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Postby ilhdc7 » Sun Dec 10, 2017 5:37 pm

this is for raffle cats found on create a clan. this is a compilation of all my entries to make it easier on myself & the judges. Please do not post!
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create a clan v.3 & fanclub v.3

christmas cat #1 | gargoyle | katrione | link to prompt |
christmas cat #2 | mouse | lost thoughts | link to prompt |
christmas cat #3 | taras | deimos | link to prompt |
christmas cat #4 | demelza | zephyrine | link to prompt |
christmas cat #5 | luxx | amethyst14 | link to prompt |
christmas cat #6 | arachna | simonpet | link to prompt |
christmas cat #7 | roseyeyes | dinolil1 | link to prompt |
christmas cat #8 | diamond | krazykitty00 | link to prompt |
christmas cat #9 | crowspot | dinolil4 | link to prompt |
christmas cats #10 | icetalon & blizardjaw | katrione | link to prompt |

i'd like to enter for the 11th holiday cat roxx!

priority order;;
#4 - demelza
#3 - taras
#1 - gargoyle
#11 - roxx
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christmas cat #1 - gargoyle

Postby ilhdc7 » Tue Dec 12, 2017 1:49 pm

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Prompt; This cat hasn't been getting sleep for the past few nights, explain why.
Min Word Count; 150

gender; tom
age; 34 moons

301 words

gargoyle shook his half coat of fur off. The dew from the restless night before rolled off of his coat like an avalanche of pebbles rolling down a hill. His skin, bare to the world, prickled with goose bumps, tormented by the cold air. Each step his paws took caused his wrinkles to wriggle like a drowning worm in the flooded dirt. His back arched, spinal column and ribs looking like a dinosaur exhibit in a museum. His claws stretched out of his paw, kneading the ground, trying to push the stress of the sleepless night before into the cold, hard dirt. The family he had left behind was finally pushing from his unconscious mind and into his everyday, every night thoughts. gecko, gecko, why are you so naked! gecko, gecko, no wonder daddy hates him! His siblings weren't very creative, but to a kit who was struggling to find who he was, the taunting was cruel and vicious.

He had been thinking about them way too much for someone who had changed their personality, name, location and territory for. He had left the day he could catch a mouse, and changed his name to gargoyle, something that had randomly came to his mind. The family he left behind sure didn't miss him, he thought, but at least they didn't have to worry about the oddball kit that they had. Recently he had been regretting leaving so early, maybe if he had waited it out, then the hate that came from his family would slowly fade, and they would accept him for who he was. Ugly, pfft. I wish Margary would have only had two kits, instead of three. Challenger and Reed are perfect, you... Gargoyle snorted, as if his father would ever had let the 'ugly' kit live in peace.
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christmas cat #2 - mouse

Postby ilhdc7 » Tue Dec 12, 2017 1:51 pm

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Prompt; first day with their new master and their last day with them, the day they decided to leave forever
Min Word Count; 150
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christmas cat #3 - taras

Postby ilhdc7 » Tue Dec 12, 2017 1:52 pm

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Prompt; To have a chance of winning this cat, you have to write a a story about the most unforgettable memory they've ever had in Leaf-bare.
Min Word Count; 500

765 words

the small kits surrounded the old tom. it had been many, many seasons since he had joined the clan, and he had gone through many difficult times. He had been underneath two leaders, dealt with a rogue king, a fox attack, an avalanche, but he feared not, for the seasons might have been harsh and demanding, but they were fruitful and satisfying.

"Tell us Taras! Tell us! Tell us about the avalanche again!!" The seven kits surrounded him and he rolled his eyes. They always wanted to hear about the avalanche. It was the only story he told nowadays. He'd probably told it to them seven or eight times a week.

"I already told you about that yesterday! Now leave me alone!"

The smallest kit, the one he considered his favorite, came forward and placed a dainty paw on him, "Please Taras? We love that story!"

He let out a big sigh, and stood up, arching his back and stretching. "Alright. It was the middle of-"

"LEAF BARE!" Yowled out a large black kit.

Taras hissed, "You wanna tell it or do ya want me to?"

The black tom reeled back, "You tell it!"

He eyed the kit, "It was the middle of leaf-bare, and it had been the worst one we had ever seen. Salmonstar had already lost three lives that winter to when he fell into the water, and drowned trying to save Sootberry, who at the time was Sootpaw. She's his daughter, ya know? The river ended up freezing over completely that winter too.

Anyhow, Sootpaw and Screechpaw, the sisters, were arguing again, and Snowpaw, the blind sister, was right in the middle trying to stop the two. They were almost warriors, and there was a new tom in the clan, who was flirting with the both of them. They found out and was angry. Now you need to know, that Sootpaw had never been that angry in her entire life, she was a calm kit, a kind apprentice, but Screechpaw had done her wrong and she coulda killed her. They were loud!"

"How loud Taras?!"

"Louder than the sky-screams!"(thunder)

"Really!?" A grey kit came forward and jumped onto the black kits back, "We can be louder than that!"

Taras chuckled, "I'm sure you could! Now, all of a sudden, the ground began to shake and stir and I felt like I was gonna fall over. Everyone stopped what they were doing and ran for cover. We had though Starclan was angry and comin' down on us, so we took cover."

"You were scared?" Asked a small white kit.

"Oh yeah! If you thought Starclan was comin' down on you would you be scared?"

"No!" Yelled the black kit.

"Yeah you would!" Snapped his favorite kit, who then tackled the black kit and wrestled him around.

"Anyways!" He growled at the two wrestling on the ground, "Imma kick you seven out if ya don't quiet down!" The seven quieted up real quick and sat in front of him, patiently waiting.

"Now, where were we?"

A small calico molly piped up, "Starclan was gonna getcha!"

"Oh right!" He flicked his tail and threw his paw out like he was displaying the image before them, "Ok, so, Starclan was about to chew us up and swallow us, and we were runnin' for the warriors den! That was the closest den, and everybody was down in the clearing. So we got to the den and all of a sudden, it was white!

It was snow! The snow from the mountain was covering the entrance, destroying our clearing and everything! WE WERE GONNA DIE!" He stood up and all the kits gasped.

"Didja! Didja die! Taras! Did ya die!!??"

"No silly! I'm right here walkin', and your mother is still out their lookin' for ya. And when Sootberry finds ya'll, imma be in huge trouble-"

A cough sounded at the entrance of the elders cavern, and there stood Sootberry, "Alright kits, you've heard this a thousand times, and it's time for bed. You can finish up the story tomorrow! Taras needs his rest! Now, c'mon!" Shuffled the kits out, chourused by, 'Auntie he was almost done!', and her own kits sullenly following behind.

The small kit, the one he considered his favorite, ran back in, her tail straight in the air, jumped on him, gave him a big hug, and squeeked out a thank you.

"Run fast! Or ya mama's gonna swat ya!" He chuckled and curled back up into his nest, That avalanche was something, he thought. He was glad he had survived it though, all legs and ears intact.
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christmas cat #4 - demelza

Postby ilhdc7 » Tue Dec 12, 2017 5:15 pm

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Prompt; Describe how she feels about her appearance
Min Word Count; None

365 Words

She stalked into the clearing, her head held high, her chest pushed out, her claws sharp. She had been living with the rogues since she was a kit, and she was ready to leave them. She had gotten a message from some cat from this place called Starclan, and she knew that she needed to leave. To leave the rogue group, she'd have to fight her way out, and kill all who stood in her path. Brother, mother, friend, and anyone who decided that they were going to hurt her.

"You want to leave?" Her father asked. He stood on a garbage can, his thick black pelt sparkling against the metal that shined like the moon in the sky. "I don't think so. My best claws. My best assassin. My best heir. There is no way I will let you leave. Let alone alive!"

"You have no choice, Father. It's my choice!"

He laughed, an evil laugh, one that bellowed through the ally, causing all sewer rats to flee. His eyes shined brightly, and his dark heart palpitated at the feeling of her fear in the air. "No ugly she-cat like you can survive! I have fed you, housed you, trained you! I MADE YOU DEMELZA!"

"You made a monster, Father! A monster! I kill for you! I don't want to anymore!"

"YOU UGLY SNAKE!"

"I may be ugly Father, but I am your daughter. I am your heir. I have surpassed you and could take your puny throne if I wanted to. But I won't." She smirked, and started to back down the alleyway, "A demented king always needs a palace to rule. But I won't be your subject anymore."

"Ugly she-cat's can never survive!" He yowled as she sprinted down the alley, making her escape.

"Yeah, but you fell in love with my mother, and she was ugly. So we can, we just have to be creative." She sprinted, flat out into the forest, her curly coat brushing against the grass and leaves. She stopped when she realized he wasn't following her. She laughed loudly, and threw back her head, "AND I AM NOT UGLY!" She paused and jumped for joy, "Just unique..."
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christmas cat #5 - luxx

Postby ilhdc7 » Tue Dec 12, 2017 5:28 pm

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Prompt; you have to finish his story
Min Word Count; 500


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-it started with a nasty pelican which chased him into a shipping yard
-the captain picked him up & took him with to be a ships cat
-when they landed, luxx left & got really turned around
-he got lost on the new land
-made friends with a couple of strays who told him about winterclan
-went in search
-had never learned about blizzards & cold weather, & got caught in a blizzard
-winterclan found him almost dead
-serves winterclan to repay his life debt
-but he still loves it there, despite feeling the need to serve

He had been sleeping on top of a barn as a barn cat. His eyes
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christmas cat #6 - arachna

Postby ilhdc7 » Tue Dec 12, 2017 5:28 pm

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Prompt; what has this cat been looking for and have they found it?
Min Word Count; 200

-looking for an adventure? danger?
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christmas cat #7 - roseyeyes

Postby ilhdc7 » Tue Dec 12, 2017 5:29 pm

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Prompt; What happened to her first litter, why are they not by her side?
Max Word Count; 800
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christmas cat #8 - diamond

Postby ilhdc7 » Tue Dec 12, 2017 5:36 pm

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username;; ilhdc7
name;; Diamond
gender;; Molly
age;; 28 Moons
personality;; center of attention, queen bee, perfectionist, neat freak, short temper
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her "star';;
    name; Agron
    gender; tom
    death age; 29
    former rank; deputy
    intent; good, but a little devious at times
    death; murder
    relation to diamond; her uncle (though she doesn't know this)
    why are they with diamond; to protect her, but also there because he's a little bored in cat heaven
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Re: christmas cat #9 - crowspot

Postby ilhdc7 » Tue Dec 12, 2017 5:37 pm

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Prompt; What happened to her friend? Where have they gone?
Max Word Count; 500
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