[Bastiodon]

Ahh ok so!! I couldn't write everything down so I just put symbols

♡- The Mouth should go down, then up. The muzzle looks like it's just kind of melting?? Idk
If you were going for a snarl type thing then I suggest making the mouth closed, then near the end have it opened a little showing teeth closing it off

♥- I feel as though the fur should have more to it and should go up more. Personally, I always make it pointing down, but if you want it pointing up maybe add more fur other than the two you had, and give it more curvy shapes.

★- The eye is too far up the head. You're probably going for a more realistic-looking eye, so don't mind the shape. Just put it near the end of the the mouth, or put it a bit down the head.

☆- Give the ear more shape and some fur. Tbh that's all I have to say there.

Please take everything I say with a brain of salt I'm bad at this ahahaaaaaa

[Nero The Corgi King]

Thank you so much for helping me ^^