[Vluwu]

Ahh, I kept these ones color pallate the same. I couldn't really figure out how to change it, other than taking out the yellow. I re-started the design with a blank canvas. I hope it looks better!

I hope I've done the mutations justice! <3

Any comments/critiques on how I can improve my designs are super appreciated,
even if it's harsh, I take all to note!
Thank you so much for your time!

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Mature Day: 12/28/2017 (date for comp)

Mother

Father

Ginger

Arius

Mother | Father

Unicorn horn - yes
Minor Mane Mutation - No
Major Mane Mutation - Chanced

[Mint Chip]

Alright, so I think first off I really like the adjustments made to the design. I think that the overall look of this one flows a bit better now and I like the unique way this one meshed and the face you kept the "caged heart" marking as it was my favorite thing of the design. <3. I love the small added in things that just make the design sing together better. I will say though that I think I preferred the mane edit on the last one just a tad more, but otherwise, this batch is certainly an improvement in my honest opinion. I still can't get over how much effort and heart you put into re-vamping these designs into the best you could. It shows and I believe the efforts have well been worth it! I am just so happy to see this sort of determination in our community and in a try out, it leaves me feeling very happy and again just proud. <3<3<3