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Re: The Agency! ~CD! 17/05~

Postby iRabid Coffee » Sat Jun 25, 2011 11:01 am

Gingertail98 wrote:Anyone want to critique what I have so far of my form?
its here: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=150745&p=14344570#p14344570
I am still working on it feverishly because I heard the code drop was tonight (?) please PM if you have any suggestions I want to make my form as best as I can because I really want him <3



That is amazing. I don't know if I could do that.

Pet's ID Tag:
#16-Toxicity
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Name You'd Choose for It:
Zuur (Zeer) (Acid in Dutch)
Gender:
Male
Reason You Want It:
I've been thinking about writing some stories and this design caught my eye. For some reason, I've liked semi-robotic wolves/canines over regular.
History/Background/Other:
A chorus of barking, whining, and howling echoed through the valley. New pups were born and everyone couldn't wait to see them. All the wolves of the valley had their odd mechanical quirks due to human testing earlier in their life. From bright neon colors, to mechanical or robot parts. The neon colors weren't usually the main thing on the wolves so they didn't worry about it much but the mechanical parts could be a bit much at times but most of the wolves got used to it.
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Little cries and yelps came from the expecting mothers den and the wolves of the valley chorused in many barks when the proud father of the pups came out bearing the news. He smiled proudly and looked at the wolves of the valley before speaking. "There are three very happy healthy pups. Two girls and a boy" he said confidently although that was only partially true. Unlike either parent, one of the pups had robot parts but neither of the parents family had them as they came from neon wolves. The mother and father had agreed that they wouldn't mention and they would disown the pup as soon as they could.
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Months after the birth of the pup, the parents had gotten attached to their little robot and decided to call him Zurr due to his acid looking neon green streak down his side. The sisters had gotten used to the fact their brother was part robot. It didn't matter to them, he was family. After a while, some of the metal on his back rised and became wings, he couldn't really fly using them considering they were just the structure with what seemed like web-like interior. The wings weren't connected to his back, they just floated above it. Also as he grew, the fur above his eyes grew to be longer and he kept them side sweeped over his right eye. A blue streak wraps around his ears and a red circle at the base.
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As the six month old pup grew to be a teen wolf, he was starting to become an outcast to the wolves of the valley. Sure, Zuur was feirce and loyal but he was also a recluse. He liked being around wolves but he wasn't always friendly and didn't understand sarcasm and usually took things in the way they weren't intended. The leader of the valley had to make a decision he didn't want to make. He approached Zuur's mother and father and sighed, he didn't want to tell them that their only son would have to leave the valley.
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The parents of Zuur watched with tears in their eyes as the leader stood before Zuur and bowed his head to the year old wolf and looked down. "I am sorry Zuur, although you have the feirceness and loyalty to be a great warrior, you do not possess the heart of one." he muttered to the young wolf. Zuur looked down at the ground and sighed, he had figured this would end badly for him. It wasn't easy being an outcast. He cast a tear filled glance at his parents and gulped, bowing at the leader of the valley in good-bye, he knew he was going away and never coming back. Slowly, Zuur started walking out of the camp, dragging his paws on the ground, his arm bands clanging together when they hit. When he reached the entrance/exit to the camp, he sighed and shook his head and barked once again, "good-bye." As he walked out the exit, his mother, father, and his two sisters started crying, knowing they probably would never see their son/brother again.
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As Zuur left the camp, he shook his head. This wasn't going to end in one of those suicidal wolf bits that happened when a wolf left the pack. No, I will survive. He thought and looked at the sky, it wasn't quite night but it wasn't day either. It was dusk so he knew he would have to settle down somewhere for the night. Curling up into a ball to sheild himself from the cold, Zuur thought, I will survive, I will show them all.
I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.
Of course I do.


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Re: The Agency! ~CD! 17/05~

Postby versicolor » Sat Jun 25, 2011 1:10 pm

; Pet's ID Tag ;
Number 41

; Image of pet ;
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[ xXx ]

[ xXx ]


; Name You'd Choose for It ;
Elanor Stella Sternberg

; Nicknames ;
Elle, Ellie.

; Name Meanings ;
Elanor;
Means "star sun" in Sindarin.
Stella;
Means "star" in Latin.
Sternberg;
Means "dweller on a starry hill, mountain" in German.

; Species ;
Pony [ Equine ]

; Breed ;
Skyros Pony

; Coloration ;
Palomino Tovero Paint + Blaze.

; Age ;
Fifteen [ in human years ]

; Place of Birth ;
Baton Rouge, Louisiana

; Current Location ;
Chicago, Illinois

; Gender ;
Female

; Reason You Want It ;
Ever since I saw Elanor, when she was first donated, I remember I thought she was a gorgeous character. I was sorely tempted to go for her and put up a form for her, but I knew I wouldn't have a use for her. My horse characters all had specific guidelines, and unfortunately she didn't fall under any of them, thus giving me no use for this lovely lady. Her design is beautiful, and palomino has always been one of my favorite horse colors. Ever since I was little, I loved paint horses as well, so Elanor was completely perfect in my eyes. The little touches of blue added the right amount of color and contrast to her design. I'm a sucker for pale and cream colored characters with blue eyes, and she is certainly no exception.

Several times I considered making a form for her, but I knew the poor girl wouldn't have gotten any love if i did get her. Once I saw her most recent revamp though, I knew exactly what I could use her for. I have an entirely anthro plot line that needed more species variety. Anthro horse characters are always so unique and that is exactly what my story needs. She would have a perfect role as one of the stories younger characters, the newest generation of agents. Also, in her revamp, I can see a clear personality in her, like someone who would be shy and timid on the outside, but retain a strong and confident personality within.

If I got her, I would definitely make sure she gets the love and attention she deserves. She would get a page on my character site, and I would write about her when I got the chance. She's on of the main characters of the younger generation, so she would be written about more often than not. I might try and RP with her a bit, as it's always fun for me to RP shy characters. Also, I would make sure to draw her whenever I have the time, and I think she could help me with my anthro anatomy. I love to draw anthros, so naturally, I would draw her very often. I would also order art of her whenever I can. She's just so gorgeous and unique, and I'd love to be able to call her mine. c:

; Personality ;
{{ Timid & Quiet }}
By nature, Elanor is a very shy and quiet girl. She doesn't usually talk, unless spoken to, and she tends to lurk. She always looks like she wants to say something, add her own input, but she never really does. Her voice is naturally soft as well, adding to her quietness. Being the shy type of a girl that she is, she isn't normally the first person to greet anyone. She doesn't particularly enjoy talking to others that she doesn't know that well, and likes to stick to her little realm of familiarity. She tends to be more open and emotional toward her friends than anyone else. She almost never raises her voice, and it's very, very hard for others to imagine Elanor shouting.
{{ Submissive & Easy-going }}
Elanor is rather a non-confrontational individual, and she is never the one to oppose someone's opinion or voice her own opinion. She lets others decide for her, and just goes with whatever everyone else says. If she does happen to confront someone or state an opinion that opposes the views of others, she has a tendency to apologize afterward. That is purely out of habit though, and most of the time she doesn't really mean it. She's rather calm about most things and tends to just go with the flow of everything. It would be difficult to anger Elanor, and she only ever gets angry when she is under a ton of mental and emotional stress.
{{ Kind & Generous }}
Elanor tries to be kind and nice to everyone she meets, not matter how irritating and annoying they act toward her. Often she will randomly compliment one of her friends, or do kind deeds from the goodness of her heart. She never expects a reward or even a thank you for her efforts, she simply accepts the fact that good deeds often go unnoticed. If she notices that any one of her friends is struggling in class, or with family members, Elanor will usually try her best to help them. Due to her shyness though, her kindness rarely ever stretches past her friends, or others that she at least somewhat knows. She's quite generous as well, always giving, and neer caring if sheever gets anything in return.
{{ Charming & Intelligent }}
Probably on of the biggest reasons that Elanor is so popular at her school is her rather charming personality. She is quite pleasant and delightful to be around. Also, her beauty plays is big role in her charming appearance. She is what you would call a "people pleaser" and will do whatever she has to do to keep everyone around her happy. She is a very smart girl, and almost always earns the top grades in her classes. She also uses this intelligence to her advantage to come up with solutions when her friends get into fights. She tends to lack common sense though, her intelligence mainly lies in book smarts and social skills.
{{ Confident & Strong }}
On the inside, Elanor is a very strong and confident individual. She can take a great amount of emotional pain, willing to be emotionally abused or taken advantage for the sake of her closest and most loyal friends. She will usually just brush it off, the damage not affecting her in the slightest. Most others think of her as a girl with little to no self esteem, but that is a false statement. Elanor has much confidence and bravery in herself, just the inability to show it to the outside world. She doesn't think poorly of herself, and she isn't insecure about the way she looks, or how talented she is. If she is put in extreme circumstances though, she wouldn't hold back, and she would stand up for herself, but only if absolutely necessary.
{{ Guiltless & Insensitive }}
Despite the fact that she apologizes for almost every single outburst that she makes, in actuality, Elanor is not all that sorry. She is almost never plagued with immense guilt, and she normally does not feel guilty for her actions. If she manages to hurt someone in the process of voicing her opinion or standing up for herself, tough luck. Frankly, she thinks they deserve it. She tends to be rather insensitive toward the feelings of others she doesn't know that well, but of course she hides her indifference within her. It is extremely hard to guilt trip her, and most of the time she will reply with a simple "I don't care."

; History/Background/Other ;

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Re: The Agency! ~CD! 17/05~

Postby gingertail98 » Sat Jun 25, 2011 1:41 pm

Finally finished my for for kennel #2. if anyone wants to critique it (which I would LOVE) the link is at the top of the page! :D
Throw those hooves right over my shoulders
Cause I seen the way you look at me, doefriend, when you smoulder
Come here, queer deer, and shake that thing around
Cause you get me so high that I gotta go down

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Re: The Agency! ~CD! 17/05~

Postby ubiquitous » Sat Jun 25, 2011 2:29 pm

Oh Jelli, I have no chance with her now. Seriously, I have to remove my form now because it could never compaire to yours ):
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Re: The Agency! ~CD! 17/05~

Postby versicolor » Sat Jun 25, 2011 2:51 pm

Don't say that, everyone has a chance! D: You shouldn't give up give up because of me >w<
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Re: The Agency! ~CD! 17/05~

Postby Papyrsatyr » Sat Jun 25, 2011 5:12 pm

Hello folks! If anything I'll be headed back home from my trip tomorrow. And once I settle back in I'lltry to find some time to update the front and do a code drop. So if anything the code drop may be a bit late but I'll do it if you'll like. I say wait for Sunday? I mean if another staff member has free time go shoot for updating. But I'll try to update the front on Sunday.
Typed on a phone so excuse any weird typos.
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Re: The Agency! ~CD! 17/05~

Postby crazy cranky critter » Sat Jun 25, 2011 8:40 pm

This is, of course, a huge WIP. Just posting because knowing my chronically bad luck I will be out tomorrow and y'all will do the code drop then XD


Kennel 103


Synthia Leigh Azuli
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Profile:

Name:
Name: Synthia
Middle Name: Leigh
Family Name: Azuli

Sex:
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bisexual [prefers females though]

Background:
Nationality: African
Species: Hyena
Breed: Spotted Hyena

Physical:
Coat:
Colour: Varying shades of browns and greys
Markings: Spots covering main body.
Darker mane and leg marking.
Texture: Somewhat bristley
Length: Short on face, legs and sides.
Long on underbelly and along spine.

Accessories:
Piercings: Two golden rings.
The lower one has a Lapis Lazuli stone hanging
from it.

Scars:
One that runs across her left front sholder.
From bullet skimming past her.

Mutations:
Other than odd leg marking perfectly normal.

Speech:
Vocabulary: Nothing fancy, some slang and abreviations.
Voice: Female, but rather deep.
Accent: Her acccent is hard to pin point,
it is slightly African with quite a bit of
American influence.

Azuli Hyenas:
Synthia - Young female. Has the family ring on luck in her ear.
Secille - Synthia's mother. Is known to be very rude.
Boron - Synthia's father. He is very old and is missing an eye.

Other Characters:
Jekyll - Young male hyena with unusually dark coat.
Is fairly casual. Jekyll is half a year older than Synthia.
Main Information:

What I Like About Synthia:
What originally drew my attention to Synthia was the full referance picture. There is something about her beautiful little tufted mane that I just can't get enough of. I don't know why, but she also reminds me of my best friend who has moved country a little while ago and so she pulled my strings emotionally in a nice way. When I first saw her, she made me feel less lonely. Maybe it was her personality filled eyes or her room fulling personality. I also stole some of my friends name to give her her name. The way her eyes are sparkling gives her a feeling   beauty and grace, despite the fact she is a scavenger. Then Spotty drew a piece of her and that added to my love for her. Also Spotty's piece is kind of saying to me 'Stop trying to avoid me. You know you want me.' It also gave out a winning personality, a rough tough girl power person who can carry themselves because they are a strong girl, not a gooshey one. And thats a personality which really stands out to me, I'm looking for a dominant girl to be in amoungst my group of males, misfits and mentally unstable creatures that I call my OCs [no offense to them, but that sums most of them up].

What I Will Do For Synthia:
Synthia looks like she would think of herself as almost a godess in her world - powerful and beautiful. So she deserves complete love and adoration. Whilst I'm a bit of a poor person at the moment I will happily spend hours drawing her - get some skills at drawing things with attitude. I'm not sure there are masses of hyena OC rps out there, but you never know. And of course I will get round to finding her a slot in my character gallery so the world can see her pure unchallenged might.

Personality:
Some are self explanatory, but I have provided some further detail anyway.

Dominant:
Synthia was born a natural leader and because of her other personality traits she always manages to get in charge of things. She won't take advice from anyone unless she has asked for it and she won't be bossed around. Whether it is a game, a position or anything of the sorts her key goal in life is to be on top. She has a strong personality and attitude and when she is around others it is clear who gets the final say...

Violent:
Synthia doesn't promote violence nor enjoy it, although when challenged she will not hesitate to snap at or maim an opponent. She will become very violent if needed for 'defence' or to 'sort someone out' but she generally refrains from going out and having a go at an innocent person.

Attention Seeking:
Whilst Synthia may not look up to others she certainly enjoys their undivided attention. She hates being left out, infact she almost fears it. She especially dislikes when people come and steal her thunder, as such, off her.

Independant:
Whilst Synthia is happy to harness the rallying force of others she enjoys working alone. This is because she sees herself as the one who makes the right choices. Whilst she is very attention seeking, as mentioned above, she enjoys being entitled to her own opinion. She will not take anyone elses advice unless she has asked for it.

Confident:
Synthia always believes in herself and her own abilities. She won't be shadowed by mockery or anyone else. If she turns out to be wron she is always happy to defend herself because she has such pride and confidence in all she has done.

Energetic:
Synthia enjoys being active at all times. If you aren't talking about something she has extreme interest in chances are she will jump around as if she has ants in her pants. She enjoys running for short bursts but being a hyena she is more fidgety than into running for long distances.

An outsider's view one Synthia's Life:

Underneath her paws the crazed mud broke into even smaller fragments. The ground was dry, hard and cruel; just like everything else in the short time since Synthia's birth. Tears trickled down the young hyena's face, but why wouldn't they? The poor little one had gotten lost in the midst of a panic attack. There had been immense pressure in the air and just as suspected a rolling boom came. Rain lashed at the tufted pelts of the Azuli pack; a small group of a few distantly related hyena families. There were the usual sounds of fright from the animals of the African plains. Far off in the distance there was the trumpet of an elephant and the shocked shrieking of monkeys. But above all the commotion a strange sound travelled - the sound of a gun. As sadly happens so often in countries with large, rare animals there was a small mob of poachers out in the rain where visibility was poor and they were less likely to be seen. Their old jeep, which was making the sound of something choking, rattled ever closer and before the little group of hyenas knew what was going they were under fire. The poacher hadn't gotten anything and were mad, so they were taking their frustration out on the creatures that endlessly laughed at them. There was the sound of led, metal and flesh coming together at immense speed and the ground turned red. Synthia fled. She climbed into a dry hollow and sat. Cold, wet, miserable and alone. Only three days later did she dare emerge from her den. Hunger drove her out but she felt she could have hidden in the earth forever. But now she had to find something to eat. It had only taken a short amount of time for the earth to shrivel back after the rain and crack like a dropped plate. Now the young hyena stood in tears, wondering how her life could or would continue.

Synthia's eyes grew sore and swollen from all the salty tears and with a final gulp of air she silently vowed she would make her way in the world and perhaps one day find her family again. So without an idea of how to do it she set out to fill her rather high ambition. Although she longed for a soft tongue to clean her face and gentle words to guide her she had none. 'I can do this.' the little hyena said. 'I can look after myself.' She quietly walked out into the empty expanse of parched land. The dry grass stabbed at her face but she kept going, knowing the only way to find food would be to keep walking and sniffing. As she walked a brand new philosophy formed in her head. She wasn't going to be the little baby who ate the food her mother fed her. No, if offered she would reject it. She was her own hyena and she would be her own self and do her own thing. She wasn't going to be scared any more and she was going to get back at anyone who thought they could scare her like that again. A smile managed to inch onto her tear stained face. Now she knew that she wanted to steer her life. To be a captain and not let anyone sail her ship.

Her head still full of thoughts of leadership and authority, Synthia managed to pick up a nice festering waft of baboon. She clambered through a small row of prickly plants and at last lay eyes on what she wanted and needed badly. She was amazed that someone would leave such a prize. But coming from a breed that lives to eat everyone's left overs she was used to gnawing things down to the bone. Once she was completely gorged she managed to drag the remainder of the monkey back, through a row of spiked undergrowth and into a dry looking spot to stay the night. And in this fashion young Synthia lived and thrived, growing strong and healthy. In the early mornings she would climb out of her den, set a goal for her day and then go about sniffing for something to steal. She was often laughed at by baby elephants at her desperate attempts to pull things down that leopards had left in trees but that didn't deter her. One such morning she was pulling hard at the tail of a baboon which was stuck in a low forked branch of a young tree. With a loud ripping sound her teeth grinded down the tail and right off. With nothing left to hold her up Synthia toppled backwards. Looking up with an angry frown on her face she saw someone who looked just like her looming over her face. She was very excited that perhaps this hyena might be related to her, but instead she chose to go with serious incase he thought he could steal her food. 'What do you want?' She demanded. In a short while she was fulled in with the details of Jekyll, the male hyena's life for the past few months. Even though she was quite a bit younger than him Synthia glared up at Jekyll. 'Don't think you can take my monkey, its mine!' she hadn't really listened to him and so was still convinced he wanted to steal her food. Jekyll laughed and then realising he didn't want the baboon Synthia took her turn to tell him about herself. Jekyll nodded and simply said 'See you round, I guess.' and was off.

Synthia spent alot of time after the restlessly walking around. She was tired and had nothing to do but she supposed if she kept pacing a five by five or so kilometer patch she might just run into some one interesting.

Agreements:
In the event that I may win this character I here by vow...
I will appreciate this character as best I can
I will return her so she may find a better home if I no longer want her.

I also agree to abide by the creators rules.
I will keep her female
She will not recieve any design alterations other than her new piercings
I will also keep her hyena, as that is the only species she fits anyway.

I also sent a PM to the creator a week or two ago but as of yet they have not replied.
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Re: The Agency! ~CD! 17/05~

Postby Steffi. » Sun Jun 26, 2011 12:29 am

I just wanted to do a revamp of this one. P:

Kennel number 22
Old image Here
Revamp version
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where you got the lineart Here

And this one has been up a long time... since Christmas probably.

Kennel number 96
Old image Here
Revamp version
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where you got the lineart Here
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Re: The Agency! ~CD! 17/05~

Postby berd » Sun Jun 26, 2011 3:09 am

Kennel number 112
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where you got the lineart my own

just realized how light the colors are .___.;
i hope these subtle changes are okay; i really didn't mean to completely revamp the entire character o3o
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Re: The Agency! ~CD! 17/05~

Postby tinydoodles » Sun Jun 26, 2011 3:16 am

Oh, Soy D: you do realize I may now have to go for that character next drop, don't you?

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