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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Hereisdan » Sun Mar 13, 2011 2:44 am

Hmmmmm I just thought of the most awesome question that I must ask to you Nex... or the other Nex whichever one wants to answer. How are the trackers created? Are they born like normal animals or other ways?

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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby eternalglitch » Sun Mar 13, 2011 2:50 am

Demon-Dragoness wrote:Am I allowed to say that I would very much like to shoot almost every other person (not Joy :lol:) who will be good competition for 28?


No. No you aren't. :lol:
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Palie » Sun Mar 13, 2011 2:53 am

That's quite the story, Nex. I had to read it twice to figure out there's a Nex, but not yourself Nex. it really did seem like 3rd Person for a few minutes.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby cedaar » Sun Mar 13, 2011 2:54 am

MochaLove23 wrote:Darn I love #28 so much! I might wait though, If I were to ever draw it, it would be complicated DX

Agreed, I would fail. (at the drawing and the form. xD )
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby winter. » Sun Mar 13, 2011 2:54 am

Demon-Dragoness wrote:Am I allowed to say that I would very much like to shoot almost every other person (not Joy :lol:) who will be good competition for 28?


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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby DoctorDraca » Sun Mar 13, 2011 2:56 am

WrittenInBlood :3 wrote:Hmmmmm I just thought of the most awesome question that I must ask to you Nex... or the other Nex whichever one wants to answer. How are the trackers created? Are they born like normal animals or other ways?

I promise to answer this question sometime, but I'm currently trying to finish some things so my thoughts are too scattered to give you a good answer.

Palefrost wrote:That's quite the story, Nex. I had to read it twice to figure out there's a Nex, but not yourself Nex. it really did seem like 3rd Person for a few minutes.

I could use charrie Nex' full name next time to make it easier?
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Palie » Sun Mar 13, 2011 2:58 am

Yes yes, much easier. That would probably work out; "Nex" means you, and the full name means the charrie.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby asdjlasfjksdf » Sun Mar 13, 2011 3:34 am

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✖Beautiful, Amazing, Wonderful, Perfect✖
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✖Deadly, Poisonous, Dangerous, Powerful, Cold✖

-✕- Tracker Dog Application Series 9 -✕-

-✕- Username: -✕-

Bloody Halloween

-✕- Tracker Dog you want: -✕-

#28

-✕- Name you'll give it: -✕-

Poisonous Beauty




-✕- Reason why you want it: -✕-

Oh where do I start?
Bio Trackers... I adore them. She's no different. I love everything about her. Some people might think she's unappealing, gruesome looking, but I don't see any of that. I think she's perfect in every way. She just drew me in the moment I saw her. I swear I stared at the computer screen for 5 minutes, just staring. Eventually, my dad had to turn the screen off, because he said I would go blind. Hahaha.
I think that vicious looking Trackers like her are just amazing. The spines, the poisonous veins, the spikes, everything is just... Amazing. I can't think of a better word. Everything about her deadly beauty is perfect to me.
Her spines look like she could be semi-aquatic. That's just what it looks like to me. I'm a sucker for spikes and spines. Guilty as charged.
The fact that she has toxic weapons is also amazing to me. I love Trackers with weapons. They just look powerful and strong, but at the same time, I see them as handsome or beautiful. I like weapons. Again, guilty as charged.
The fact that her own poisons can kill her also made me want her just that much more. Before you go off saying that it's cruel to want something like that on a character, let me explain. Most "toxic" characters on CS are immune to their own poisons and it makes them seem immortal. Also, other toxic characters always glow and have odd markings, but she's much more natural looking.
So as you can see, I love her just about as much as any human can love a picture on a screen, maybe more. I mean, look at her. She's gorgeous. ❤


-✕- Will it be used in any kind of story?: -✕-

Of course! I'd write her own back story, possibly write a book about her [I've been wanting to write a book about a Tracker for months, but I've never won one soo....], I'd even try to fit her into my own story about all of my main characters.

-✕- Describe its personality: -✕-

Loyal

Beauty is extremely loyal, and wouldn't even consider disobeying her trainer's orders. She spits at the more disobedient Trackers, considering them below the loyal and more behaved Trackers. Her trainers never have a problem with her and she will obey only the trainers she has been assigned to. On occasion, her trainer may have to leave her, whether it's to go on vacation, or just to the store. On this sort of occasion, they can put the command of her in the hands of a trusted friend or partner by just ordering her to. Of course, she immediately will being obeying her Trainer when they return.

Slightly Paranoid

Beauty can get extremely worried if she doesn't have her schedule. It keeps her on track, making sure that her belly is always full so she isn't harmed by her toxins.

8:00 am - Wake up and get ready for the day
8:15 am - Breakfast
8:45 am - Mission Assignment
9:00 am - 1:00 pm - Mission[s]
1:05 pm - Lunch
1:45 pm - 4:00 pm - Rest Period
4:05 pm - 5:00 pm - Bath
5:05 pm - Dinner
5:50 pm - 10:00 - Free Period
10:05 - Bed Time

She insists that all of her meals must be the same size, so she knows exactly how much time she has before she must eat again. Every morning, she receives a print-out of her daily schedule. Nothing on this planet could make her stray from the schedule for even a moment, because the fear of her toxins sometimes overpowers her brain.

Powerful

She might be a smaller Tracker than most, but what she lacks in size, she makes up for in power. She is able to out-fight most trackers, no matter how large they are. Her power is usually all because of her stout build. Her compacted muscles give her more force to attack her opponents and get them pulled to the ground.

Intelligent

Beauty is a very good problem solver, and a quick thinker. She might hate math, but she's extremely good at it. Math and science are her strong points, and she has a brain that would rival even the best mathematician. Despite her large brain, shes no good with social studies or foreign languages. Be that as it may, you would definatly want her on your side if it came down to a battle of the wits.

Sentimental

Beauty is always is up for just laying in the grass, staring at the clouds. She takes the time to observe all of the little things that no one else takes the time to see anymore. The first buds of spring, new born birds chirping, sunsets, rainy days. All of those things are what she loves most, and she usually spends her two 'free periods' going out to observe these things. She also has a few things from when she was made in Nex's lab that she holds dear. A bit of her blanket from her pen, her water bowl, even a picture of Nex and her that she wouldn't part from for anything in the world.

Jealous

Beauty can be what people call "The Jealous Type", meaning she doesn't like people taking her spotlight. She doesn't do well with other Trackers because she usually thinks that they're trying to separate her from her trainer. When confronted with another Tracker around her trainer, she usually growls and stands between the two, but one or two times the situations have boiled down to fights. Her jealousness can get her into trouble sometimes, but that doesn't stop her from trying to keep others away from her trainer.


-✕- Favorite Foods: -✕-

Beauty isn't very picky, but there are some things that she prefers over others.

- Apples
- Bacon
- Cheddar Cheese
- Spaghetti
- Strawberries
- Italian Bread
- Peppers [It doesn't matter what kind]
- Chicken [Dark Meat]
- Candy [No Chocolate Though]
- Steak


-✕- Theme Song: -✕-

Sugar We're Goin' Down - Fall Out Boy

-✕- Lyrics That Describe Her Best: -✕-

Am I more than you bargained for yet?
I've been dying to tell you anything you want to hear.
'Cause that's just who I am this week.
Lie in the grass, next to the mausoleum.
I'm just a notch in your bedpost,
But you're just a line in a song.


-✕- Birthday: -✕-

March 9th, 2011

-✕- Likes: -✕-

- Apples
- Heavy Metal, Screamo, Rock Music
- Her Trainer
- Being Accepted For Who She Is
- Rainy Days
- Being Praised
- Going On Tough Missions
- Combat
- Food. Lots And Lots Of Food.
- Good Jokes
- Sunsets
- Hiking


-✕- Dislikes: -✕-

- Any Kind Of Citrus
- Extremely Hot Climates
- Being Ignored
- Being Ridiculed
- Math
- Country, Pop, Hip-Hop, and Rap Music
- Boring Missions [AKA, Missions Not In A Combat Zone]
- Pollution
- Being Hungry
- Salt Water


-✕- Write an introduction for your Tracker: -✕-

-x- Poisonous Beauty -x-

I raced through the forest, my paw pads thudding on the pine needle-covered ground. My armor clicked loudly, and I snarled under my breath. I couldn't remember why I was left out here, but I had a feeling that I was supposed to be looking for something. These stupid plates on my back were going to scare everything within a mile away. I tried scenting the air, but everything was muddled under the overpowering scent of pine. I snarled once again and took off again.
After a few minutes, I grew tired. Why did my armor have to be so loud and bulky!? I walked on, feeling defeated. I would never complete this mission if I was so loud. Then again, I still couldn't remember why I was out here. Maybe I didn't even have a mission. Perhaps the scientists had just left me out here. No no. That was foolish thinking. Nex would never do that to me.
After what felt like hours of walking, I found a small deer carcass. Some wolf or bear must have killed it and left it here to rot. I heard my stomach growl and my ears perked up. I couldn't let the toxins start to eat away at my organs. That thought was the only thing I needed to motivate me. I ran forward and gulped down the deer within minutes. I cleaned myself off and sighed. I listed what I knew in my head.

- I was horribly lost
- I had no food to eat
- I had no schedule
- I'm still horribly loud

Great. All of those things together were a lethal combination. I had no food whatsoever, and no schedule to follow. I was done for. My life was over. I can't operate without my schedule. I settled in a small clearing and looked around. There was no one coming as far as I could tell, and this place didn't look inhabited. With those slightly reassuring thoughts in my mind, I dozed off easily.

-x- Halloween -x-

My leg was sending jolts of pain up my spine, and I couldn't move. How foolish I had been to come out here to hike alone. Now I was laying in a forest, crawling into a cave, and my leg was broken. Lovely.
I found two sticks about the same length and pulled the gauss out of my backpack. At least I had the brains to bring a small first aid kit. I straightened out my leg, gritting my teeth to keep from crying out in pain. I tied the sticks to my leg with the gauss, and tested it out. I couldn't move my leg an inch. Now that I had that covered, I tried to remember what had happened.
Oh yes, I had been hiking when the trail had sloped off on one side, the other side of the trail was bordered with pines trees and other plant life. I hadn't been paying attention, and I had stepped over the edge of the trail. I had fallen a good 20 feet down the hill and ended up here with a broken leg and no cell signal.
After a few hours, I had a small fire started in the cave and I was laying on my back, feeling sorry for myself. At least the pain in my leg was ebbing away. I ate one of my granola bars from my pack and drank a few sips of water. I had watched a lot of those survival shows, and I knew that I should save my water and eat conservatively. Drink a little bit of the water every hour or so, and eat a small bit of your food in the morning, midday, and night before falling asleep. Sounded like a plan to me, but I knew that I would have to hunt before long. That didn't sound like so much of a plan.
After a while, my eyelids started to droop and I dozed off.

-x- Poisonous Beauty -x-

My eyes snapped open and I lept to my feet. It took a few moments before I could place the scent that had jolted me awake. Smoke. It smelled like it was nearby. I almost took off before I realized something, I wasn't burning up or panting to cool myself off. The smoke I smelled was so close by, I should have been extremely hot.
My curiosity piqued and I peeked through the undergrowth. There. A small cave, not big enough for any large predators had a small fire going inside of it. How odd. The only creatures that could start fires were... Humans! My heart raced and I ran forward. It was the scientists, I was sure of it! They had found me and were just waiting for me to wake up! I wasn't lost after all!
When I stumbled into the cave though, the only human I saw was a girl. She looked worse for wear and she was staring at me with wide eyes. We stood there for a few minutes, sizing each other up. How odd. She looked too be in pain, and she was bleeding, but she wasn't being defensive or running away. Most creatures that had taken that much damage would at least try to get away. Then I saw her leg.
It was bent at a grotesque angle and it appeared like she had tried to brace it. She moved towards me tenitively, and I snarled. Backing away, I sat at the edge of the cave. She had food in her pack, I could smell it, but I didn't trust her at all.

-x- Halloween -x-

When the Tracker snarled at me, I flinched, but it just backed away. So we were both wary. I was just glad that it wasn't looking at me like food. I saw how thin the poor thing was, and it looked extremely confused. Perhaps it had gotten lost on a mission? I didn't much care, but it made my heart ache to see the poor thing so thin and scared. I dug through my pack and found some beef jerky. I didn't know if it would take food from me, but I tossed a piece it's way.

-x- Poisonous Beauty -x-

I jumped when the piece of food landed in front of me. I looked up at the human to see her smiling at me reassuringly. Taking a few tenitive steps forward, I sniffed at the food before snapping it up and gulping it down happily.
After that, we shared at meat quietly. I still kept my distance, but that didn't seem to bother the human. She would eat a piece, and toss one to me. We sat there for hours just sharing her food. I was starting to enjoy myself, but she said something and laid down. I presumed that she was tired, so I let her sleep. I sat at the entrance of the cave, watching the moon and the stars slowly turn into the bright morning sky.
After a while, the sun was high in the sky and the human began to stir. I looked over my shoulder at her and walked over. I was far closer than I had been last night, but I knew that she wasn't going to hurt me. I sniffed at her leg and wrinkled my nose. The scent of infection was wafting up from the leg and I took off.

-x- Halloween -x-

When I saw it take off, I wasn't surprised. It was wild now and it appeared to want nothing more to do with me.
I rekindled the fire, and leaned on the wall of the cave. After a few minutes, I heard rustling outside of the cave and saw the Trackers little face appear in the entrance. It's mouth was full of plants and it walked up to me, dropping the plants beside me. I looked them over and discovered quite a few herbs that stop infection. I applied them to my broken leg, and all of my cuts.
After I was done, I saw that it was sitting by the fire. I couldn't help but smile. It appeared that I had a new friend.

3 Months Later...

-x- Halloween -x-

My leg was mending well, and I was walking around, thankfully. I had been living with the Tracker for a while, and I was beginning to understand her language. All of the barks, yips, howls, growls, and clicks meant something and I was beginning to decipher them. I had begun to call the Tracker 'Poisonous Beauty', and she had told me that the spikes on her shoulders could fire toxins.
I heard a rustling from the front of our cave, and I saw Beauty pull a large deer into the cave. Her tail was wagging vigorously and I smiled. She had told me that she loved hunting. Great! Now we have food for tonight. I said in her language. The sentance was a series of excited barks and clicks. She nodded happily and pulled it over to the fire.
After a few hours, I had half of the deer skinned, gutted, and cooking over the fire. Beauty told me that she preferred to eat the meat raw, and I wasn't objecting. Cleaning a whole deer took forever. While she ate happily, I watched the flames lick at the meat laid out over the fire. These last few months with Beauty had been far better than I had thought. Life in the forest was rough, yes, but spending the time with a friend was nice. Beauty had told me all about the lab where she was made, and about a woman named Nex. She raved about Nex, always thinking highly over her and never saying a bad thing about her. The excitement and the light that shone in her eyes when she spoke of the lab where she was born was enough to make my heart soar.
After we had both ate, she settled by the fire. Beauty still wouldn't let me pet her, but I didn't mind. I had a friend and that was all that mattered.

-x- Poisonous Beauty -x-

I listened to the fire crackle and send embers up into the air. They looked like little orange fireflies. It was moments like this that I loved to spend with Halloween. Especially now that we could communicate with each other. So. You've never told me about yourself. All you want to know about is me. What's your story? I asked, looking up at her. It took a moment for Halloween to figure out what I said, but she sighed. My life was boring. I lived in a city, went to school, hung out with some friends. Nothing really interesting. I much prefer to hear about you. You're life is so interesting! She said, her eyes lighting up. I shrugged. I thought my life was rather boring actually.

-x- Halloween -x-

After a while, the fire died down and we watched the stars. Hours and hours of watching the stars, I had taught Beauty to identify all of the constellations. We had spent hours pointing out different groups of stars, and even making up our own constellations after a while, just for laughs.
My eye lids began to droop and I hobbled into the back of the cave. I settled into a small bed that Beauty and I had made out of pine needles and the softest moss we could find. I yawned and curled up, feeling Beauty jump into the bed beside me. I only remained awake long enough to feel her finally settle down, then I slipped into sleep.

-x- Poisonous Beauty -x-

I laid there for a while, just listening to Halloween's gentle breathing. I pressed closer to her and sighed contentedly. I thought for a while about all of the memories we had in the little cave and couldn't help the small wave a joy that washed over me at the thought.
Just before I fell asleep as well, I nuzzled my head under her hand and my heart soared. She was my Trainer, and mine alone.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Clive » Sun Mar 13, 2011 3:48 am

I love the Theme song ^^
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Sun Mar 13, 2011 3:53 am

I wouldn't quote the whole thing... For I, it takes awhile to scroll through.
im basically never on, so if you wanna with trade me or if you message me, be prepared to wait a while for a response. this account is first and foremost a personal archive for sentimentality's sake as it was a big part of my childhood.
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