[Tяiρρ]

<3 Beautiful pups as usual TGW. Sorry to post just wanted to state my opinion on them. x3

[Suryatha]

Form:

Number of pup: 3
Name you choose for the pup: Arivior - "ari"=Adler / "vior"=Baum, Wald (nordisch)

Art of the pup you want (armor +1 point):
viewtopic.php?f=34&t=589526
viewtopic.php?f=34&t=589573&p=13611988#p13611988

A little story:

Es war ein trüber Tag , wie so oft in diesem schönen aber leider auch unruhigen Land .
Soaraya - meine Mutter hatte sich in die Höhlen zurückgezogen - denn sie spürte das der Zeitpunkt unserer Geburt nahe war.

Und ich :
ich war schon ganz aufgeregt : stark strampelnd - drückte ich mich an meinen Geschwistern vorbei um möglichst schnell der Enge zu entkommen , die sich in letzter Zeit immer mehr aufgebaut hatte.
und dann war es soweit :
kaum dass ich erschöpft aber glücklich geboren wurde erwachte meine Neugierde.
Interessiert schaute ich mich um und sah das erste mal meinen Vater in seiner Rüstung.

Und bereits ab diesen ersten Minuten meines Lebens war mir klar was ich werden will .
ein grosser Krieger so wie mein Vater.

Und darauf arbeitet ich hin :
mit viel Durchsetzungsvermögen und manchen Seitenhieben eroberte ich mir immer wieder einen guten Platz an Mutters Milchbar um schnell zu wachsen - hatte ich doch so viel vor und wollte so viel erleben .

Gedult gehört leider nicht immer zu meinen Stärken wodurch ich mir auch manchen Rüffel meiner Mutter und meines Vaters einholte .Warum auch immer sie waren leider nicht meiner Ansicht dass ich schon ein grosser Krieger bin. dabei gab ich mir doch alle Mühe , kabbelte mich regelmässig mit meinen Geschwistern : übung muss ja sein , bekämpfe jedes Geröllstück mit grosser Ausdauer und auch kein Stein , Holz oder ich mags ja gar nicht laut sagen : `besuch` war vor mir sicher.

Naja Mama und Papa waren irgendwie nicht wirklich begeistert von meinen ausdauernden Übungen - kann ich gar nicht verstehn .

Mama sagte oft ich sei unberechenbar und habe nur blödsinn im Kopf . wie sie wohl auf sowas kommt .

Aber wie das so ist man wächst und wird älter und notwendiger weise auch etwas vernünftiger , ichlernte dass ich meine Geschwister nicht immer niederringen darf und auch der Besuchwar leider tabu . Und nein nein ich werde hier nicht zugeben dass ich leider nciht immer der Sieger war , oO nu hab ichs ja doch verraten

Aber durch meine Starrsinnigkeit in meinem erstreben endlich ein richtiger krieger zu werden gab mein Vater irgendwann endlich auf und zeigte mir die ersten richtigen Hiebe - aber nur unter abnahme des versprechens sie nciht bei meinen geschwistern auszuprobieren

Also suchte ich mir andere zum üben und wurde besser und zielsicherer .

Ich komme meinem Ziel näher das weiss ich genau - aber ich habe auch erkannt dass ich wohl doch noch einige Übung brauchen werde .

Aber eins weiss ich ganz genau :
ich werde ein grosser krieger !!!



3 things you know about WOI´s:
die WOI sind eine spezielle rasse - die in einem schönen aber gefährlichen Land gegen die Kronadors kämpfen um frieden zu erreichen.
Nur die Alpha tiere oder Customs dürfen mit genehmigung nachwuchs haben.
es ist nicht erlaubt Die Wois zu duplizieren oder auf anderen Seiten ausserhalb Cs ohne Erlaubnis zu benutzen.

ich habe mit absicht versucht in eigenen Worten einige Punkte zusammenzufassen - da ich nciht einfach kopieren wollte


Ich würde mcih sehr freuen den kleinen Adoptieren zu können

greetings Suryatha

edit : for the others who are judging

yeah i could also speak english , i asked the wolfsgirl if it is okay to write the story in german because its a lot easyer for me - to bring my little idea / story on paper - im always missing some words in english - thanks for the permission wolfsgirl

[TheSilverfeather]

Number of pup: 2
Name you choose for the pup: Regian (Regia means Royal in latin, which I thought suited him and then I added an -n to the end, just to make it more like a male name.)
Art of the pup you want (armor +1 point):
A quick headshot
Armour Sketch
Regian in Armour
With background
Flatcolor Without Armour

I will post more as soon as I finish them...
The third image is actually a lined version of the second, which shows the colors that I want for him and the changes I did for the armour. The fourth is a version of the thirs with a background, supposed to be a part of Isket...

A little story:
There was a lot of noises around Regian, sounds and excited squeals. He opened his eyes for the first time, looking around in the den that his family lived in. He blinked a few times, adjusting to the light that shone from the entrance of the den. Then he saw his family. Happily playing together, and had already managed to get up. his parents lying there, proudly watching their pups. He was lying beside them, smiling as he watched them play. Regian got up and stood there, his feet wobbly as he tried to walk over to his siblings. It was harder than he would have thought, and he tripped several times before he finally managed to stand up straight without any help. Pride swelled up inside him and he grinned, only to be knocked down by one of his siblings. He let out a play squeal and fought back as fiercly as he could, and the games continued until it became night.

The next morning Regian had wanted to go outside, but clearly hadn't been allowed. Now he was sitting in a corner, angered at his parents who wouldn't allow him to. They meant the world was too dangerous for a pup only a few days old. Shivering he looked at the light that came from outside the den. Maybe... Just maybe, he could sneak out? It was worth a try. Silently he stalked forward, making sure to pick the right moment when both his mother and father was looking away. Joy filled him as he came outside, and the fresh air ruffled his fur and the fresh scents of nature blew at him. Why has mother and father kept me away from this? he thought as he looked over the beautiful landscape. When he had memorized where the cave was he continued walking until he came to a clearing. Blueish, fresh grass was growing there, and the sky was darker than he had expected. Unknowingly of what danger he was in, he ran out onto the clearing and laid down there.

All out of sudden, a horrible creature appeared from the trees. It's face was like no other he had ever seen, and it was huge! Regian got up and backed, frightened of the large creature standing in front of him. He stood there, paralized by fear as the big creature neared, hissing like a snake. All out of sudden a group of Warriors leaped out and attacked the horrible creature, bringing it down to the ground and attacking it. Regian watched in horror, but soon enough the creature was chased away. One of the warriors, clearly a higher ranked Warrior of Isket stepped towards him while two others chased after the monster that he had just met. "You're Rayos and Sorayas pup, aren't you?" he asked. Regian nodded, amazed by the beautiful armour the Warrior had, with all it's details and gems. "That creature there, is dangerous. It's a chimera/kronador. They are our rivals, and would gladly have killed you if we hadn't turned up. Listen, I will follow you back to your home, and then I want you to stay there. Never go outside without permission or without your parents." he said. Regian nodded. "Y-yes, I will." he said silently and followed the Warrior back towards his home.

At the trip back he thought to himself; This was truly a lesson. These chimeras/kronadors, is my enemy. When I grow up, I will be the most powerful Warrior, and I will help beating them! Until then... I will just have to listen to my mother and father.

And so he did, as he never went outside again without asking for permission firstly.
This experience was the beginning of his fierce hate against the chimeras and Kronadors.

3 things you know about WOI´s:
- The Warriors of Isket (WOI) lives in a beutiful land, but fights against Kronadoras/chimeras which is a mix between reptile and horse. But neither side is strong enough to win against the other, which have made the fight go on for many years.
- Each WoI have their own, custom armour
- Rayo and Soraya are the Ultima Alfas/Chiefs of the WOIs


Hopefully I can make things more detailed etc. later, like the story + more images. For now I keep it this short, since I don't want to force you to read through a really long story. I have been following/stalking the WOIs for a while, but didn't find the right one... I adore this design though, so I will give a shot for it ^.^

Thank you for the chance!
~Silver

[Prism]

Number of pup: 1<333.

I chose for pup number 1, because as soon as I saw her, I was already thinking about what her armor looks like.
I just kepting looking at this beautiful design, it had mesmorize, as you could say. I don’t think I really looked that much at the others. If this were to be my first WOI I would be over the moon.
I don’t really care that she is a warrior of Isket right now, all I really care about is that, this form is as best I can do, so I win her. Her design is just so magnificent. Her blue eyes, glisten like the sea. Her white fur, as pure as can be. How the black and the goldish-beigish, colour just blend in, so simple, but so gorgeous. I have applied for a few WoI, but this one, I truly want to get!

If she becomes mine, you won’t regret it, I promise! She will have her own thread, her own ‘lil spotlight, her art, her story. Everything a virtual creature could get.
I don’t know what to say really. Just breathe-taking.

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Personality:
Adventurous:
Always up for an adventure, no matter how easy or scary it is, she will be there.

Curious:
Bakaraa is curious about everything. Her head is always full of questions. Why is the grass blue? Why is the water white? What is over there....

Tomboy:
Bakaraa is not an average girl. Most people think she was born into a female body. She acts like a boy, way more then a girl. Everyone if fine with it, some more than others.

Strong:
Mentally and phsically. She has a strong body structure. And a strong soul. Nothing can stop her.
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Dislikes:
Whimps & Crybabies:
They just bring her down. She absolutly hates being around them. But she has to live with it, especially how one of her siblings are one.

Being told what to do:
Yeah, unless you aren't her mum or her dad, she would just probaly tell you to cork it.

Lovey Dovey stuff
Makes her puke. She told her self she would be a warrior, never fall in love and have cubs. But who knows? It might change as she gets older... and possibly wiser.

Vegetables:
Yes, like most little creatures, she hates 'em. But she is forced to eat them, with the war going on.
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Likes:

Exploring:
Exploring is Bakarra's life, she claims. Some times she brings little pieces of objects she finds during her adventures.

Meat:
She craves meat whenever she is hungry. But it is not safe to hunt for it. Sometimes she goes to hunt by herself...

Fights:
She loves seeing her papa fighting, or any other warrior fight the 'bad guys' she says. She just wants to grow up to be like her father. Not like her mother, who looks after little cubs.

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Name you choose for the pup:
Bakarra

Pronounced:
Bark-ar-ra

Origin of name:
It means Unique in a different language. {Basque I think, I am not sure though, since it was google translater, so I will study further into that if I win}

Why I chose the name:
Well, I chose Bakarra
because I wanted to name my first WOI, and exotic and unusal name. It might be a bit cleche how I picked it, but it doesn't matter to me, since it s unique to mine in different ways.

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Art of the pup you want (armor +1 point):

Art piece ~....What is over there?
Art Piece 2 ~ Nothing in my way.
Art Piece 3 ~Which way now?
Armor Concept.
Bakarra armor is a steampunk themed, with a little difference. I am not sure this is the final armor, I may need to do some tweaks. But it will somewhat resemble steampunk.

ARMOR INFO:
Bakarra's armor is made from different materials.

Her belts: Are made from the lightest leather to be found.
Her clock: Made out of titanium, gold and Diamonds. The clear material on it, is not glass, but is diamonds. The clock on the armor, actually works. And no-one really knows how...
Metal Parts: It is yet to be known what metal it actually is. But it is described to be a bluish-silver colour.
Cloth: Her cloths are translucent silk pieces.

The roman numerals on her tail armor, and engraved, but do slightly glow. No-one really knows how, but it does.

Defense:
Bakarra's armor has no pointy bits, or spikes, so it is impossible for her enemies to use it against her. She has not got a helmet which can distract her from attacking, but makes her head vunerable for attacks, but with her great eye sight, she can see attacks like this, coming a mile away!

Attacks:
Her armor does not block vital attack points like her strong tail. Her claws are open for balance and deadly scratch. Her chest plate also inforces extra force into a body slam, if she ever wants to crush someone against the floor.

{Armor is subject to change, but not majorly}

It took bakarra 3 days to find her armor, but when she did, she was one of the most beautiful warriors with AND without her armor.
Her

PS: I have included a chest plate, and a back one. It may not look like it on there. The green lines are also belts which tie the armor together.

Bakarra chose quite complicated armor for herself, she wanted something to match her unique and strong personality. It was hard for her to pick, but when she came to a decision, she had no regrets!
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A little story:

‘Papa, PAPA!’
‘Yes, my daughter?’
‘Where are you going papa, I thought you were going to play with me and my siblings?’
‘Not today hun, I am sorry, I have to go to war. As soon as I come back I will play with you, I promise!’
‘Okay Papa, but what is war?’
‘Well, war is something is wrong, or someone. And people fight for what they believe in. It is hard to explain, you will understand when you get older.’
With that, Rayo ran to catch up with the warriors, as his daughter, Bakarra
, whilst he pondered about what his father had said to him.
As everyone in the cave, gathered for an evening meal, still Bakarra
was wondering what his father had said.
‘Mama, when will papa be back?’
‘I dunno, hun, I dunno.’
‘Okay mama, I can’t wait till papa is back’ As he said when he started his meal.
A few minutes later...
‘I finished mama, so has everyone, can I go wondering around the cave, mama?’
‘Erm, okay. But be back before the sun reaches the line of the earth.’
‘Okay mama, I will.’ As he ran off. ‘I love you, everyone.
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As Bakarra went deeper into the caves, she saw many warriors fleeing or heading towards a certain tunnel. She wasn’t scared one bit. She kept on walking into that direction, until she saw a light and stopped.
‘Where are you going, Bakarra?’
‘I dunno, somewhere? Wait, who are you?’
I turned around and noticed my sister.
‘You do know it is not safe to wonder around by yourself. What if a kronadors were to get you? Hm? What would you do then?’
‘I dunno. I would fight them? Why do you care? Your just my know it all, older sister. Your not even that older then me. Bug off!’
‘Fight them? You haven’t even got your armor. Why do I care? Why shouldn’t I care? You are my little sister, it basically part of my job to look after you and our other siblings. I don’t know everything. I just want to be safe and logical. Which you aren’t being right now.’
Bakarra was quiet for a while. Thinking what her sister had just said to her.
‘I don’t want to go back.’
‘No one said you had to turn back now, I only came to make sure you were safe.... Hey, why don’t we go together?
‘Fine, but when it comes to fighting, it will be my job!’
The both giggled as they went into the into the tunnel with the light within it.....

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3Things you know about WOI´s:

They're all beutiful.
Joking... =D

1)There are 4 types of Warriors Of Isket.

• Big Wolf with folded ears and a long fluffy tail.
• Big wolf with normal long ears and a long tail.
• Big wolf with noraml ears and a normal (round ended) tail
• Big wolf with short ears and a curled tail.

2)Warrior of Iskets live in a beautiful land, without peace which they fight for.

3)It usually takes 3 novice warriors to defeat a kronador but takes 1 experienced warrior to take down a kronador by itself.

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Thank you so much TheWolfsGirl90, for letting me/us adopt pups of from your creation! And thank you the whole Warrior of Isket judging panel for taking my form into consideration.

~тιpнz

Story & Art (C) Me {тιpнz}
WOI (c) TWG, Neara, Lillian Nightshade & Uoneko.
Designs & Characters (c) TWG


EDIT 1: Grammer check {English is not my home language}
EDIT 2: Added more art.
EDIT 3: Added Copyright.
EDIT 4 & 5: Added more details about armor concept.

[OceanBlast]

I'd love to get a WOI pup but I have no skill =(

[Alaska.]

Number of pup you want: Pup #2 (this pup really caught my eye I was mesmerized by him)
Name you chose for your pup: Kyo (meaning approval) ( pronounced (KEE oh)
Art of pup you want (armor *1 point): [sketch of armor]
[without armor]
[with armor]
A short story:
Kyo awoke and opened his eyes. He looked around. He smelled his brothers and sisters and saw his mother and father who were looking gently upon him. At this moment he was very happy and couldn't think of a time he was happier.

Kyo was a very brave and strong pup much like his parents. He was also very smart. When he was only a few months old he could already catch mice sometimes he caught a rabbit. This always made his father proud. Kyo was also the best at play fighting. He would always be the first to pin the other pup to the ground. He always loved being the center of attention. He was also great at howling, but not the best, one of his brothers was better.

On a bright sunny spring day the family went out on a hunting trip to teach the pups how to hunt properly. Kyo wasn't paying any attention and wandered into the forest. He was sniffing around when he realized he was lost. He didn't even see any light that might lead him to the clearing that his family was in. He walked around in circles for what seemed like hours. He tried to track where he had come in but he just couldn't find the scent. There was another scent that was bothering him...But he just couldn't identify it...He got worried

He started howling to his parents hoping that they would hear. He then started jumping up and down hoping that they would see his gray pelt. But what was the use? He was a gray wolf in a gray forest. He started howling again. Then he stopped abruptly. He heard rustling. He wheeled around trying to find where it was coming from. Then out from behind a tree came a huge Kronador.

Their eyes met for a split second. Then as is a huge wind came and blew Kyo away he was gone. He was going so fast that he couldn't even see his own paws. The Kronador lunged and almost got hold of Kyo's tail, but Kyo was too fast for it. He raced through the forest. He didn't know where he was going but he didn't care As long as its not here... He searched and searched for anything that would lead him away and out of this forest.

He saw a light! Oh, how overjoyed he was! He barreled for it. Finally he burst through the trees and was entranced by a beautiful waterfall that seemed to flow with as much grace as air. His trance was broken with a change of wind that carried his mother's scent. His senses took over and he lifted his head high and pointed his nose into the breeze. Soon he came to his mother but there was a raging river that he would have to cross.

He started barking and howling for her attention. Luckily this worked and and when Soraya turned around she almost collapsed with joy. She then howled to her mate to come as quickly as possible. He came and when he did Sorayas told him what had happened and how their son was trapped across the river. Soon Rayo was leaping into the water. He got to the other side and dragged Kyo back across to the opposite shore.

Later that day all of the other pups were asleep except for Kyo. Right as he was about to fall asleep he over heard his parents talking. They were talking about how they should have been there for Kyo and how they were lucky he wasn't hurt. Kyo felt bad that he hadn't listened to his parents and vowed to himself to never do something like this ever again.


Alright here we go I am ready Kyo thinks to himself as he and many other wolves go to the sacred cave where the armor is located. He is anxious to see what armor he will receve. He will soon become a fully fledged Warrior of Isket. Right before he left his den his mother and father looked upon him with proud eyes and bid him farewell. "I'll be fine" he told them seeing the look of worry in their eyes. "Just don't go wandering off again." Soraya chuckled. Kyo laughed. "I won't."

It was a long trekk up to the cave that took many nights. This never dulled the fire in Kyo's heart. He was ready for anything. A Kronador could jump out of the bushes and stick it's tongue out at him and it wouln't faze him. He was ready to take on the world.

Once in the cave he receved his armor. It fits him just right and it makes him look bigger than he already was, but it was also light and durable. He glanced around at the other wolves receving their armor. He saw the looks ont their faces: determination and loyalty. Then they begin the trip back. As the wolves walk back Kyo walks by a few girls. He turns his head to them and they giggle and swish their tails. He quickly turns his head away. Err... Did they think I was cute? Kyo shook his head and pelt.

He arrives back in his den late night. Surprisingly his parents are still awake. They must have known he would be back today. They greet him with affectionate licks. He licks them back. "You look so handsome!" Soraya whispers gently. A tear fills her eye. "I'm so proud of you!" she says. "Yes, I am too." Rayo says with a smile. "Oh lets stop bothering him its late and he needs his rest." Said Soraya. Then the family laid down and were soon all asleep.


Three things you know about W.o.I: 1. The Warriors of Iskets' goal is to creat peace on in the land of Isket

2. The wolves live in a complex system of tunnels and passageways

3. The armor which they wear is around 8,000 years old and was created by humans which are now extinct. The armor is located in a cave that only the W.o.I know about.

Thank you for the chance even though I know I wont win. I completely ran out of time. (Ha Ha that last paragraph is so cheezy sorry)

[shibuki]

I saw that you cannot use linearts for your art, and I have a question.

May I use one just for the armour concept if I have my own drawings also?

[ThePalePrince]

Number of pup: 2
Name you choose for the pup: Hiram
Art of the pup you want (armor +1 point):http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=34&t=590019
A little story: It was early, the sky was steel grey and the red rocks were so dark that they were almost silhouettes. Hiram lay in the entrance to the den. He loved these early mornings, they were so peaceful. He closed his eyes and raised his head to sniff the air. Suddenly, he stiffened in alarm. there was a strange scent on the breeze. Hiram perked his ears up. He heard a soft growl. Staying low to the ground, he slunk back into the shadows of the den. The moment he was inside, he ran. He'd only glimpsed it for a moment, but there was no doubt. The creature outside was a Kronador. He ran through the den, calling the alarm. Several armored warriors that Hiram didn't know rushed outside to meet the Kronador in battle...(ending it here, hope its long enough)
3 things you know about WOI´s: There are four different types
Young warriors must go through an arduous journey to get their armor
Kronadors are reptile/horse hybrids.
(wasn't sure what to put for those, sorry if it's too simplistic.)

[tennisbutt]

Daww, I really hoped I could get one xD
But these look really awesome <3 Lovely pups TWG ^^

[shibuki]

Well, I'm done!

Good luck everyone!