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im a little late 2 the party oopsy daisy :">

fr a first entry they're absolutely gorgeous !!! :"O ur style has always been really pretty to me when i wld see ur drawings and it translated equally as beautiful onto the kal lines ♥♥♥ i actually rlly love the colors n the small touches of purple that dont overwhelm or overshadow the natural colors u picked, but thats jst based on my personal tastes haha :"]

if i had one "critique" to make, i'd say try to try and incorporate more markings n use more varied colors fr them ? :'0 perhaps experiment with multi-colored gradient markings n more complex markings if u feel confident doing them ! (given that u can make them work of course,,, adding markings jst fr the sake of markings can be very 50/50, and the markings u used r very cute on their own !) as is though, the kal is very beautiful and their simple markings are lovely and very charming !! the hair n shine are adorable n i love how u drew the eyes !! ♥ and honestly there's nothing i'd really change and theres nothing rlly to actually critique, at least 2 me ! :'> it's jst that space between the back/shoulder marking and the markings on the paws, it feels a little empty, u know? :'0 again though, it's nothing really you need 2 fix, jst smth u can keep in mind if u wanna add a lil smth extra if u decide to make another entry :"]

[SaltyBirb]

im a little late 2 the party oopsy daisy :">

fr a first entry they're absolutely gorgeous !!! :"O ur style has always been really pretty to me when i wld see ur drawings and it translated equally as beautiful onto the kal lines ♥♥♥ i actually rlly love the colors n the small touches of purple that dont overwhelm or overshadow the natural colors u picked, but thats jst based on my personal tastes haha :"]

if i had one "critique" to make, i'd say try to try and incorporate more markings n use more varied colors fr them ? :'0 perhaps experiment with multi-colored gradient markings n more complex markings if u feel confident doing them ! (given that u can make them work of course,,, adding markings jst fr the sake of markings can be very 50/50, and the markings u used r very cute on their own !) as is though, the kal is very beautiful and their simple markings are lovely and very charming !! the hair n shine are adorable n i love how u drew the eyes !! ♥ and honestly there's nothing i'd really change and theres nothing rlly to actually critique, at least 2 me ! :'> it's jst that space between the back/shoulder marking and the markings on the paws, it feels a little empty, u know? :'0 again though, it's nothing really you need 2 fix, jst smth u can keep in mind if u wanna add a lil smth extra if u decide to make another entry :"]

aa tysm!! You make me blush, bab! haha ♡

Thank you for leaving a critique as well! I've also noticed that my markings felt like there was something missing to it, this is why it took me 5 hours to finish this huhu just because of their colors and markings. For the multi-colored gradient markings, I'd love to incorporate that in my future designs, if I can :""> I'll keep these in mind for my other entries!! thank you, again! ♡ ♡ ♡