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kalon artist entry - 二 by kyuba

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Artist kyuba [gallery]
Time spent 16 hours, 47 minutes
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kalon artist entry - 二

Postby kyuba » Thu Mar 30, 2017 8:22 am

      kinda reminds me of twilight sparkle

      second entry
      would like critique.

      white lines are removable - only for personal touch.
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Re: kalon artist entry - 二

Postby TinyDragonz » Thu Mar 30, 2017 8:28 am

In my own personal opinion I would have added a smoother transition of color to the paws and add a little more stars/freckles to the paws to give it a more of the mystic space feel.Other then that I enjoy this a lot and I just want to to stick my hand in the galaxy fur ^^
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Re: kalon artist entry - 二

Postby WanSham » Sat Apr 01, 2017 12:40 am

bless these color oml aaHH
The only thing I have to say is to ease up on the pixels on the hair? It makes it a little cluttered. Other than that its aMAZING
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