Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby DoctorDraca » Sun Mar 13, 2011 3:58 am

Don't quote forms, please. It's rather annoying..

Edit: Due to circumstances, a Tracker has been returned. He'll be displayed as Tracker #29, and the newer creation will wait until the next series.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Clive » Sun Mar 13, 2011 4:33 am

Oh sorry, it will not do it again. Im so sorry
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby RainbowBizkit <3 » Sun Mar 13, 2011 4:35 am

Oh I wanted DUne Before I may go for him he was a tracker I wanted for my first but I found My Lightstreak and loved him, So Nex does this mean that since you are putting a repostesed tracker up for adoption that the new one will wait til the next batch? or Be put up as 30?
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"I was sick of restrictions sick of the boundaries about to close the door
Such a lack of conviction no real connection what should I settle for
But you caught my attention you built on the tension and you left me wanting more
Now I don't know what to do with myself do with myself I don't want nobody else"
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Ranua » Sun Mar 13, 2011 4:36 am

Nex wrote:Don't quote forms, please. It's rather annoying..

Edit: Due to circumstances, a Tracker has been returned. He'll be displayed as Tracker #29, and the newer creation will wait until the next series.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby RainbowBizkit <3 » Sun Mar 13, 2011 4:37 am

OIh ok thank you ^^
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"I was sick of restrictions sick of the boundaries about to close the door
Such a lack of conviction no real connection what should I settle for
But you caught my attention you built on the tension and you left me wanting more
Now I don't know what to do with myself do with myself I don't want nobody else"
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Clive » Sun Mar 13, 2011 5:10 am

♥Dune♥
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♥Loyal,Playful,Friendly,Awesome♥

Tracker Dog Application Series 9
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Username:
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♥Silverflash♥
Tracker Dog you want:

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29#
Name you'll give it:
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Dune, i like the name just the way it is ^^
Reason why you want it:
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There are so many reasons, lets beginning on the Beginning.
When i saw him the first time and read his text about him my heart jumped thousand times, i dont know why, i think because he was in the first moment really sympathetic. He just looks awesome and he is amazing,its the first time that i apply for a Tracker Dog, and i just fell in love with him,Dune is the first Tracker Dog that i really liked. He is just gorgeous!
Some people might think that he is just a simple tracker, with normal markings and common.
But i dont think so, his stripes reminds me a little bit of a tiger and the colors really harmonizes together.
His personality fits a bit with mine, i love to make and having fun with others.

Will it be used in any kind of story?

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Yes, why not? All of my characters have the right to be in my storys.
I have a story already in my mind, and it wouldn"t be a problem to involve him in there too.I
love to write storys, when im bored either im coloring in the Oekaki-Boards or im writing on something.
Describe its personality:
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Theme Song
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Phil Collins - On My Way

Playful
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Dune is really a playful Tracker Dog, and that makes him really special.
Some Tracker Dogs that i know, are serious and dont like to play alot.
After the missions, he loves to run at open areas, that is the moment where he can feel freedom
and have fun.
Loyal
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Of course, Dune is really sad because his old owner dont want him anymore.
But he is optimistic and looks forward to its new owner.
Een in the worst time, he is ready to protect his owner with his life if necessary.
Social
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He has no problem working with others.
In fact, he know it's fun to learn new contacts and friendships.
Friendly
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Dune is a friendly fellow to his friends and acquaintances over, but he is suspicious of strangers about something, finally, the rule: do not trust nobody you know.
Quick Learner
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He learns very quickly, as for example may need to conduct a mission or how his skills at the best starts.
Serious
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Even if he has a playful personality, he is really serious on emissions.
Finally Duna wants not something goes wrong on the missions.
He is always his best to stay on the serious issues and not to act playful.
Sympathetic
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Dune is simply any Sympathetic, the reason is because he is a special person in a peculiar way easy.
Likes
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-Playing
-Dirt
-Any kind of food
-Jokes
-His Trainer and Friends
-Chasing the Wind
-Running
-Summer
-Exciting missions
Dislikes
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-Bathtime
-Strangers
-Spoilsport
-Not tasty food
- Being Hungry
-Tight Places where no Free Run is possible

Write an introduction for your Tracker:

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Dune
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It was the worst day of my entire life, only I did not understand the reason why I was released back in the lab. Have I done anything? Have I failed? I hung up very much of it, for me, my owner is the most important in my life.
I could not sleep all night, I was not hungry, or rather I could eat nothing, absolutely nothing. It was just an awful feeling.
My only thought was, why? Why she want me anymore? We were a great team, every mission we did with ease.
Although, when I was just too playful, and could not really focus on that. But, not everyone makes some mistakes?
Nex rubbed me gently on my long ears and whispered to me while a few reassuring words. She was concerned because I did not eat.However, it turned me off of my mind.
The next day, as currently there was no mission for me to work for, so Nex let me out for running. However, I did not feel to running, I lay down in the shade of a tree and listened simple.
The natural noise sounds so peaceful, it was a beautiful moment where I could just relax. Just forget the past short. But, I still felt the pain, to feel the pain rely on.I looked in my owner, a loyal friend, who himself was in the worst times ever to me. But, I was disappointed.The wind blew through the treetops, a light breeze came up.
Then there was silence, the birds were silent, it was just quiet.Came to rest in me, I fell asleep.

♥Silverflash♥

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The forest was, as always, quietly, peacefully, normally.
Absolutely nothing going on here, I thought to myself. I went to the stable to visit Neri and Gravity.
When I arrived, I was greeted by loud neighing.
I stroked it briefly, then I got the first tines to the mane of Neri to clean, since the last rides by the beach is her mane is still full of dust and sand. Well, you see? Feels the need to feel better, I said to Neri.
Meanwhile Gravity played with the small haystack, which had deposited in his box.I sat down briefly on a hay bale, which was right next to Neri's box, and wondered what I would do today. Raco was with Silverflash and Kirigirisu, Twilight in the meantime took care of the puppies.So I can not do anything with them first.
I spontaneously decided to make a ride on Neri.
When I ride with her through the meadow, her mane does not play dirty so fast. I let Neri and Gravity trot out of the boxes, and prepared them for the ride. Neri I know for a long time, she has no problem with that I ride without a saddle and bridle. Gravity differs Neri not to the sides, so there should be no problem to ride out with both.
Dune
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I dreamed of the good times we had together,
how much fun we had together. But then everything went black, I saw how they went away from me, from me and then passed into nothing gone.
Now I was alone, I felt so alone. I ran through the darkness, looking for Iris, no matter where I hinrannte, I did not find. I tried to increase their smell true, but without success. For me it was an eternity, no matter where I looked, I did not find. I saw how I collapsed from exhaustion. Iris, Iris ... I said with longing.
In shock and sadness that I woke up, the rest it I was blown away. The birds were chirping and the wind blew gently through the treetops. Nevertheless, the feeling of loneliness was still there.
♥Silverflash♥
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It was a beautiful ride, Neri and Gravity were happy as they once were allowed to get away. As I read drive me to the rhythm of Neri, Gravity daweil was cocky and started to run ahead. Gravity! You little bundle of energy! Come back!, I called after him. But he did not react. I was a little bit more pressure on the stirrup, and already began to gallop Neri. Although gravity is a foal, he was pretty fast.
Dune
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My thoughts were interrupted briefly when I wondered wahrnahm.Erst of the distance a light gallop I first by whom or what the sound came.
The galloping grew louder, the sign that it came closer.
♥Silverflash♥
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It is the little guy but quickly, I said to Neri.
It was only a short snort in response.
As soon as I looked away briefly, he was no longer visible.
I was a bit more throttle, and followed the glowing impressions of Gravity.
Dune
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It was close that I could perceive its smell, I felt like the power flowed through his body of this creature. Slowly but clearly, I could see in my mind the shape of this creature. It was small, it looked like a young of a horse.
The little creature was just in front of me, it roared.
I wondered what it wanted from me, I gave a low growl from me. It woke up briefly, but it was still before me.
♥Silverflash♥
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He was still not see it. I started to make me slow to worry, maybe something has happened to Gravity.
Neri was getting too restless. The footprints of Gravity were lighter, which means they are fresh.
Gravity, please, I hope you put anything stupid on .... .
Dune
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There was a brief silence, then the little creature began to speak. My name is Gravity, and you are?
Tell me, do not you know you should talk to strangers. I said dryly. For me, you see, but not from a stranger. Gravity lay before me back in the shade of the tree.
Still, you do not know me at all.
You know, when I ran through the forest, and then looked up left abandoned on the lawn, played it for me no matter if I know you or not, I thought maybe you need somebody to talk to.
Slow me the little guy was really nice. It was good to talk to someone for long hours. After all the hours of the feeling of loneliness. My name is Dune by the way, i said to him.
♥Silverflash♥
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Neri and I approached slowly to the end of the forest. You could slowly see the outline of a meadow, just behind the city was.
We did not know what we would expect there, my heart raced with worry. The ignorance was just terrible. Finally we did not know what happened to Gravity.
Dune
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Did you catch the desire to play? When he got Gravity suddenly began to revolve around me, I am calling upon the games with him. I do not know, I said something unsafe. Come on, it is nice weather here and the place is just perfect for it.
I agree, which of us is the catcher?
Neighing he ran away from me. I started chasing him to run.
It felt good chasing the wind, to feel free.
I started to have fun! All troubles were forgotten.
♥Silverflash♥
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When we reached the end of the forest, I saw on the field Gravity and rumtollen another animal in the meadow.
I jumped down from Neri's back and called Gravity.
Dune
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I heard footsteps, what steps? Was it Gravity's owner? Was it ever be his owner?
Suddenly, Gravity ran again in the direction in which I had heard the steps. During the games I have heard from the distance, a great galloping much stronger and louder than that of Gravity. Now I'm confused, there were steps now or gallop sounds I had heard? I heard Gravity calling me. I ran to him. I was about to be Gravity.
In my mind I could see the outline of a human and a horse, just because the horse was greater than gravity and this time has wings.
♥Silverflash♥
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Gravity ... I'm so glad you're doing, I said full relief. I stroked him gently behind the head.
A quiet snort came from Gravity. Only then, when I stopped stroking Gravity, I noticed on this animal, which was located just behind Gravity. Was it not the same creature I had just seen with Gravity?
It seemed so familiar, it had similarities to those in the city, by flying from and to the city to see if everything is OK, only the here had no wings.
Dune
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There was a brief silence.
So, man is called Desiree, and the great winged horse is called by her Neri said Gravity.
Do not worry, the two are quite nice. You'll both like.
I was still uncertain. Perhaps they would do to me what?
However, I believed in what Gravity had just said. So I waited for the first time as what would happen.
♥Silverflash♥
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Gravity pulls around on my sleeve, first I did not know what he wanted from me. But then, I understood it. I walked carefully to the creature. I slowly put my hand on his head.
At first he shrugged his short, but then when I started stroking him, it seemed that he really enjoyed it.
From that moment on, we began to visit him again when he is playing in the meadow. Later when I found the lab, where he was created, so to speak, I learned from Nex also known as Nex Ta'ar that the name of this creature and about his past. I learned from her, that this species are called "Tracker Dogs" too. Dune more and more accustomed to us.He was very well accepted by the others and got to us as his new family to accept.
Since he is with us, he has blossomed and he seems to enjoy his life properly.

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At first sorry for my english, i know it inst the best one, but im still learning and i hope it is ok how i wrote the story.
And here a little Fanart of Dune (finished it yesterday):
Fanart

When you not know who is Neri or Gravity, more about them here:*CLICK*
And about the story: Why Neri hasn"t flew to Gravity? Because she doesnt like to fly ;)
Who is Desiree? Its me ^^, this is my real name (please dont laugh x3)
Why Desiree cant understand the conversation between Gravity and Dune? Because they are animals,
and you know im not Dr.Doolittle and i cant speak with animals (but i really wanted to ^^)
Last edited by Clive on Thu Mar 17, 2011 5:45 am, edited 11 times in total.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby RainbowBizkit <3 » Sun Mar 13, 2011 5:18 am

Yea Im going to sit out on this one considering the next tracker I try for will be my 3rd
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"I was sick of restrictions sick of the boundaries about to close the door
Such a lack of conviction no real connection what should I settle for
But you caught my attention you built on the tension and you left me wanting more
Now I don't know what to do with myself do with myself I don't want nobody else"
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Clive » Sun Mar 13, 2011 5:25 am

Rev Theory wrote:Yea Im going to sit out on this one considering the next tracker I try for will be my 3rd


Its for my my first try to apply for a Tracker. Because its the first one that i really liked it and fits my personality.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby nowi » Sun Mar 13, 2011 5:26 am

Nex, I was looking at the archives, and I noticed that my aerial custom, Kynä, was not in the archives^^ I was wondering if you could possibly add her?
Just letting you know, and thanks~

    i am no longer that active on cs.
    i am looking to trade all of my pets for art or fr!
    if interested you can pm me or send a trade c:

    i am still using all my ocs!

    if you would like to reach me you can contact me on flightrising!
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Arysis » Sun Mar 13, 2011 5:36 am

Hey, Nex, could I have a tracker?? Because I love the lineart. Are you open???
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