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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby RainbowBizkit <3 » Wed Jul 13, 2011 3:30 am

Hey Onyx if we already own an Ahzenai, Can it be in our wooing story for other Ahzenais? Like lets say I am talking to Thegalym and Flash and Lilac are in the background getting a drink or wondering around is that alright? :B Stupid question is Stupid I think the answers No but I wanna check before I add more to my story ;3
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Now I don't know what to do with myself do with myself I don't want nobody else"
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby Mr.Milo » Wed Jul 13, 2011 3:32 am

Miz Fan For Life wrote:Hey Onyx if we already own an Ahzenai, Can it be in our wooing story for other Ahzenais? Like lets say I am talking to Thegalym and Flash and Lilac are in the background getting a drink or wondering around is that alright? :B Stupid question is Stupid I think the answers No but I wanna check before I add more to my story ;3


im just adding that its a maybe because in the wooing rules it says you can use an Ahenzai to woo another unless im wrong!
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby RainbowBizkit <3 » Wed Jul 13, 2011 3:33 am

Alright I skipped past that part thank you :3
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Such a lack of conviction no real connection what should I settle for
But you caught my attention you built on the tension and you left me wanting more
Now I don't know what to do with myself do with myself I don't want nobody else"
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Mew's attempt to woo Adethea

Postby Cromwell » Wed Jul 13, 2011 3:45 am

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I stood in the middle of the damp and rather dreary cave, stunned for a moment. I looked into the red eyes of the beautiful Ahzenai that had approached me and took her words in. I then looked behind her at the rest of the cave. Adethea did have just about everything anyone could ever need…… but it struck me as odd that she was willing to let go of what most want. I pondered the thought for a moment then my grey eyes met with hers once more. “I am Mew….” I began with a smile.

“I can offer you a life outside of this cave. A life where you can explore and make new friends be it human or other. Of course a life with two other Ahzenai; Ezanom and Faeli” I pet each of them. Ezanom looked at the newcomer and bowed his head, “we are always traveling, seeing new sites and making new friends. We’ve plenty of stories to tell of our travels.” Faeli shakes her pelt, “yes its quite an amazing life we lead. I remember one time we had stopped to camp in the mountains of Mew’s home and Eza decided he wanted to explore a nearby cave. I decided I would tag along with him so we went in and BAM there is was! A growl that shook the cave and rang through the mountains with a ferocity we’ve not seen in ages. Eza went darting back to the entrance,” she chuckles. Ezanom looked at Faeli dryly, “if I remember correctly you yelled ‘run’ as soon as a black figure that was larger than us charged you.” I laughed softly, “Guys it’s okay really. There’s no need to start a fuss over a story.”

Faeli sat down and licked her paw, “Mew lets us go anywhere we want as long as we are back by supper time. She likes to play a lot too but she can be relaxed when she wants to be.” I looked at Faeli and then back at Adethea. “Yeah I’m fairly relaxed its more or less what you want to do. My goal is to keep my companions happy not force them to do things and be miserable…… ANYWAYS I can offer you food you won’t find here too….. Things like rabbits, hares, squirrels, a variety of greenery and fruit. We can even get chicken, turkey, or ham if you’d rather. “Ezanom looked at more for a moment before quickly explaining that hare, rabbits, and squirrels are similar to mice and that chicken and turkey were birds that humans normally fed on for food.
“Adethea, I can give you a friendship that will last a life time, even life outside of Ahzen with freedom, new sights and adventures. I can offer you an array of food and pets you’d never find in this cave. I do understand though if you’d prefer a life in Ahzen, or a life without much competition for affection. However Adethea, I’d be honored if you chose to travel with us.” Eza and Fai looked at the Ahzenai with interest and they dipped their heads to her. I held my hand out with a warm smile, “Adethea, will you join us in our travels?”
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Re: Tessa attempts to woo Thegalym

Postby nowi » Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:09 am

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I watched the vortex with interest. The first Ahzenai hadn't really caught my attention, so I wanted to see what other magnificent creatures came out of the vortex. But I sure wasn't prepared for this one. Out of the vortex flew (I'm using this word in the figurative sense, of course) a purple Ahzenai, who soared through the air, and landed in the lake with a big splash. I backed up slightly as leftover water swirled around my feet, and watched with amusement as the Ahzenai shook himself off (quite vigorously, I might add). As he walked over to a boulder, I realized how beautiful he was, with his purple fur, and the lighter swirl markings on his side. He sat upon the boulder, and he began to groom his fur. I couldn't blame him, after all, he had just had that stupendous launch into the lake, but I wondered how long it would be until he noticed all of us were there. Just as I thought this, the Ahzenai noticed us and nearly fell off the boulder. Amused, I watched as he yelled "I, Thegalym am a powerful Ahzenai and I'm not afraid to whoop on you!" He curled his paw into a fist.

I decided to attempt to woo the Ahzenai, though I wasn't sure I'd be able to, as I am a terrible convincer. So, I approached the Ahzenai, Thegalym, slowly, as I didn't want to startle him. He seemed shocked enough from seeing all of us people, and I didn't want to shock him any further. "I would join you up there and groom myself, but I'm afraid I don't have anything to groom." I told him. "My name is Tessa, and I believe you've already introduced yourself as Thegalym." I sat down slowly and looked up at the Ahzenai. "I really admire your bravery and courage," I said to him. "I could learn from you. If I were you, I would have run for my life." I told him. "I'm kind of a coward sometimes, but I like to think of myself as a nice (and sometimes funny) person." I paused, trying to find my words. "I could learn a lot from you. About bravery, self-confidence, and perhaps a little bit about strength, as you are a great and powerful Ahzenai, aren't you?" I raised my eyebrow at him. "I think we would be a good pair." I looked into his eyes and smiled. "Of course, I'll never be as strong and powerful as you, but perhaps you could give me some tips?" I stood up. "You can think about it. It's your choice, of course, who you choose, but I would love it if you would choose me."

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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby Rabbitheart » Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:14 am

My personal favorite line from my story, nobody steal it:
Oh great and powerful Thegalym, I mean you no harm, I just want to give you this adorable warm kitten to help warm you after your spectacular and admirable display of waterworks and swimming abilities that you honored us with.?
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby Cromwell » Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:21 am

Rabbitheart wrote:My personal favorite line from my story, nobody steal it:
Oh great and powerful Thegalym, I mean you no harm, I just want to give you this adorable warm kitten to help warm you after your spectacular and admirable display of waterworks and swimming abilities that you honored us with.?

roflmao now THAT a story I MUST read. Very niceRabbitheart.
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby Rabbitheart » Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:23 am

Thanks. :D I think it should go in the notable literature/art section. :lol:
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby Mr.Milo » Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:37 am

Rabbitheart wrote:Thanks. :D I think it should go in the notable literature/art section. :lol:


Yep your right! Lil though what the ? For?
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby Onyxeva » Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:51 am

Noc; -marries you-

Miz; Just confirming that yes, you can use them. <3

Mrmilo; thank you 8D

Rabbit; xD lol
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