Mure's Contest [Kalon Readopt]

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My kalon : Forum/viewtopic.php?f=32&t=4033908 (Keys)

Hi, my name is Keys. This is a story about the time I met Averie, who later became my best friend. Our friendship began one evening...

I heard a clunk behind me as I walked into the corner store. It was dark, I'd say around 1 am. I turned around, staring into the dark alley, but not seeing anything. Hmm... what was that? I heard a yelp and ran out of the store, looking for the kalon who had made such a noise. What on earth is going on? There was a small looming shadow, of a kalon with a fluffy body. It was no larger than an average house cat. Two bright blue stripes illuminated from the tail of the creature, signaling it was indeed a kalon. Confused, I crept toward the shadow, careful to hide my tail to be as sneaky as possible.

"Stop" squeaked a voice that could have easily been mistaken for a rat. The kalon fled, the sound of paws hitting asphalt echoing in the alley. I followed.

I asked, "Why are you running?", barely able to catch up to the speedy kalon. I stopped and took a breath, the suspicious kalon out of sight. I went home.

I wish it was that exciting, but the story didn’t go like that. What really happened was….

I walked home one autumn evening, exhausted from a day of fun. I couldn’t wait to grab a tub of mint chocolate chip ice cream and watch Youtube. Opening my fridge, I felt a gush of cold refreshing air. I moved all my half-eaten tubs aside, looking for a mint chocolate chip.
“I’m could’ve sworn I bought a tub yesterday” I muttered and grabbed a tub of strawberry. I thought, “Whoever must’ve stolen my ice cream sure has good taste”.

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mark with my kiddo natalie and art class who dun' it

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This contest has been extended to the 21st!

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This contest ends tomorrow!

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Closed for judging! <3

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The results are in! I loved this story, it made me chuckle a few times and I couldn't help but smile the entire time I read it. I loved the character concept and seeing how a friendship could form between these two kalons. With that I have decided that the winner is:


SilhouetteStation


Congratulations! Your story was simply adorable and I loved every part of it!

[SilhouetteStation]

ah thank you so much!! I had so much fun developing his character, and I'm happy that you enjoyed the story <3

also big thank you for having these readopts! it's very generous of you, and I really appreciate it ^^