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Distant Hills by September Rain

Artist September Rain [gallery]
Time spent 28 minutes
Drawing sessions 1
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Distant Hills

Postby September Rain » Tue Jan 29, 2019 3:19 am

Landscape practice c:

Tips, comments, and likes are wanted and appreciated! Enjoy!
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Re: Distant Hills

Postby September Rain » Tue Jan 29, 2019 3:54 pm

Bump
    If love's elastic, then were
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    Is it buried treasure, or
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Re: Distant Hills

Postby JerseyDusk » Wed Jan 30, 2019 10:01 am

I love how simple yet detailed this piece is! You have a great knack for selecting pleasing colors!

My main suggestion would be to work on pushing the element of depth in a piece like this. If I could feel like the water is flowing meters away towards the hills, then this work would feel much more advanced and complete. I know that the style you have here shows shading in a unique way but I think if you added some darker colors for shading you'd have a much deeper piece of artwork!
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Re: Distant Hills

Postby September Rain » Wed Jan 30, 2019 11:49 am

JerseyDusk wrote:
I love how simple yet detailed this piece is! You have a great knack for selecting pleasing colors!

My main suggestion would be to work on pushing the element of depth in a piece like this. If I could feel like the water is flowing meters away towards the hills, then this work would feel much more advanced and complete. I know that the style you have here shows shading in a unique way but I think if you added some darker colors for shading you'd have a much deeper piece of artwork!


Thank you so much! I definitely will try to do that in the future c:
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    just a single puzzle piece?
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