Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

[RainbowBizkit <3]

Oh few ok thank you ^^ now I can take my time and not rush my story (Mines On page 187 ^^)

[Icesky]

Oh few ok thank you ^^ now I can take my time and not rush my story (Mines On page 187 ^^)

Well, I'm not entirely positive, so I would just try and find a good place to end it instead of carrying it on, just in case Nex is currently in the process of judging at the moment.

[RainbowBizkit <3]

I finished my form

[Rohan.]

Tracker Dog Application Series 8
Username:
Revengefulwolf
Tracker Dog you want: #25
Name you'll give it:
Lycan (means wolf)
Reason why you want it:
Because its exactly what ive been
looking for, hes exotic and wild,
he looks like he seems like a
match to my personality he looks
strong, and willing to fight at any
given moment,I love his design
Will it be used in any kind of story?
maybe, if its ok with you i might put it in a story im writing(if i get Him) (ill put a link to the story soon)




Describe its personality:

-Fiesty-
He seems like the type of tracker that if he or any of his loved ones was threatened or hurt hed snap right back at them and show them what pain is.

-Stubburn-
He wont give up. He wont just stop. Hes a stubburn tracker, cant stand to be told what to do.

-Helpful-
He likes to help in the labs, hes a wonderful guard tracker and is pretty good at finding scents and leaks of any kind, he could help train new trackers.

-Determined-
when he sets his mind to something he wont stop till its done, no matter how long it takes.
-kind- he does have a bad side and is known for holding grudges but he is sweet and nice when he likes you.

Write an introduction for your Tracker:
I -mentally- blink myself awake slowly, W-where am i? is my first thought but as i lift my head and welll....it could be called look, but i really sense my surounding and then form a picture -that is usually quiet acurate- in my head, so i look around there are bodies litered around where i lay. What happened?! A pure black tracker is sniffing around one, im unsure who it is, or what they are doing. "Who are you" i snarl, attempting to stand. Its head turns to look at me and i see that it has eyes. "Your not a tracker..." is my second statement, then i hear its tounge flicking, the animal wouldnt be able to make that sound unless it had a toungue as long as mine.... Which im proud of. "But your toungue..." I can feel the ground vibrate as its head moves, its sniffing. But if it has eyes then it should be able to just look at me... "Your eyes sights bad..." Its ear flicks. "your ears are huge..." but thats about all i can get out of my sences. Well that is untill it starts moving, it dashes forward and collides with me, easily smashing me into the ground.
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"Tracker why are you here?" What are you talking about? "Tracker can you here me? flick your ears."
Why are you calling me tracker? What ears? "This tracker might be gone, Blaze." "What the heck did your monster do to him? Why did it kill the rest of the squadren?" Blaze? Whos that? Monster? are they talking about that black.. thing? Squad... MY SQUADREN! The fog leaves my head as soon as i hear that my squadrens dead. My head pops off the floor and my fangs are bared, im slow at getting up but eventually do that too. Their scents say that theres two humans, that thing.... and blood. My head aches and my shoulder feels wet. With a quick lick of my shoulder i know the blood is mine. "There blaze see its not dead." a female says. "Fine sedate it and move it to the holding pen, where Zina can check on it later." Another female answers. "k" I hear the monster behind them snort. Its clearly not happy with this decesion. It almost makes me happy that im driving that thing insane, but with the humans thinking of sedating me.... I feel a quick pinch to my shoulder and then my mind goes foggy, but before i lose consciousness i feel the monster get up and walk to me, it steps on my throat and whispers in my ear. "You stay away from my humans. When they put you in the 'holding pen-" i hear the sarcasm in its voice when it says holding pen, and wonder why, "You leave my child alone." ut oh. This isnt a good facility to be in, i now know why this monster has eyes but is mostly tracker, This is a training facility, where they try to make the trackers better any way they can. "Wa....-"
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"Hey wake up!" huh? "Tracker! Wake up!" who is that? "Blaze this trackers having issues again! We cant fight it yet..." Problems?? its called im tired... I felt a kick on one of my sides. "BLAZE!" "What zina! It wasnt awake, theres nothing wrong with it its just being lazy. I cant believe they let it on the tracking team!" i heard a sharp barkish type sound to my left. 'LEAVE HIM ALONE!' it was the tra-monster. "SHUTUP MUTT!" screamed the one called blaze. I lifted my head slowly and felt one of the humans leaving the other knelt down next to me and rubbed my side where other human had kicked me. "Tracker.... You need a name... hmmm How about.... Lycan? itll do for now. Anyways im getting you out of here."
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Fire. Theres a fire. Whats going on? I try to speak but something has tied my mouth close, i have only enough space to move my toungue. No. Theyre going to leave me here. Help... without eyes i can only tell where the fire is by how hot it gets when i walk, and since i wouldnt be able to tell as well while running im stuck walking. This is bad. I stand and start to walk. It takes less than two minutes to find the first of the fires. It was large and hard to go around due to the debris. There was a later that i crawled over to get past it. The second fire is when i scorched my paw, i hadnt noticed that it was getting hotter. Finnaly when im outside i think its ok to spend a little time getting this thing off my mouth. When thats done i begin to run, feeling a little bit queasy i dont go fast, but my paw aches and i need something to drink to i run towards the strong scent of a nearby forest.
WIP!

[DoctorDraca]

Tracker Dog Application Series 8
Username: Rev Theory!
Tracker Dog you want: 24
Name you'll give it: Jaden (Name changes to LightStreak)
Reason why you want it: I Love the blue, Blue is my all time favortie color plus he loves the night, I preffer to wait til the sun goes down til I enjoy outside. I always think the night is like a second world, The sky shimmers a black color it only lights up by the tiny stars in the sky. It reminds me how beauftiful the world is, and I bet it makes Jaden think that to. I also have made a post in my Charcter Thread thats for trackers thats been empty for about a month now and I dream one day I will have a beautiful tracker to put there and liven it up if you dont believe me come here: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=451508
Nex I must say so far (including customs) This is the best tracker that you have ever made and I really want to be the owner of this beautiful boy.
Plus it would be an honor for him to be my first tracker, He is so beautiful that if I get him I will fall out of my chair and cry tears of joy and if I loose him I will be sad for awhile. I love how his designs are they just remind me of outer space and everything we could be if we tried. His personalty makes me think that we are all great, and hold a huge wad of power in our hands, and that we can accomplish anything.

Will it be used in any kind of story?
Yes I love my storys! This ones a little long and has some ''Bloody" or as you say "Graphic sence such as guts and blood but not unrealistic like "He automaticlly ripped out the guys heart and swallowed it" I hate it when people do that. This one will use real life situations and real life threats. This is an action packed adventure, with danger at every turn, enjoy!


Describe its personality:
Shy
In situations with other trackers or people this little tracker doesnt exactly run to them. He most likely will listen to how they act from a far, rather then upfront thats how him and Coan met upfront and personal, he knows never ever to do that again. Coan was his previous partner and was rather abusive to him, His new owner will make a promise to Jaden and make this tracker the happiest in the world.

Curious
Jaden is very curious though he might be shy, but he still wanders in other peoples bussiness. He always tends to mess up what your doing by walking over it or sitting right by your face waiting for you to finish whatever your doing. Though Jaden looks like a normal tracker he isnt, he tends to watch as you work although he cant see you, he looks curiously at you when doing something thats not with him when you are supposeively suppost to be with him.


Fun
Jaden is a very fun and enthuseastic tracker, although he enjoys being by himself at times he trys to make the joy pop out of him in every situation he faces although he doesnt in crime and dangerous situations. He loves being around other trackers and creates a fun atmosphere for those around him, almost everyone likes this tracker Jaden and thinks he makes their lives a bit better by meeting him. His sprit glows like his markings, legend says his glowing markings were formed after he was born and was found to be a fun gentle soul.


Loving
He cares alot about hurt or depressed trackers and will do his best to see that they are comforted, healed, or filled with joy. He cares very much about his species, and loves every single one of them including aquatic, stealth, aerial, and wild he treats them all with love and cares about each one of them. He enjoys caring for others, and making sure they are healthy and safe. He trys not to look behind him and only infront of him, the past is left in the past and the future is coming.

Fear
Every night he fears Coan will come and snatch him away from the world and kill him, like he almost did back at the farm. He always watches his keeps his ears pricked and his nose alert for the foul stench of Coan. Fear mostly never strikes this tracker but when he smells Coan and hears him, He runs as fast as he can to escape the devil.

Loner
Jaden preffers to be a loner although at points he loves being with others, he enjoys the peacefulness of not having anyone around but himself. Specially young trackers, he preffers nbot to have young trackers with him that will bounce off him every day while he is sleeping, instead of at night when he is fully up and ready to go. Jaden loves his life as a loner.

§Likes§
-Cold nights
-The wilderness
-Hunting
-Mice (to eat)
-To have a companion

♣Dislikes♣
-The large loud city
- Eating off a dog bowl
-Cats
-Dogs
-Being alone 24/7
-Last partner Coan


Theme song:
Broken Bones By Rev Theory

What Season is it:
It is the very start of fall, Forevers favorite season, though he cant see anything in the outside world he can hear and in the woods the leaves fall giving away places that prey or predators could be hiding.

Write an introduction for your Tracker:
I sat on the grassy hill looking over all of the woodland territory, there was a small gust of wind blowing my fur back in forth and the night sky looked more beautiful tonight then last night. It was dark black and had billions of stars scattered all across it, with a big full moon right in the center tonight was perfect. Although each night I really hate sitting here alone I can hear everything around me, and sence when somethings moving for me by vibrations bouncing off everything this great big world has to offer and I have the ability to tell when its night and day but still, "its a cold cruel world" I thought to remebering my last partner. I shivered remebering the nightmares that haunted me of him, he hated me with every part of his body and always lashed out at me with anything he could beat me with. I managed to escape one day hopping the fence and never looking back just saved my life now I was here in this wonderful free place for two months now, I liked humans they're all different I just happened to get the worse one on the planet when I tried to get a partner.

I felt a breeze whip around me wildly, like a savage ocean wave whipping the shore. Surely at first I thought it was just a regular breeze then I heard something moving closer behind me, footsteps cracked the leaves and snapped a branch. I spun around and stood up hearing the thing getting closer and closer to me. I put my foot ut and moved it a little, it was plump and fat. "Rabbit" I thought sighing and turning back around to feel the wind lap at my fur. I laid down in the grass feeling it rub my face as I set my head down in it. It made me feel free, and though no one was around to hold me or be by me, I still loved the cool feeling of the night. I thought to myself drifting into sleep as I knew the night time was leaving and the day time was approaching.


I yawned waking up from the long sleep I had the day before. It was cool and moist around me I knew it was night, I thought yawning standing on shakey legs. Suddenly a gun shot fired, and a bullet wizzed past my left ear, I ducked just missing it.
Startled another rang out at me but missed by far, I turned and ran down the left side of the hill and raced into the forest of trees. As I ran footsteps followed me along with the small footsteps of dogs, Barks rang out behind me along with gun shots. I took a sharp turn and raced into a large bush, laying in the grass I listened and smelled for the dogs which were getting closer and closer. One of the dogs stopped running and sniffed the ground around the bush I was in the human loaded his gun and waited for the dogs bark. I smelled the scent of the human, my heart raced it was Coan. I tried not to let out a cry of terror and stepped back still crouched down, and started to leave the bush when a crack sounded from my back right foot "no! stupid branch!" I thought listening. I listened closer and waited, suddenly the dog struck its head in the bush I was In and barked as loud as it could. I high tailed it running as fast as I could. Panting and running threw the obsticle of trees, I smelled Coan racing after me and the two dogs were close behind him barking as loud as they could. I senced a cliff approaching as I ran forward, So I began to slow down and turned backing towards the cliff I tried to smell where Coan was directly standing, but swayed my head in every direction snarling. "Hey Jaden" he said reaching his hand out to me. I back up more feeling my right foot slip off the cliff I heard the tiny rocks fall gently down to the bottom of the 20 foot drop.


The dogs snarled and I could sence one of them approached me on each side of Coan. "Now Jaden, if you dont follow us back home we will make sure you fall down that drop" He said snickering. I sighed hearing the dogs turn around and Coan turned around to although he grabbed the back of my neck, and I let him drag me threw the forest alittle ways until he let go of me. "Walk" He demanded kicking me in the right leg, I turned and snarled at him but he just smacked my muzzle and told me to walk again. I had it with this guy, turning to face him I snarled and bit into the flesh of his leg, warn salty blood poured into my mouth as my teeth sunk farther and farther into his leg. Yelling Coan grabbed my head and threw me off his leg, the dogs turned around and snarled as I darted to the right and ran from the two beast-like animals I heard Coan yelling to the dogs, and I heard him drop to the ground and, I smelled his blood pouring out onto the dirt.

As I ran one of the beast-like dogs swiped at my left ankle hitting it dead on, I tried not to let out a cry of pain as the other dog was gaining on me, I decided I was going to make a hard right turn. Slipping out of the dogs reach I flew to the right sending the dogs straight over a hill and down into the river that lay farther beyond it. Panting my markings began to glow in the moon light and I heard something crawling towards me. Pricking my ears I smelled the tangy scent of blood, inching its way closer and closer to me, I relized it was Coan, When was he going to give up? I heard him trying to stand up "You foul dog" He snapped staggering towards me, I snarled but shook in my footsteps Coan was capible of anything even when he was hurt. Bracing myself I ran toward him snarling I opened my mouth and took out his left leg this time, My teeth sunk into the flesh around his shin and I heard him cry in pain as I let go. Now he was finished if I wanted I could leave him hgere to die after what he did to me, but Im not a horrible tracker. After Coan had passed out from the loss of blood I began dragging him by his shirt down the grassy hill I would take him to the city and leave him in the street then someone would find him and take care of him, I thought to myself dragging his unconsoius body along the grass.


My Limbs grew more and more tired every second I dragged him, it had been two hours since I left the forest, it usually takes two hours to get to the city but since I was dragging Coan it was going to be another hour before we got there, and the worst part is thats its day time now so i'm getting tired. After about a half hour I dropped Coan and laid myself in the grass for a mintue, I felt my markings glow as if I had done something right. Instead of killing COan I took him back where he belonged and something about that moment made me spark with energy. Getting up full of confidence, I grabbed Coans shirt and dragged him along another half hour. Finally we were right outside the city full of zooming cars and angery people, I sighed and dragged Coans Body right out onto the side walk of the town, then I ran my footsteps thudded in the mudand my markings began to glow when I heard a voice. "Here tracker, tracker, tracker!" It said. I stopped running and turned around, puzzled I heard a human stepping toward me cautiously, it smelled of wild flowers and berrys. "Come here boy its ok" It said calling me, I stepped closer and relized it was a female human. I began to walk closer to her then when we were face to face I stuck my nose to her and smelled her, she giggled and lightly stroked my face with her gentle soft hand.

"Your not from around here ae you?" She said stroking me gently, I just sat down in front of her and wagged my tail a bit listening to what she had to say. My markings glowed unexpectedly and she stopped stroking me "Wow" she said "I have never seen a tracker like you before, you must be very speical" She said putting her palm over my glowing markings. "I think I will call you LightStreak" She said patting my head "See you around sometime" She said turning around to leave. But I didnt want her to leave she was a kind person and I liked her so I followed her. After about five mintues she relized I was following her. She gasped to I felt her hand come down gently on my head, "Well if you like me so much you can follow me home" She laughed as I began to follow her away from the town onto a small grassy territory, I heard sirens and smelled the blood of Coan the peoplke were now finally taking him away and I was free of him forever.

WIP!!!!!!

I know that you've been trying your absolute best for a couple of Trackers, and both in terms of improvement and tolerance towards the others, you've gotten much better. For that alone you deserve this guy, although the nice form sure helped too.

[Rohan.]

Way To Go!!

[Queen Vivane]

Rev! Congrats my friend you've tried so hard and never once given up and now all your hard work has payed off you has a tracker to call your own -glomps-

[corgie]

Congrats Rev Theory! :D

I told you, that you would win one day(:

[Rhyur]

... I wish i had more time. I wanted him so bad, well congrats Rev... i do hope you take good care of him... Daww...

[RainbowBizkit <3]

*Falls out of chair* Thank you so much Nex! I love him your the best! I cant believe I got him I was so stunned to see you picked my form! Im aboslutly dumbfounded and I feel like I could cry tears of joy! Thank you so much yet again


Thank you guys For the COngratulations