The SCAA - Officially Closed!

[eclaire-]

Thank you for the help. I usually end up creating my own character, this is a first.

[Solanum]

Hey, why don't you meet me on the chat and I can help you get started on a more detailed form. If you'd like? My own form can wait until I have some more ideas. I blew all of them on Fogo. xD

[Wesley]

I'll meet you there, too. ^^
I'll probably be working on my Ampelio and Trix forms, too. <33

[Darkest.Nation]

Yay, Trix gets luff!

[Wesley]

Yay, Trix gets luff!

But of course! Cutest little cow I've ever seen. The hard part is the history. What do I do for that? xD
Oh wait... -has idea-

@ eclaire ~ First of all, love the flower icon in your username. <33 But more importantly, I really like your form for the horse. The personality kis long, structural, and fluent! My suggestion/criticism is to make the history longer. Perhaps you could use more descriptive words? The history counts the most I guess you could say. ;D

[eclaire-]

I think maybe the history flows better now.

[Wesley]

eclaire, That was an AMAZING story. It's so lovely and touching, a tragedy with almost a happy ending. <3 You are an amazing writer. For a first time adopting a character, you seem like a pro! :O

[Wesley]

Bump. </3

[Solanum]

That is a beautiful story ^^ You can do what I completely fail at, and write emotionally xD I can write most things, but a deep emotional story... Nada. You did really well with the outline you had ^^ Please keep going, I'd love to read more from you ^^

[Prince of Awesome]

@Eclaire-

Just read your story, I really like it ^^