Zvers: Moved to a new thread, please lock

[Cion Keiasta]

Kicking up this thread to make it alive xD

And have fun Metta. Darn you posted before me xD I'll be working on my form now for #3 !

I finished my form, although I might add more xD And I would like crits. from other people! So my form is located here: Click to see my form! And please send the crits. and comments through PMs because I don't want to clog this awsomesauce thread up xD

I seem to post on the first post of the new pages xD

[Metallic Dragon]

Username:

.Arrow.

Zver you want:

#CC1582

Name:

Tiergan

Meaning:

Strong-willed

Reason you want it:

Well, I've been watching and waiting since the thread opened (I do apologize for not posting earlier), waiting for a Zver that I really liked and/or clicked with. This fellow is just amazing, from the design to the attitude. I think my favourite part might be that he's stubborn, 'cause I tend to be a fan of the more stubborn characters, possibly because I have a tendency to be a bit stubborn. Plus, his story has already started forming in my mind and I'm excited to start working on it.

What will you do with it if you win?:

Depending on my horrible muse, which tends to die from time to time, I will write stories that are either about him, have him as a main character, or with him as a secondary character. I probably won't do art of him, as I'm not much of an artist, though I might order art of him from time to time. If I do get him, I will create a page on my character site specifically for Zvers.

Personality:

Tiergan is stubborn in every sense of the word. He doesn't admit to being wrong. He would rather die trying than give up. He always has to be right, even if it means going through a lot of work and trouble to prove it. If he gets an idea in his head, very rarely will he consider something else. When he believes something, that belief is set in stone and there's hardly ever any changing of that. Combined, these things could make you or break you. Tiergan was lucky, his stubborn mindset tends to help more often than not.

Tiergan's attitude helps him to go through with his orders and plans. Perhaps that's also why he doesn't have much of a soft side. He doesn't give in or change his mind, especially when begging is involved. However, his stubborn attitude also tends to get him in hot water. When faced with stronger opponents, he doesn't back down and has nearly gotten himself killed on various occasions because of this.

The Escape:

The sharp wail of an alarm jerked 1582 awake. Human footsteps ran down the hallway between the cells, heading for the upper floors of the labs. This alarm confused him, it was unlike the regular ones he heard. It was softer and less urgent, unlike the one used to signal an escaped Zver.

Minutes passed without the alarm stopping. All of the humans seemed to have left the cell area, probably to deal with whatever new problem had arisen. The alarm was still going, but he managed to pick out the sound of a door closing and a set of human feet moving down the row. He caught the smell of a female human a moment later.

Had the circumstances been different, he would have completely ignored her, but considering the odd alarm he actually chose to watch. The girl was young, not someone he saw on a regular basis. A 'tech' as the scientists referred to her. She looked nervous and on edge as she paused outside the cell where he had been locked up since first landing on Earth. Her fingers typed in the lock code to his door and it clicked open.

1582 waited, watching the girl suspiciously as she walked out of his sight and back down the hallway. His gaze slid to the now-open door, considering what it meant. Could it be a trap? They could quite easily have been looking for an excuse to end him. That seemed likely. And he certainly didn't feel like staying in this cell for a moment longer. He'd fight his way through the humans if he had to.

Within seconds he was out the door and racing down the hall away from where the humans had gone. He didn't see a single human until he was outside, and they were too slow and far away to stop him anyways. He launched himself upwards, towards the top of the fence surrounding the human's buildings, gripping the mesh fence with strong claws and pulling himself up and over.

It wasn't until he was deeper into forest and a safe distance from the lab that he realized he was being watched. He stopped moving and looked around, watching for any movement. Faint human scents drifted on the breeze, not enough for him to decide if it was fresh or old. He lashed his tail, needing an outlet for his anger and annoyance.

Movement caught his attention and he whipped around, a low growl in his throat. A human stepped calmly out of the nearby brush, two more behind him. 1582's muscles bunched as he prepared to attack his stalkers. The nearsest human raised his arm to point directly at him and shot. The tranq hit its mark and he collapsed, his vision blacking out almost immediately.

When 1582 woke, he was still surrounded by trees. It wasn't anything like the forest though. This place wasn't natural, the trees were in rows, there was a roof with lights above him, and in the distance he could see metal fence. It even smelled sterile and human smells lingered everywhere. He didn't find it much better than his first cell.

He had no intentions of staying there if he didn't have to, so he moved towards the fence and started walking around the edges of his new enclosure, searching for any weak spots. As he turned around a corner, several humans came into view. Including the one that had shot him.

He froze mid-step, gaze fixed on that human. What he wouldn't give to shred him for taking his newly gained freedom. To add to his anger, the human didn't even look scared. None of them did, in fact.

"Are you sure this one was a good choice?" a female human asked her neighbour, not taking her eyes off him.

"He'll calm down eventually, and soon enough he should bond with someone. Once that happens it'll be fine, and we can get to what we got him for," the second human replied.

"This one'll be a quick learner, I think," the shooter added, turning to look at his two companions. "If you don't think you can trust him, I'd recommend you stay away from his cage, you wouldn't want him bonding with you."

"Well, I hope it bonds with you, Declan, 'cause you're about the only one dumb enough to stand up to it," the female muttered, her gaze shifting to the shooter before she turned around and walked out a door.

The second human left shortly after her, leaving the shooter, Declan, alone with 1582. For several minutes, the two stood watching each other. Neither one seemed ready to move. Declan appeared at ease and only mildly interested, while 1582 was tense and obviously angry. He hadn't understood most of what the humans had said, but he hadn't liked what he'd made out.

"I guess you'll need a name if you're going to be staying here," Declan said lightly, breaking the silence that had settled over them. "I think Tiergan would be fitting," he decided, before turning and following after his companions.

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I'm rather frustrated and disappointed in my form, I could have done a lot better, especially the personality :\. Muse has been dead for a while, hopefully this doesn't last too much longer 'cause I do have a lot of ideas.
Ah well, this should do for now.

Congrats .Arrow.! I loved the amount of description in the story^^

[.Arrow.]

Thank you very much, Metal! I've finally figured out the exact purpose behind Declan's group so I'm excited to start working on the full story ^-^

[Cion Keiasta]

Congrats Arrow! I knew you can do it

[Metallic Dragon]

@Arrow: Awesome! When you finish it, I'd really like to read it^^

[Cion Keiasta]

I would like to read it too ^^

[.Arrow.]

Thanks, Jess ^-^
And alright, I'll make sure to post a link eventually XD

[Metallic Dragon]

The final Zver will be judged earlier than usual due to the fact that I am in charge of a walk for Multiple Sclerosis today after school and won't have time to judge her later.
Also, the next group may or may not be up tomorrow. I've got a state activity until Thursday night so I probably won't have much internet access(and I haven't colored the next group yet, feel free to PM me suggestions)
Anyway, just thought I'd let you all know since I'm going to be extremely busy for the rest of this month and about half way into next month.

[Metallic Dragon]

Hahaha... I fell in love with the third one xD Working on form now xD

This sly female is definitely not going to be an easy catch. Quick to anger and even quicker to disappear, she is a whole new level of dangerous. Many of the scientists took to calling her 'ninja' due to her ability to slip away unnoticed. It is believed that she is the one who destroyed the last poster. Though how she managed to escape the view of the surveillance cameras is both unknown and frightening.

Username:
jessicahongphan
Zver you want:
Escaped Zver #CC0066
Name:
Cecilia (In honor of Celliac xD)
Reason you want it:
Well... She is very beautiful and the color combination fit well with her design. I would love her very much xD As you know I liked the other zvers but when you put her as a wanted poster I was like "Oh my gosh... I must get her." So yeah xD She has a beautiful colors white, blue and pinkish purple simply goes together well. Although, being ninja - like is me in real life. I tend to scare people that way without noticing it.
What will you do with it if you win?:
I will a story of her and Azura together you know? Although I have many stories to write, I enjoy zvers more because of their species and how special they are. I think they will be my guardians of my trading rules ;D
Personality:
Though she act dangerous most of the time she is actually sweet. But then because of her personality she doesn't want to admit it. She slips away easily is because she doesn't like being enclosed, stuck in crowds, and is overly shy (Believe or not.). Just one wrong mistake, she gets ticked off and leaves mysteriously and faster than usual. She never lets her guard down unless it is with someone she trusts a lot and even with her life with.
Introduction/Story:
Running and slipping away without notice again. Good. This will help me get away from them again and they will never get me. Sheesh. You call me dangerous? Ha! Scientists will never understand me. And try to stick a needle through me. Just ridiculous. Now where am I? Hmm.... I think I'm getting closer to the exit. Wait. A security camera. Ah! This is the way. Finally I made it! I shall claim my freedom again!

A Day Later
Mhm... That was a good night's rest. Continuing through on my journey to freedom. Hmm... What's this? A picture of me? It says, "Missing! Escaped Zver #CC0066. This sly female is definitely not going to be an easy catch. Quick to anger and even quicker to disappear, she is a whole new level of dangerous. Many of the scientists took to calling her 'ninja' due to her ability to slip away unnoticed. It is believed that she is the one who destroyed the last poster. Though how she managed to escape the view of the surveillance cameras is both unknown and frightening." Hahaha!!! Dangerous! Only to you people! Ninja like? Definitely! But this poster will lead hunters to me. They will never catch me. But if they do, will the be a kind one? I hope so. Wait! What am I doing
thinking about this? I don't want to lose my freedom. Another zver on the run!

A Couple of Hours Later
I'm tired. Lets take a rest. Wait. I have an uneasy feeling in the air. I look around my surroundings again. I smell another zver. Its a female with a human scent. Then I see the zver I was smelling. She was pure beauty. I asked her, "What's your name?"
She replied, "Azura Zelda. But the scientist called, me "#CC7332" My companion named me, Azura Zelda because the name means blue gray battle maid."
What a beautiful name. Suits her too. So she was captured by Scientists before. But a companion? I don't like this. But if she has a companion, then her companion must be near.
She asked, "Are you afraid of my companion? As soon I said my companion, you have this look on your face that you don't like her. And if you were wondering I was once captured by Scientists but was soon escaped and captured by my companion. But if you don't want to get caught. I suggest you to leave, but if you wanted a companion, come with me. She is sure to want you because she is looking for you."
Hmm... I don't want a companion because she can be lying to me to lure me in. But it sounds like she loves her companion dearly. I can't think about that now.
I told her, "Good bye! But the Scientists called me #CC0066."
She looked at me with a smile on her face. And I left for the day.

That Night Later
I fell asleep that night tired from running. I heard some rustling near by. I smelled two presences. One of a human and another zver. Wait. Another zver? This is the scent of Azura Zelda! I knew right away, that human was her companion. I started to dash right away. But I must have stepped on something while running because I fell with a sharp pain and my paw was throbbing in pain. But when I tried to run, something warm and kind wrapped around my body and said, "Calm down. You hurt yourself trying to run away from me. Did you think I was a mean and horrible person? I'm not like that. Come on I know you aren't dangerous. It was like with Azura here. Just because she looked intimidating doesn't mean she was dangerous. She was actually sweet and kind you know. Come on, lets get your wound treated."
I felt Azura coming closer to me and said, "I told you she wasn't mean at all. She is kind you see? I was in your situation not to long ago. I thought no one could understand me until Jess caught me. And from the looks of it she is willing to let you live with us."
I never heard of such friendly, kind, soothing words to me before. Just who is this Jess person and what will my life be now?

And you did a typo on view xD

Ok, so maybe later than usual. But at least I got time to judge them. Grats Jess!

[Cion Keiasta]

Thank you Metta <33 Plus, did you base Cecilia off of Celliac? I like the color combo anyway xD