[Soll]

Can I please get some feedback? Thank you!

[kiwipen]

Of course!
Pros :
The color scheme. I love your usage of reds and pinks, and how you made a primarily darker design pop with the light scarf, and Sparkle color The light chest and ears really helps break the monotony of the design, and altogether this is a super strong design.

Critiques:
You forgot to color in the shine on the paws
The charm, while technically passable, I would like to see it a bit more visible than it is.

Finally --- just a thing for you to ponder.
What would this design look like with some light markings on the face, paws, or tail end?

[Soll]

Of course!
Pros :
The color scheme. I love your usage of reds and pinks, and how you made a primarily darker design pop with the light scarf, and Sparkle color The light chest and ears really helps break the monotony of the design, and altogether this is a super strong design.

Critiques:
You forgot to color in the shine on the paws
The charm, while technically passable, I would like to see it a bit more visible than it is.

Finally --- just a thing for you to ponder.
What would this design look like with some light markings on the face, paws, or tail end?

I fixed it up a bit, keeping your critiques in mind! I honestly love how it looks now more than before!