by angelshy » Mon Jun 19, 2017 6:20 am
*squee*
my first artist entry !
inspired by this and this <3
finally finished βΌ no, I didn't spend 40+ hours lol I'm just rly lazy and kept it open c":
big, huge, massive thank you to everyone who gave critique/feedback on my entry, I rly appreciate it! aand tysm for all the votes as well! <33
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list of edits:
- c hair beyond the jawline
- c wavylicious tail
- uc chubby ears
myo equivalent:
an uncommon myo slot
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by Izuku » Wed Jun 21, 2017 2:18 pm
I really love the design!! especially that hair aa ;o;;
the only thing I really see which could be improved is the lines on the tail? they could use some smoothing to fit in - other than that it's really well done and cute!! ;v;
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by Aey » Wed Jun 21, 2017 2:33 pm
That faaaaace!
Like Izu said, work on smoothing the lines a bit. Maybe make the shine shinier? Add a little sparkle to it and lighten up its outline.
Consider also using the water brush instead of the air brush to blend colors. It gives it that painted feel that lots of people drool over.
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by tirocat » Wed Jun 21, 2017 3:11 pm
looks great!
although, the tail kinda looks wonky. i don't really think short tails are able to make curves, so if it's a short tail it should be straight, not bending. and ya, it's not bending, but it looks like there's a huge bump on the tail, and it would simply look better if it was straighter. just some advice ;u;'
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