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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby ᴀᴇᴠɪɪ » Tue Jul 12, 2011 11:23 pm

Onyxwings wrote:
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*sighs* I probably got no point in winning now... Everybody elses is so long and good


Oh you~ > u>


Everyone has a chance of winning~

Don't mind me, I have confidence somewhere :3
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby RainbowBizkit <3 » Wed Jul 13, 2011 1:27 am

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I approached Thegalym and raised my arms in the air cautiously before speaking "Hello Thegalym I see that you are confused by us we are humans or as your species calls us 'two-leggers' we inhabit this planet with you and wish to be your companions, and not just you but most Ahzenai here today" I lowered my arms and stepped back a little seeing as he was much more bigger then me. I reached into my pocket and placed a sharp dagger at his feet "I was wondering if you would like this object? I found it a little father back on the shore" I sighed.

"I have two other Ahzenais one name is Flash, a male liquid. The other is named Lilac, a female gas. We saw you get launched from the vortex and had to see if you are alright, me and my Ahzenais thought you would make a great addition to our family. But that's only if your interested, oh her comes Lilac now" I said as I watched Lilac pad over to join us.


She nodded her head at Thegalym and smiled watching him "Humans aren't that bad you know, this one right here is pretty good to us. Wow she got a sharp dagger for you? She must really want you to join us" She smiled getting a drink and padding back over to sit with Flash and watch the waves roll into the shore. I smiled watching her return to Flash and looked back at Thegalym he looked absolutely amazing perched on the rock, his coat gleamed and his eyes shined he was one of the most amazing creatures I have ever seen.


"Truly you are a Brave and strong Ahzenai and while I am gone for those two mornings til night at work, you can surely protect Lilac and Flash at all costs Thegalym the great" I smiled looking up at him "We all know you are all powerful, but you should be called "The Great Thegalym in honor of you bravery and strength" I said watching him. I looked up and said "Your species is breath taking that is why I love all Ahzenais so much but only certain ones catch my eye, because of there personality. Some are adventurous, some are brave, some are sad and some are afraid.


I love the all most surely but only the ones with strength and bravery catch my eyes, for you Thegalym are surely the most brave Ahzenai of them all, and I am most certain you can protect Lilac and Flash while I am away. Plus you don't need to take care of them all day, they know where things are so you don't need to fret they will show you around I the Ahzenai house in my yard where you sleep all night. You are welcome in my home any time at all, I don't really mind because I love you all." I laughed a little and looked up "Sorry when I say a lot I tend to get nervous and try to make everything rhyme."



I sighed and sat down on the sand in front of him, moving the dagger right beside him. I watched him stare at me listening to what I had to offer him. I opened my mouth and began speaking again "I hope your an adventous kind of guy, we tend to explore things often, like Lakes, forest, Rivers, and mountains are just a few things we like to explore in our free time when we aren't relaxing and having the time of our lives.Of course it is totally up to you if you want to come with us, but if you don't we understand, I really hope you consider my offer Thegalym" I said smiling walking towards Flash and Lilac.

My eyes sparkled as other humans began talking to him, and trying to woo him. I sat there gazing at him, hopeing that he would come join us I looked up repeating the words over and over in my head "please Join us Thegalym we will have the greatest times together." I sighed and smiled, looking at Flash. "What do you think of him?" I asked watching as Flash begin to speak "I think he is a bit of an irresponsible bone head, but besides that I think he would make a great friend." Flash smiled laying his head on his paws watching the waves roll up the shore. I looked over at Lilac "What do you think of him?" I asked hopeful.


She looked up from her paws and smiled "I think he has class, he seems like a great Ahzenai" She smiled Flash grunted "Class that's the last thing he has" He waited for Lilacs reply swishing his tail on the ground among the sand. Lilac looked up "He does so have class, what would you know about class anyway?" Lilac grumbled staring into the water. "Guys guys your acting like a brother and sister relax we all like Thegalym and that's all that matters" I said watching the two of them, laid out in the sand away from each other. "Yea some of us like him more then others" Flash snapped looking at Lilac.

Lilac looked shocked and looked away quickly. I looked from Flash to Lilac then gasped "You mean lilac likes Thegalym?" Flash nodded "Shes been staring at him ever since he came out of the water" He snickered looking away. "Lilac I wouldn't get to attached to him, he might not come with us if he doesn't he goes with some one else and you may never see him again" I sighed looking at her sadly. "I know thanks for reminding me, I know we can't breed and all but I would just love to see him everyday he would make everyday so much better" she sighed as we sat on the beach waiting for Thegalyms answer.


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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby Ember Sky » Wed Jul 13, 2011 1:35 am

I love number one, But I think I need more time with my other Ahzenais, I don't want to make them angry at me :< But I love doves, one of my favorite birds<333
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby Nimaine » Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:08 am

Sartores wrote:
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The vortex takes on hues and tones of brown, swirling slowly as the colors change. Then, with a flash of cyan blue, a dark brown paw emerges. Sartores slowly creeps out of the vortex, head, ears, and tail low. "H-hello?" he says nervously. Finally as he travels further from the vortex, he realizes that no-one and nothing intends to harm him. He relaxes, looking around with interest and curiousity at his surrounds and the people and other ahzenai in the cave. There are things to learn, and people to meet, friends to greet. Another step, and he looks down to discover a sparkling stone. "What is this?" Sitting down and playing with the sparkling rocks with his paws, he adds quietly, "I want to know... everything."


Nimaine wrote:"Hello Sartores," I say, both excited to finally see an ahzenai without a companion, and worried that he might not choose me. I offer my hand for him to sniff, quite forgetting, despite the bright blue flames above his back, that he's probably as smart as I am. When I do recall this, a few seconds later, I retract my hand with embarrasment. Instead, I decide to focus on the muscavite he's found. "It's called mica," I say, picking up one of the shining stones myself. "See how it flakes off into thin sheets?" I demonstrate, and continue, "It's so thin, it's translucent. That's why people used to use it for windows." I find myself staring at his beautiful colors, but return my attention back to the mica I'm shredding when I realize he probably isn't the type who wishes to be excessively admired.


Sartores wrote:Sartores examines the hand Nimaine offers him curiously. Is this some social custom he is unacquainted with? "So this is mica," he says, after listening to her explanation. "It's very pretty," he adds with a touch of anxiety, she is staring at him: does he have some dirt in his fur? No, there is nothing, he assures himself after a quick glance. Now she is looking at the rock again, and he thinks for a few seconds before rising to his feet. "You were kind enough to share your knowledge with me," he says seriously. "So I will become your student. When I have learned all you can teach me, we shall continue together, discovering the secrets of the universe, for what is knowledge without friendship?" As he says this, he comes over to be beside her, the first friend in a wide world.

Sartores has joined Nimaine.



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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby Onyxeva » Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:12 am

Uh-huh! 8D

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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby Noctilida » Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:26 am

Yey, birds! This thread moves quickly. o3o
Also, there's a new RP up on the Ahz website. Just FYI. Totally not advertising at all. *shot-*
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby keydemon » Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:27 am

Onyx, I have a question, that may have been answered, but I forget. .__.;

On the front page, it says the ahzenai may get suspicious if they see someone trying to woo every single ahzenai that emerges from the vortex. Is it possible to get a penalty (minus slots) if someone is trying to woo too many?
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby Onyxeva » Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:30 am

Noc; I'll advertise it for you on the front page. xD I'll turn the 'cave' post into a 'current rp' post, and a table of contents. 8D

Ninjutsu: No, you won't get negative slots from attempting to woo an ahzenai, perhaps if someone repeatedly wins a Ahz, then I'll implement a penalty system. :3
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby Crowhead » Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:37 am

I bowed my head to Adethea and told her my name. I then stood up and looked her straight and the eyes and answered her with everything I could. "If you want me to tell you about myself, for you to know me, I will. I really love animals, especially birds, cats, and reptiles. My hobbies are mainly outdoors, climbing trees and playing soccer, although relaxing inside is sometimes just as good! As for what I can offer you, I can offer you adventure, a chance to experience so many things outside this cave! The rush of the wind! The warm rays of sunlight! I offer you happiness, a chance to live your life with all the pleasure I can give! I can offer you my devotion, your wish is my command, your dreams are my dreams, your heart is my soul." I finished, hoping Adethea would find this enough.
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby Noctilida » Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:39 am

QAQ I love you. Like forever. Marry me.
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