My Life Began (Novel thingeh. Please Post!)

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Re: When My Life Began (Novel thingeh. Please Post!)

Postby ~Shooting_Star~ » Thu Jul 14, 2011 9:28 pm

I love your writing!
This style is quite different to the one in your journal (:
Whenever I try to write I always get writers block.....
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Re: When My Life Began (Novel thingeh. Please Post!)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Fri Jul 15, 2011 7:31 am

Oh gosh, thanks so much!

The biggest problem I seem to have is just laziness.
I'm too darn lazy to write more, or in this case, re-write, as it's already mostly written on paper.

I'll try to type more here AND on my journal sometime.
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Re: When My Life Began (Novel thingeh. Please Post!)

Postby .jabberwocky » Wed Jul 20, 2011 3:54 am

I love it!!!!!! :D Very creative! YOU MUST KEEP WRITING...

I share your pain with the laziness. xD I can never finish anything I write. The only things I ever finish are school assignments.
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Re: When My Life Began (Novel thingeh. Please Post!)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Wed Jul 20, 2011 4:54 am

Thanks

Gosh, ever since I realized that I enjoyed writing, it's gotten kind of annoying when I can't Finnish anthing
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Re: When My Life Began (Novel thingeh. Please Post!)

Postby iratePanthera » Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:11 pm

This is really good!
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Re: When My Life Began (Novel thingeh. Please Post!)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Tue Jul 26, 2011 4:23 pm

Thanks! I'll have to find my notebook then I can write some more later ^^
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Re: When My Life Began (Novel thingeh. Please Post!)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Sat Jul 30, 2011 7:49 am

I added a bit to ch. 4, but it's not much because it's really late/early and I'm on my iPod...


EDIT: Ummm....so, I reread what I've typed so far... And found a few grammar mistakes. I'll fix and edit and stuff when I'm done and...stuff.
Anyways, I um, realized that Spencer sounds like a stalker...especially in ch 3 where he talks... But I assure you that it's more complicated than that... Eheheh... I'll just leave it at 'keep reading and all will be revealed...at least if I can get off my lazy butt and spend more time typing this up'
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Have a nice day/night... I should get to bet, it's really late/early.
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Re: When My Life Began (Novel thingeh. Please Post!)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Mon Aug 01, 2011 4:37 pm

Ch. 5
I stared up at me ceiling, a smile playing on my lips. I tried to recall my dream. The one from last night...the one with Spencer. All I could remember is feeling safe and warm. His arms may or may not have been around me. He may or may not have whispered something in my ear. If he did, I could not remember.


WIP I finnised ch. 4 ... Actually, it's kinda short. I'm on my iPod in the middle of the night... So I should be getting to bed. I will try to type more later, promise.
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Re: When My Life Began (Novel thingeh. Please Post!)

Postby iratePanthera » Tue Aug 02, 2011 9:16 am

Awwww... cute.
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Re: When My Life Began (Novel thingeh. Please Post!)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Tue Aug 02, 2011 9:26 am

C-c-cute? That's like...I feel almost insulted.
*sniffles*
Kidding ^•^
lol...uh, I'll try to write more later :3
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