Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby cedaar » Wed Mar 16, 2011 9:51 am

Congrats Lolsaya!! Great form all of you!
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Icesky » Wed Mar 16, 2011 9:52 am

Thanks Nex, I'll remember that :3

Congratulations Lolsaya! Very nice form. <3
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Kaylawolf » Wed Mar 16, 2011 9:52 am

Congratulations lolsaya! You did a beautiful job on your form!

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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby winter. » Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:01 am


*applauds*
β™₯ congradulations lolsaya. you did a wonderful job. i am a little sad i didn't win, but you definitely deserved her! β™₯
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby DoctorDraca » Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:02 am

Lulu Saphire wrote:Congrats Lolsaya

Nex could you please tell me what you didn't like about my form?I would like to improve for next time =D

Actually, it would be more useful for you to look at forms that managed to win me over.

But here are some important points:
1. A well thought out personality
2. A good reason, not just because you think it looks fancy
3. Make your story easy to read, divide into paragraphs
4. Write something relating to the Tracker, and not a random story of.. randomness
5. Be creative with your form
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:03 am

Congrats!
im basically never on, so if you wanna with trade me or if you message me, be prepared to wait a while for a response. this account is first and foremost a personal archive for sentimentality's sake as it was a big part of my childhood.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby winter. » Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:07 am

*raises hand*
β™₯ nex, i would also like to know what i could do to improve my forms in the future. β™₯
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to watch his woods fill up with snow

the woods are lovely, dark and deep
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby uqtubee » Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:09 am

'Grats Lolsaya!
Hopefully I'll be a little more improved next batch :3
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby asdjlasfjksdf » Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:20 am

Ah! Another one slipped away.
Oh well. You're form was really amazing lolsaya. Congrats on winning this beautiful girl You really deserve her. :]
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Icesky » Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:23 am

Nex wrote:
Lulu Saphire wrote:Congrats Lolsaya

Nex could you please tell me what you didn't like about my form?I would like to improve for next time =D

Actually, it would be more useful for you to look at forms that managed to win me over.

But here are some important points:
1. A well thought out personality
2. A good reason, not just because you think it looks fancy
3. Make your story easy to read, divide into paragraphs
4. Write something relating to the Tracker, and not a random story of.. randomness
5. Be creative with your form


I have another question D:
Are there any particular paragraph division types you like. I generally write novel-style with many smaller paragraphs as apposed to many large ones. Do you prefer larger paragraphs? Or does it not matter?
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