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[Kickin' up dirt]

Swirl Pop; You did good with your story although you can't control the Ahzenai you're trying to woo. :3

Then I don't get it T.T

[Ember Sky]

You don't say what the Ahzenai does with you, you make a story about how you earn it's trust, not power play it, like in the story you become best friends, but you don't get it, weird right? So just post what YOU do^^

[Onyxeva]

Rainbow; as others said, it does look like a deer. xD

Muku;If I made the items give fewer slots then I'd also have to cut the prices~ That wouldn't be fair to those who've already paid the higher amount. x3 I think if the items are limited to 1 per story then that should be better. (I keep forgetting to write that in the shop info/rules.)

Swirl-Pop; Try writing a story describing yourself and what you do, rather then what you do/will do with the Ahzenai. It is a little confusing, but we're here to help. <3

[Kickin' up dirt]

I'll try,thanks both of you :3

[Nimaine]

Swirl Pop; You did good with your story although you can't control the Ahzenai you're trying to woo. :3

Then I don't get it T.T

If you've ever roleplayed before.... the Ahzenai you're trying to woo isn't your character. It belongs to Onyxwings. If you do woo it successfully, then it is your character. But until then, you can't control it's actions, any more than you can control the actions of another human being. Hopefully this helps.

I am still trying to pin down Sartores' personality. I think you mentioned you were working on something, Onyx, but until then, I think I'll copy Shadow Wolf's idea. It's a good one .

[Kickin' up dirt]

Thank you.I might try it.

[RainbowBizkit <3]

xD Onyx I just traded some more uncommons for rares so I am jam packed with payment for youz 8DDD What a good bud I am XDDD

[Onyxeva]

Good luck, Swirl-Pop~ If you need help or examples, etc. I'd be glad to help you. <3

Miz; xD Oh you~ <3

Regarding the personalities, this is what I was planning on doing: Separate, detailed website. Unfortunately they limit me to 20 added pages before requesting money so that's not going to work. xD

[RainbowBizkit <3]

xD. Onyx do you think the owners of there Ahzenais could make there personalitys but after they do you could post a link taking you to that users post of the Ahzenais personality?

[Cromwell]

thats kinda what I did since mine was just unconfident