Here, mrsbieber. I'll give you a demo of an acceptable form. :3 Maybe it'll help you out. The deal is, though, you can use my form, kay?
Gwen: Not that I know of. ^.^
FOR DEMO PURPOSES ONLY
Name: Stained Paint (Stained)
Species: Demonic Fox
Kennel Number: 6
Why would you like this character/What will you do for this character?:
I would love this character because I feel like he fits my story perfectly. The moment I saw him, I started developing a story for his amazing design, and, though this, he gained a life of his own in my mind.
If I were to be able to adopt him, he would be added to my novel storyline, be written about, and have art drawn of him whenever I can either afford it or when I'm able to.
Personality:
Stained is a very solemn fox, quiet and thoughtful, traits that most believe make him quite unintelligent. But he didn't become strategist for Eyktan's troops for nothing. He's quite cunning and sharp, and it shows in his plans. He is very no nonsense; he'll develop those plans, and, come hell or high water, they better be done.
History:
I don't remember my birth, for I was not born a mortal like the other creatures. I was born into the divine realm with the gods, there to protect the major players in the pantheon. But I fell. I betrayed their trust in one fell swoop. But it doesn't matter now. Now I have joined my leader. And he will take care of me.
He brought me into this fold. He made me into the leader of thousands, sending them to their demise. But it was all for the cause. Their bloodshed was our victories. It was all for the cause.
But we weren't expecting the tiger. That damned tiger. I knew she was there, hiding somewhere in the world, and I knew she would eventually cause Eyktan's demise. But I wasn't expecting the army she had amassed. It seemed I was one plan short. I had failed to expect the expected, and we all suffered for it.
But, it was all for the cause, wasn't it?
Wasn't it?
Other: DEMO FORM. Sorry it's so terrible. XD