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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Silver Pandorica » Thu Aug 10, 2017 11:19 am

What is your favorite (or top five favorite) children's book(s)? By this I mean a picture book or short early reader chapter book.
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1) Olive My Love
2) Arthur Gets The Chicken Pox
3) If You Give a Moose a Muffin
4) Ratatouille: Look and Find
5) The Hiccupotamus

none of this exists. wrote:@Silver I've heard that Sherlock Holmes are some great stories. I was never able to get through them, though.

I like it so far! The entire collection of stories is over 1100 pages, so I haven't gotten very far yet. It's a little hard to get through, but worth it.

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Man, that's cool! How many stories are in it? Which is your favorite so far?

Haha, I haven't finished one yet. I believe there are nine? There may be more though, I'd have to double-check. There's most likely more.

Also I ship Silver with random cute partner

yee the teacher gave out assigned seats so we aren't next to each other anymore *cries*

Ooh, awesome!! You should send me a list, so I can make sure I haven't missed any XD

caan~ you feeel~ the loove~ tooniight~~

Haha XD I'll get back to you on that =P

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby BucketORandomness » Thu Aug 10, 2017 11:52 am

What is your favorite (or top five favorite) children's book(s)? By this I mean a picture book or short early reader chapter book.
Well, the first couple are easy. Chicka-Chicka Boom! Boom! was my absolute favorite, though that could be because of how my dad always reads it. The kid sitting on his knees was always bounced or tickled whenever we got to the booms. It was fun. Other than that, a couple of Dr. Suess books, maybe a picture book from the Dora market. Possibly the one that came with a CD of songs, for obvious enough reasons.

@Silver, I think the ship may be a little more than just in the shipyards ;)
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Thu Aug 10, 2017 1:02 pm

What is your favorite (or top five favorite) children's book(s)? By this I mean a picture book or short early reader chapter book.
Hmm, well not too hard

1. Mice of the Herringbone series
2. Guardians of Ga'hoole
3. The Hobbit
4. Redwall
5. The horse and his boy

And honestly I think I'll read all of them through adulthood. These stories heavily influenced my writing, both character and plotwise.

@ Whoever is reading Sherlock Holmes. I loved those! I got a huge book from my library too, gold tinged pages and leather cover. It was amazing to read that! Those are books that I can agree on being classic. I was recommended to read them as a bit of research on the Victorian period for the story I did for Nano, to get the feel for mannerisms and also the writing style of that period.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Ranger of the North » Thu Aug 10, 2017 4:34 pm

The Worst Username wrote:@Ranger
    I need to read up on this. That reminds me of how they found the kakapo again--I think there were about eighteen hiding on the side of an extremely steep mountain? And I'm not sure if I'll post it yet; it's more of a small idea where jacanas have created an advanced society ("advanced" not as in sci-fi, but as in more of an early human society, with small cities and religion and all that), but it's not really fleshed out at the moment. But yeah, congrats on your trip!
Idk, I think that was the takahe, tbh XD From what I know of the kakapo story, there were only a few males left, but no one knew if there were any females~ c:
Ooh, sounds interesting! Good luck with it :D


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*Looks sadly at Dave* Yeah, I have a few scheduled for the chopping block. Dave is the first one, though, because the other deaths are a little farther away in terms of writing.
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What is your favorite (or top five favorite) children's book(s)? By this I mean a picture book or short early reader chapter book.
the Hairy Maclary books by Lynley Dodd. Classic. :D
The Cat in the Hat by DUH
Um... Idk anymore picture-books, tbh :p
EXCEPT my all-time favourite was a lil chapter-book with two or three Sherlock Holmes stories. I couldn't even read, lol, and had no idea what it was, but I loved it; took it camping, told myself stories I imagined from its pages, etc. Aaah, those were the days c':


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Ranger wrote:Ooh, awesome!! You should send me a list, so I can make sure I haven't missed any XD

caan~ you feeel~ the loove~ tooniight~~
Haha XD I'll get back to you on that =P

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby sparrow; » Thu Aug 10, 2017 4:38 pm

What is your favorite (or top five favorite) children's book(s)? By this I mean a picture book or short early reader chapter book.
When I was really really young (like, really young), my favourite book was "The Very Hungry Caterpillar". It's adorable <3
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Ranger of the North » Thu Aug 10, 2017 4:41 pm

What is your favorite (or top five favorite) children's book(s)? By this I mean a picture book or short early reader chapter book.
I've remembered another! The Little Yellow Digger <3
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby DeMaizu » Thu Aug 10, 2017 4:43 pm

I know I should go back and answer all the recent questions but I don't wanna so I'm not gunna.
I'll answer this one, though;
What is your favorite (or top five favorite) children's book(s)? By this I mean a picture book or short early reader chapter book.
The very first one that pops to mind is Hooway for Wodney Wat by Helen Lester. *wipes tear away* Go find it, please.
Mm, what else? My Creature Teacher by Laura Leuck (apparently - I don't remember, so I'm looking it up).
Probably anything by Bill Peet. Man, I loved those things. Still do.
Also anything by Mo Willems. The Elephant and Piggie books are the ones I remember most (we have a few), but he also has one about naked mole rats, and a whole bunch about a pigeon. There's also a duck somewhere.
And then . . . . Sure, Cat and the Hat. Or any of his stuff.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby The Worst Username » Fri Aug 11, 2017 1:06 am

What is your favorite (or top five favorite) children's book(s)? By this I mean a picture book or short early reader chapter book.

    The Gardener (Sarah Stewart), The Day the Crayons Quit (Drew Daywalt), and Room on the Broom (Julia Donaldson) were and are my favorite kid's books. Funny thing, I didn't read The Day the Crayons quit when I was little; I actually found it pretty recently at the library. Such good books! Also, there's maybe a thousand books I read about animals that I can't remember, but I loved almost all of them.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby winged-backpack » Fri Aug 11, 2017 1:23 am

aaaah sorry, I've been away for ages! I'm actually on holiday atm so I'mma answer all these questions ^^ They're all in a random order so there's no particular way I'm answering here

What is your favorite (or top five favorite) children's book(s)? By this I mean a picture book or short early reader chapter book.

Honestly, I was reading full on adult novels from at least 7/8 years old. My mum taught me to read by the time I was 2 and I was at year 4 (4th grade) reading level when I started school (at 5, my mum sent me to this pre-school that was 2 years rather than 1). All that being said, I loved the books by Julia Donaldson; the Gruffalo, Room on the Broom, Charlie Cook's Favourite Book etc. Also, bc I'm really boring, the Harry Potter books are up there, especially the Prisoner of Azkaban.

How did you get into writing?

I guess I just started. After sitting through English class after English class and reading so many books, I just wanted to try it out myself. Honestly, I started by writing cringy fanfiction, but now I'm working on two full novel(la)s (not sure how long they're gonna be), so I've evolved from my small beginnings.

What sort of things have made their way into your writing? How and why? (Characters, places, plot points, personality aspects, your likes and dislikes, experiences, etc.)

Right, I've said this a lot before but Starla and Maddie are both heavily based on myself; Starla being the accurate me me, then Maddie is the idealised version of myself, with some small aspect from one of my best friends (looks mainly). That's why I feel pretty confident in writing them, because they're just me, or people I'm close to. I think that helps.
The setting of that story is sort of based on one of the places I plan to look at going to university, which is in the south of Wales. I think even the genre is because I enjoy dystopias so I know them well enough to write them.
The other book that I'm working on, which is kind of hard to explain, is completely the opposite. It's based in a completely fictional place, though still on earth, in the prison then in this horrible game show thing. It's called 10,000 doors and I've done absolutely no work on it except the concept so far. I know that the central character is going to have a dog, because it plays into one of the scenes I kind of have in my head right now. Thinking about it now, I know that some of my fears are definitely going to have a part in this one, because this game show is a way of having your case re-evaluated if you're adamant that you're innocent, but it's got these awful trials. Like it's called 10,000 doors because that's what it is. You've got one key, and only one door has the way out. There's probably going to be a time limit, but each door that isn't the exit has something awful behind it, which is where the fears come into it. I can't really go any further without breaking the rules here on CS bc it gets gory. What was the question again?

Do you have trouble with death scenes?

I am going to have a lot of pain with Maddie's because she's very dear to me but she does have to die, so that the plot can work itself out. Her death is a huge plot point so there's no way around it.
I am going to have to write at least one death scene for 10,000 doors, which is not of a human but an animal so that is going to make it a lot harder for me. Animal death scenes are much more difficult for me, because most times animals are innocent, humans not always, so it's unfair for something innocent to die. But I guess that just enhances the shock of it.

Okay so I keep bringing up my new project (though it's technically an old one bc I've been playing with this idea since befre I even thought of the other one I'm working on). Anyways, I wrote a few passages from it earlier as kind of tests but I reckon they'll be my starting point (even though they're technically from the middle section of the book) and I was wondering what you all thought? I'm going to have to edit a bit to keep in with CS rules as it is a little bit gross, and keep in mind that this was spur-of-the-moment and very much a first draft, but still be as harsh as you see fit!

Door 1
Her hand trembled as she fumbled the key into the lock. The click of the unlocking door felt deafening as the anticipation of what lay ahead amounted to a climax. Her heart was drumming against her chest as the wasps in her stomach swarmed.
“And, here she goes! The first door!”
The commentator was torture; incessant, constant. Like the ringing you get in your ears after a particularly loud concert, but worse. Louder.
The door swung open.
What lay ahead was a never-ending corridor. That’s all Femie could see. On each side, spaced about a metre apart, were doors. Doors, upon doors, upon doors. What’s to expect from a show called 10,000 Doors? Even so, Femie was in awe.
They were all the same. Plain, white panel doors. She knew that behind each of these was a horror she couldn’t imagine, except one. Just one of these was her ticket to proving her innocence.
This, and only this, was the motivation she clung to as she approached the first door on her left. (edits are in italics)

Door 2
She thrust the key into the lock. She stared at it. Hand still trembling, she couldn’t quite find the vitality to turn it.
“Freedom. A chance of freedom,” she whispered and leaned forward to rest her head on the wood. Beads of sweat fell noiselessly to the floor as she turned the key, focussing on every movement.
As the click sounded, the door swung inwards and she fell forward with it.
Femie immediately regretted her actions, as she had just fallen into a room full to the brim with poop. It smelt like nothing she had ever encountered before, even those prison bathrooms. No part of the floor was visible underneath the disgusting mess that was before her. Femie rose to her knees and puked. She didn’t want to know, but she couldn’t help but wonder whether this was of human or animal origin.
The smell was overwhelming so she stood, legs shaking, and pulled the door closed with her. She took the marker from her bag and drew a small dot on the door, so she knew that she had been here before.
Looking down, Femie saw that her clothes were covered in poop, and smelled of it as well, though not as badly as that room had. Deciding not to waste her precious water supply on washing, she turned around and faced a new door.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby polysaccharide » Fri Aug 11, 2017 9:10 am

hello! just dropping in to procrastinate doing a lot of schoolwork.

What is your favorite (or top five favorite) children's book(s)? By this I mean a picture book or short early reader chapter book.
1. click clack moo: cows that type - doreen cronin
this book contains the first full sentence i ever said: "no milk today." i mean, how cute is that??
2. on beyond zebra - dr seuss
i thought it was so cool how he mixed a bunch of letters together to form nonsensical new ones
3. go dog go - p.d. eastman
i remember loving the colors and silly characters in this one!
4. frog and toad are friends - arnold lobel
i get all happy just thinking about this one! & looking back on it, i totally knew they were gay
5. aesop's fables
yeah, i know they aren't for kids, but i grew up surrounded by classical literature so,,,, what can you do

alright, i guess i'll go do my work now,,,,,,, i brought this upon myself, after all.
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