[DamonArtXX]

Hope this seems good enough to be an artist for the species

[demonimpala67]

I like the color, but theres a bit missing that I would expect on a Kallos. The quoted section on the competition page's first post would help you with that, I think. Also, there is a layer labeled "Fake", to separate these entries from regular adoptables. Please make it visible. Thanks.
If you want more detailed advice, just let me know.