Pound of Hope [CLOSED PERMANENTLY]

[! october]

I need to move the results from last round over to the success stories thread before I can start judging, so you all still have a little time before the round is closed. ~ c:

[corgie]

*phew*

Thanks Octo. I'm actually for once very happy with my form, is my font to light for you? I can easily change it if you'd like. ^_^

Gosh this week went fast xD

[Lirrie]

Shoot types faster >.> octo coud you give me till 10 ^.^; i had to go eat so i didnt have time to edit

[corgie]

Join me on chat?

*works on form more*

Could I have critique on my form so far? *goes to get form*

I'd like some critique!
Username: Dime
Number of character you're applying for: P9
Link to form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=341528&p=13207173#p13207173
Would you like critique through PM, or another way?: PM please (:
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[Make Me A Dream]

I feel like I am going to lose this time. I have to go against 4 other people.

[corgie]

I feel like I am going to lose this time. I have to go against 4 other people.

Don't get downed /likeme

You can always win, theirs always a possiblity. I won against 4 people once, just believe inyourself (:

I added the critique form to my other post btw.

[Africa.]

Octo, could you possibly hold on P9 please? I'm horribly sorry <\3 We had to go visit relatives for the day and I couldn't find much time :C
I'd really appreciate it <3

EDIT: Alright, well, at least its suitable now, so its fine to be judged as it is, if I can't get some detail in before judging

[crazy cranky critter]

Not even sure if forms are still open... I will keep editing this until someone tells me they are closed, so yep. Hopefully I aren't being a huge pain.

I am looking to adopt...
Kennel: P9

Name: Amalia
Meaning: Comes from the sanskrit word
'Amala' meaning 'pure'

Full Name: Amalia Fauna Fellowes
Nick Names: Ami, Fella, Lia.

Gender: Female
Mental Gender: Rather feminine
Age: Seventeen
Physical Age: About the same
Mental Age: Both young and happy
and old and motherly

Breed: Quater horse X Paint
with some arabian [hence slightly
dished face]

Height: 1.68m
Weight: 52kg

Build:
Thin upper half
Curved waist
Wider Hips

Hair:
Colour - Blonde
Texture - Silky and flowing

Fur:
Colour - Black and light grey
Texture - Like that of a normal horse

Wings:
Colour - Green
Texture - Downy

Markings:
Black snip on nose
Small grey spots that look similar to freckles

Behavorial:
Social - Very
Predictable - Mostly

Accessories:
Ponamu [limestone] band around braid
Any earthen colour clothing [usually green]
Wood Pigeon feather

Fashion:
Natural looking or tribal type things

Voice:
Similar to Barbie's only a teeny bit deeper
Vision: Colour
Hearing: Very sensitive

Intelligence: Average

Hobbies:
Surfing
Preparing Food and Drinks

Hopes for future:
To have well behaved, lovely children
To find out where she came from

Philosophies:
Everyone deserves a chance
Everyone is beautiful as they are

Diet: Vegetarian

Favourite:
Colour - Green
Age - Eight
Word - Flow
Season - Summer
Animal - Lemur
Insect - Dragon fly
Food - Coconut
Drink - Coconut milk
Genre - Romance

Least Favourite:
Colour - Bright reds and oranges
Age - Fourties
Word - rake
Season - Winter
Animal - doesn't have one
Insect - Cockroach
Food - Any meat
Drink - Anything Alcoholic
Genre - Horror

Why I want to Adopt:
Ever since the very day it was put up [no exaggeration] I have always seen this design, and wanted it. But to be completely honest I could not pluck a personality to write about from the original piece. And also to be honest despite how much I loved the design I don't feel comfortable around naked anthros at all. I was thrilled when Spotty revamped this, it really put life into this poor little equine who has been over looked for so long. She is so very cute with her new revamp that I have finally clicked with her after literally hours of ums and ahs over whether or not to adopt. I am totally in love with the smiling face and the almost freckle like spots on her. I honestly want to know this character and have fun with her. Anyway, what ever happens to her I hope she gets a good home and that she is truley loved at last.

What I will do for Amalia:
Oh gosh, there are really so many things someone can do with something like this. I couldn't actually tell you exactly what I will do. I think I would try to break the boring 'order art, role play and write about' kind of thing that it seems people just put for lack of better thoughts. I will use her in any way I possibly can. I would quite like to make a clay model of her head just to brush up my dusty skills. I can see her on my art folder. I would even love a tatoo of her [that is if I were the sort of person who got tatoos, which I aren't]. Amalia seems to be a brave and bold girl so I think I would have to use her in as many different ways as possible for her to be used how she deserves.

Personality:
Motherly - Amalia will watch over anyone like a mother, she hates seeing poeople left alone or hurt.
Helpful - If there is a problem Amalia will help
Annoying - At times Amalia can actually be very annoying because she almost forces her help upon you
Attention Seeking - She isn't stuck up but she will always try to join in activities and fun stuff
Lonely - Amalia constantly feels lonely

Amalia wishes only to be good, but with every light comes dark. She will try to force her help upon you, even when you don't want it. She will also get very upset and moody if you don't enjoy her help. So really she can be hard to be around at times, but other times she is fine. She also like to give people advice, even if they don't want it.

Likes:
Incense - Amalia loves the scent of stuff burning a lovely smell into the air
Flowing Words - She likes to say things that roll of the tongue
Stableness - Amalia needs a stable home, friendship and routine to feel safe.
Candles - Amalia loves watching gentle little flames and often gets somewhat hypnotised by flames.

Dislikes:
Arguments - Particularly people who discuss things like religion which of course everyone will disagree on
People who won't take her help - Amalia takes this as an offence.

Story:
Amalia woke up and stretched. It was a lovely morning and the sea breeze played with her soft flowing mane. She stretched her arms and wings in unison and got up. Amalia enjoyed her life on the small tropical island, there were plenty of other animals to help and talk to when she got lonely. She hopped out of her leafy green hammck and yawned. She had heard that later that afternoon some of the animals were going to gather coconuts, so she thought she better go along and help them.

"Good morning Amalia!" A gull called from up in the sky and she strode out onto the beach. Amalia smiled. She was glad that the animals of the island liked her and the help she gave them. Clearing all the sharp shells from a patch of sand she lay down and fell asleep. She was truely beautiful and everyone on the island loved her. Amalias mane was a flowing blonde wave and her eyes were bright sparks that made anyone who saw them feel alive.

Later in the day Amalia woke up, and looking out over the dancing seas she wondered where she had come from. Amalia didn't like to ponder over her past but some times she would find herself thinking about it any way. She couldn't remember anything, just waking up on this island one day. This permanently saddened her, she wished she knew who her parents were and how she had got there. Perhaps this had also affected her personality. She always tried to act as a mother for people, telling them what was good for them and making sure they felt loved. She also couldn't stand being left out, maybe for fear of getting lost again and winding up some where else. After a while she came out of her day dream and went for a stroll down the beach. She didn't walk too far because she never liked being away from her home without others around her.

[! october]

This round is now closed, please refrain from posting any more forms. ~

[Apologies for the delay, my parents insisted upon spending the day visiting art museums and such. ^^;]

[corgie]

Anyone care to join me on chat?
~Dime