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by winter. » Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:01 am
*applauds*
β₯ congradulations lolsaya. you did a wonderful job. i am a little sad i didn't win, but you definitely deserved her! β₯
whose woods these are I think I know
his house is in the village though
he will not see me stopping here
to watch his woods fill up with snow
the woods are lovely, dark and deep
but I have promises to keep
and miles to go before I sleep
and miles to go before I sleepc h a r a c t e r s
i'm a lonely teenager who spends all her time on the internet
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by DoctorDraca » Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:02 am
Lulu Saphire wrote:Congrats Lolsaya
Nex could you please tell me what you didn't like about my form?I would like to improve for next time =D
Actually, it would be more useful for you to look at forms that managed to win me over.
But here are some important points:
1. A well thought out personality
2. A good reason, not just because you think it looks fancy
3. Make your story easy to read, divide into paragraphs
4. Write something relating to the Tracker, and not a random story of.. randomness
5. Be creative with your form
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by winter. » Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:07 am
*raises hand*
β₯ nex, i would also like to know what i could do to improve my forms in the future. β₯
whose woods these are I think I know
his house is in the village though
he will not see me stopping here
to watch his woods fill up with snow
the woods are lovely, dark and deep
but I have promises to keep
and miles to go before I sleep
and miles to go before I sleepc h a r a c t e r s
i'm a lonely teenager who spends all her time on the internet
but you can just call me winter
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by uqtubee » Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:09 am
'Grats Lolsaya!
Hopefully I'll be a little more improved next batch :3
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by Icesky » Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:23 am
Nex wrote:Lulu Saphire wrote:Congrats Lolsaya
Nex could you please tell me what you didn't like about my form?I would like to improve for next time =D
Actually, it would be more useful for you to look at forms that managed to win me over.
But here are some important points:
1. A well thought out personality
2. A good reason, not just because you think it looks fancy
3. Make your story easy to read, divide into paragraphs
4. Write something relating to the Tracker, and not a random story of.. randomness
5. Be creative with your form
I have another question D:
Are there any particular paragraph division types you like. I generally write novel-style with many smaller paragraphs as apposed to many large ones. Do you prefer larger paragraphs? Or does it not matter?
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