[beema]

Username: beema
Archive: x
Pokemon: Cyndaquil
Edits:
[NR] Eye color, disabilities (deaf)
[C] Pupil edit, Accent, Minor Extra features
[UC] Major change in markings
[R] Retypes (ice)

Lumi watched as her trainer got ready to go out. She wondered why the human needed so many layers, but maybe it had something to do with the lack of fur? Regardless, Lumi couldn't wait to go outside! Winter had always her favorite season and worked better for training. As soon as everything was ready to go, Lumi ran down the porch and hopped into the soft snow under her. She could easily stay here and play in the snow all day, but she knew that her trainer would probably want to get in some actual practice. After she was done feeling the snow in her fur, she got up and waddled over to her trainer. [116 words]

[0Zero0]

You should remove [UC] Major Extra Features, and add [C] Minor Extra features then your good to go!

archived and approved!

[beema]

You should remove [UC] Major Extra Features, and add [C] Minor Extra features then your good to go!

archived and approved!

alr fixed ^^