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Re: Kalons #1796 & #1797: The Sand and The Sea

Postby deerbroken » Mon Mar 01, 2021 10:26 am

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      for a moment, the desert held its breath.
      khali stood, for the first time, motionless - had his body contained a single drop of water, he was certain he'd have cried.
      before him, the latest mirage, the latest temptation at his weary soul, had grown closer, closer. now, he stood within its reach, and it hadn't fallen away. beyond his wildest dreams, the oasis was no mirage. it was real. water glistened against burning sunlight, but shadows cast inward from large, sloping trees. he felt himself shudder, shaking off a coat of dust as even the lashing winds of the open desert had fallen still. so overcome by the realization of hope, he almost missed the face of the stranger staring back.


      Unaware of the approaching stranger, Medi had taken to the water in the oasis, a refuge from the harsh intensity of the desert sun. Though they’d managed to get further than they had before into the empty wastes, they could go no further past this point, and even then their skin felt as if it had been scorched in flame. The cool water in the oasis did well enough to calm the fire, though, and without a second thought they dove into the clear blue pool, emerging on the other side only to notice a strange face nearing the edge. They folded their arms on a rock against the shore of the pool, their head tilting as they watched the stranger, curiosity and caution both present in their glance.

      one step. khali's feet slid along the sands as innocent grains dipped away into icy blue. a hand reached out to the stranger, mouth opening but lost for words. he wanted so badly to take their hand, to plunge into the pool and be free of this aching misery.
      another. his foot toiled forward, toes sinking so suddenly into the pool he cried out in agony, falling and - for the first time - moving with ferocity backwards, scrambling from the oasis in an unexpected wave of fear. the water, like needles, bit at his skin as even the desert sand never could. it came with such violent shock he found his breath heavy, eyes turning wildly to the figure almost submerged in its pristine surface...
      "who are you?" he cried.
      that was the beginning.


      Medi reaches out to take his hand, their eyes wide and shimmering with the light reflected from the water beneath them. As the other slipped, however, made a pained sound and pushed away from the pool, they seemed confused, retracting their arms back into the water as they watched. Perhaps they had the same affliction? Or something much different… They couldn’t fathom it, but stare on, regardless.

      “My name is Medi,” they offer, soft-spoken as they move, hoisting themself from the pool to sit on the edge, their feet still dangling within the murk. Concerned for the stranger’s health, they raise their brow, fiddling with their hands that had only just touched the other’s. “Are you okay?”


      “yes, i... think so. i’m khali.” slowly returning to the pool’s edge, khali adorned his face with harsh droplets and savored the foreign sensation, the company of the foreigner. though the water cut like blades, the feeling was so fresh - so unlike all he’d ever known. he felt an ache inside him - the water wore away at his very being. but in this moment, he couldn’t possibly care. the arc of the sun turned over the odd pair, and with time came trust - woven stories of faraway lands from medi’s soft smile mingled with khali’s borrowed memories of the desert travelers, stories the desert had shared with him exchanged for the tales of the adventurer. medi’s bright eyes pulled the empty space in khali’s heart. if before, the oasis had held hope, it was overtaken now by new adoration, this new nectar. medi grew in khali’s eyes brighter than the desert, deeper than the ripples of the pool. the night spun on with such incredible tales, he wished it might never end. as khali watched medi’s chest rise and fall in gentle slumber, he felt a sickening burn he knew well. without a word, the desert spirit stood, and sauntered off into the sands. hope. that horrible crushing poison. so badly he wanted it, but he saw how the desert wore on medi, how the water wore on himself. maybe someday he would return to find them there. if he could bear the heartache if they weren’t.

      They tell their own tales at first as they sit alongside the desert spirit, speaking of the strange places they’ve been, of stone-walled fortresses and of towns nestled in valleys, of farmhouses in the plains and of bridges built over raging waterfalls. When their newfound companion begins to tell his own stories, they listen intently, eyes wide as they hang on every word. The air feels comfortable, after long enough time passes, and Medi finds themself yawning unexpectedly, covering their mouth for a moment with an apology on their lips for the sudden wave of tiredness washing over them. They offer to meet with Khali again, perhaps trying to find some kind of way for them to travel together, but it seems hopeless. “We could always try meeting here,” they try to offer, but Khali seems reluctant. Still, they hope to see him again, and mention it in a soft voice before they allow themselves to sleep.

      And Medi would return again. But as much as they hoped and dreamed to see the desert spirit, their paths never seemed to align. Sometimes Medi convinced themselves that it was simply a mirage, a delusion caused by the sweltering heat to pass the time while they chose their next steps at the oasis. They refused to believe it, though, and every few months they found themself at the clearing by the edge of the desert, sitting by the water’s edge in hopes that a certain figure might pass them by again.


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Re: Kalons #1796 & #1797: The Sand and The Sea

Postby 76heart » Mon Mar 01, 2021 5:54 pm

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How glorious it must be, to be able to move wherever he wished, to not be forced to abide by the whims of an ocean that had never allowed her to make a choice. How delightful it had to be to be able to create, to design, to craft, to shape, to make, and not spend a thousand lifetimes fixing the broken pieces of another's creation.

He had choices, and she had never had one. After so long she couldn't help but let her envy grow, grow like the reeds of her seas, like the roots that tethered her to a land she wished to leave whenever she tried to escape. She wished to go to the red desert sands, to those infernal dunes that taunted her in her dreams as he did whenever a new city took shape.

Centuries ago, or however long it had been for she was too old to remember, but too young to forget, she had seen the desert form, when the ocean fell away and a soul created a new world in its place. From her pad of soft lilies she had watched him create cities, and dunes, and a land of his own with glee, when there was too a smile upon her lips. She had seen the joy he felt in forming a world when she was able to drift close, and had tried to change her own, but as soon as she raised the water with her own magic with a lift of her careful, then innocent hand, it fell back to the surface, rocking to find where it once had been after her cruel displacement. She had never been placed there to create as he had, she had been placed, and formed by the waters, to nurture the seas, and protect them. The waters would take her where she needed to go, and she was to follow, and never fight the current.

Once, she had been happy to do that, but as the years wore on and she had been swept through all of her seas a thousand times, she wished she could change her world like him.

She could see in the distance, sand forming and changing, and then falling apart. She watched as they shifted over time, into something new, or to somewhere else as they faded and went further and further away, and as she watched, Melusine wished she could do the same. She wished instead of allowing moss to grow on driftwood floating across her path, she could sprout it into a tree.

He taunted her without knowing, and how could he know? When they had known each other, they had been rivals, playing a game, both proud of their domains. It had been fun then, a competition unspoken but there all the same, but now he didn't remember; she could see his memories falling away as the cities he once raised sunk into the sands. He was losing himself in his own creation, and the spark that he had begun it with, and his memories could only go with it.


He was drowning in this world, in what he had built. He could not recall why he had made this world, or what was over the horizon where the sands turned silver that drew him so. He only felt he once had, for there had to be a reason they were there, like there had to be a reason he was still here, forming steps thoughtlessly as he struggled to climb.

No memories came from anywhere he looked, he was only beckoned by a deep azure blue as he drowned in what he had made, the sand threatening to swallow him whole.

He drifted, falling through dunes, collapsing in the sand and ending up on the other side, his magic sinking him and parting the grains as he went without an ounce of his own control. He had lost his grip on all around him, like he had lost the bright spark for each aspect formed by his hands.

The sand continued pulling him, closing and surrounding him and scattering again, creating steps as he walked, until one day, when he truly opened his eyes, he saw the gold had changed to silver, and there was water lapping at his feet.

"Didn't you have a looming stairwell of craggy stone there, once?"

A voice reached him, and he saw another, another like him, someone he couldn't help but feel he once knew, as he felt he had once possessed the memory of such a stairwell, too.

She watched him, cooly, unblinking, unsurprised by the lack of recollection on his face.

"You liked to be close to the sun, high enough to sea it rise from the other side. I quite liked the way it looked, but it's long buried now."

He squinted, trying to recall it, and he almost could, and then behind him, the sand began to part, revealing the tip of a well worn rock, and suddenly, he could feel the warmth of the sun again. A true, kind warmth, not the burning an harsh warm he had come to know. He closed his eyes, basking in a feeling long lost and now regained, but had to open them as he stumbled, startled, the sand beneath him shifting as the column rose.

A chuckle then reached his ears, and he shot her an indignant glance, a glance that felt foreign, and yet familiar.

He started to remember again, remember what had once been there, the spark that once had been.

The more they found each other where the sand met the sea, the more he remembered, the more that returned, and the more she felt whole again, and felt the love she had lost creep back.

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for our extra, i made a set of dice themed around them. two sea, two sand, a drop of sea in the sand, a drop of sand in the sea, and a mix. i was hoping the red would show up more in the sand dice, but it at least showed up in the sea with a drop of sand one, which you can see somewhat in the middle picture on the left. the mix one (middle picture on the right) has a really cool effect of the sand part having sunk into the blue, like sand in an ocean, which my camera did not want to capture nicely so you can only kind of see it in the greenish orange parts of that one
i just started making dice and even with doing them right away after my first set, it's super cold where i am and the resin is not yet ready for polishing (+ inking), so i'm sorry for that! hopefully this extra is also okay <3

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Re: Kalons #1796 & #1797: The Sand and The Sea

Postby shortstop » Tue Mar 02, 2021 2:00 am

disclaimer;; however this form is left when this ends, it should be considered finished c:


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it started out similar enough. two siblings and a childhood fraught with danger, as desertification threatened to destroy their home. filled with imagination and hope that only innocent youth could bring, the two made a promise. no matter what it took, they would work as hard as they could to put an end to environmental exploitation. they would save their home, and the rest of the world alongside it.
but happy endings only exist in children’s books.
“let’s drive people away,” said selki. “nothing can be destroyed if we just keep people out.”
“no; we should work with people and teach them,” amenemsou countered. “nothing is gained through conflict.”
the rift grew slowly, like a flow of water cutting through rock. by the time they were adults, it had become as wide as a canyon. they parted ways without a word to each other, each set on saving the world in their own way. but the connection is there. the tide and the sand can never really be separated.
so they sit at night, and stare out over their homes, and they think to themselves:
“am i doing the right thing?”
we do the best we can with what we have
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Re: Kalons #1796 & #1797: The Sand and The Sea

Postby hiraeth + hound » Tue Mar 02, 2021 5:00 am

        this is now closed! any edits made past this message or new forms posted will not count ! thank you to everyone who entered, i'll get these judged asap!
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Re: Kalons #1796 & #1797: The Sand and The Sea

Postby altiora » Tue Mar 02, 2021 5:48 am

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art for the winners, if they want it. b&w, cleaner version. please credit altiores on instagram if you use (or altiores on toyhouse), thanks!


good luck everyone!!! 💙


things didn't pan out for me, but if anyone is interested in reading my writing, here you go! i dont expect anyone will, but i hate the idea of it just rotting unseen in my files, i enjoyed writing it <3
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Re: Kalons #1796 & #1797: The Sand and The Sea

Postby KestrelTheFirecat » Tue Mar 02, 2021 5:49 am

Good luck
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Re: Kalons #1796 & #1797: The Sand and The Sea

Postby hiraeth + hound » Thu Apr 08, 2021 3:18 am

        hello everyone, sorry for the wait!

        after re-reading the forms and getting another opinion, ive decided the winners are..
        Marsh & Mid-life!

        congrats! two of the other forms were pretty strong competition I will admit, but I loved how I really got a feel for their individual personalities in your forms. thank you everyone for participating!
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Postby home » Thu Apr 08, 2021 9:01 am

    congrats marsh & mid-life ! \o/ your entry was amazing to read through, and good job to everyone else who entered :]
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Re: Kalons #1796 & #1797: The Sand and The Sea

Postby Mid-life » Thu Apr 08, 2021 11:28 am

    Oh my goodness! Thank you so much ♡
mostly inactive. i've grown out of CS, however, it will always be part of my story and i will always carry fond memories of this site. I have tried many times in recent to become active again, but it has been difficult to find that imaginative and childish spark I once had visiting this site. i wish everyone well and hope that you find fruitfulness on and off of CS <3 thank you for the wonderful 11 years, ciao!
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Re: Kalons #1796 & #1797: The Sand and The Sea

Postby FluffyBirdie » Thu Apr 08, 2021 2:06 pm

Congrats you two! Your forms were really engaging to read.

I do intend on re-using my art for another character, so please don't use it! You're welcome to use the banners/headers if you wish. c:
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