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Entry #1

Postby Yellow. » Tue Nov 06, 2018 3:42 am

A bay Keakota
Geno
Ss / Em / Tˢt / DP / IS / ms / iw / WM / pb / Rg / RRᵃ / La / HH / St


Time is definitely off as I left it up on my laptop, but here's my first entry. Please let me know if anything is wrong with the geno, this guys a little bit simple to make sure I had the geno figured out, will have the other two up in a bit.
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Did you forget me so soon?
The one who made you,
turned you into this monster?
How sad.

Though I guess it's to be expected,
you always liked to block things out.
If it didn't make sense in your mind,
you just forgot about it.

But maybe it's because I didn't,
make you into a monster that is.
You already were a monster,
weren't you?

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Re: Entry #1

Postby eleutheromania » Fri Nov 16, 2018 2:13 am

alright. some tips i would say for your entries is to make the patterns smoother and less sharp if possible. try to keep away from the scatter tool unless for small touch ups. for the one with the white, distribute the white better and those horizon stripes aren’t very noticeable as stripes with how it’s implemented. i would like to see more from you to see some improvement.
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Re: Entry #1

Postby Yellow. » Fri Nov 16, 2018 2:50 am

Thank you for the feedback, after doing this I realized I should have messed around with the Oekaki on here again because it's been over five years since I've done anything on here. I'll go ahead and edit the ones I have and do a couple more.
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Did you forget me so soon?
The one who made you,
turned you into this monster?
How sad.

Though I guess it's to be expected,
you always liked to block things out.
If it didn't make sense in your mind,
you just forgot about it.

But maybe it's because I didn't,
make you into a monster that is.
You already were a monster,
weren't you?

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Re: Entry #1

Postby eleutheromania » Fri Nov 16, 2018 4:03 am

also remember to color the eyes for your other entries. try branching out in your designs a little and i’ll keep a look out.
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Re: Entry #1

Postby Yellow. » Fri Nov 16, 2018 4:58 am

Will do, thanks again.
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Did you forget me so soon?
The one who made you,
turned you into this monster?
How sad.

Though I guess it's to be expected,
you always liked to block things out.
If it didn't make sense in your mind,
you just forgot about it.

But maybe it's because I didn't,
make you into a monster that is.
You already were a monster,
weren't you?

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