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entry 1 by non

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entry 1

Postby non » Tue Aug 15, 2017 11:31 am

what can i do to improve? what do you dislike about my entry?
these are important questions i need answered ^^
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Re: entry 1

Postby - Alice - » Fri Aug 18, 2017 2:13 am

Hiya! I am le owner of foxleps.

I shall answer your question, i love the overall concept of the edits! The ears are a neat touch. Love the way you've done the eyes. However as far a critique i have a bit ;-; firstly the design is rather bland. I think its cute but its not very complicated and very easy to replicate ;-; there is also some minor problems with the lines as well as there ate gaps or inconsistencys in sizing and such :3
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Re: entry 1

Postby non » Fri Aug 18, 2017 2:50 am

thejokerkeepsmiling1 wrote:Hiya! I am le owner of foxleps.

I shall answer your question, i love the overall concept of the edits! The ears are a neat touch. Love the way you've done the eyes. However as far a critique i have a bit ;-; firstly the design is rather bland. I think its cute but its not very complicated and very easy to replicate ;-; there is also some minor problems with the lines as well as there ate gaps or inconsistencys in sizing and such :3

Thank you! I must agree it was quite a lazy entry ^^;
Hopefully you like my next entry, which is still a WIP because it is quite complex ^^;;
william <3

HI I FINALLY GOT ACCESS TO THIS ACCOUNT AGAIN AFTER YEARS!!!!!!!!!!!! i don't think any of my friends are on here anymore..? but this is so nostalgic to me. i probably won't ever participate in the trading again, but i'll try to be around on the oekaki boards n maybe giving my stuff away in various ways<3
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Re: entry 1

Postby - Alice - » Sat Aug 19, 2017 9:35 pm

I look forward to seeing it! :3
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hey everyone! I am slowly downsizing my collection to quit
something I've been trying to do for years :')

Everything is available for art, ocs or dappervolk always down for
a dm your welcome to dm me for art or oc sales, please make
the title unique as it gets confusing if every pm is: offering art

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