kalon artist entry - ワン by kyuba

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kalon artist entry - ワン

Postby kyuba » Wed Mar 29, 2017 3:03 pm

      exploring the brushes on oekaki
      no pen pressure used.

      would appreciate critique, thank you.
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Re: kalon artist entry - ワン

Postby sicknasty » Wed Mar 29, 2017 7:06 pm

this is so gorgeous! the colours and blending on the hair is just amazing. the only criticism that i have is that the lines on the edited tail seem really thin in comparison to the rest of the body, but that's not a major issue!
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Re: kalon artist entry - ワン

Postby Hinoka » Wed Mar 29, 2017 7:09 pm

This has me shookt, I love it

sorry bro I don't have enough art skill to critique, but it's amazing tbh
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Re: kalon artist entry - ワン

Postby lovestruck » Wed Mar 29, 2017 10:41 pm

Wow! This is awesome! The colors blend really nicely! The only
Critique is the tail lines are a little thin and the random white splotches on the lines don't look very nice
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Re: kalon artist entry - ワン

Postby OswinTheFox » Wed Mar 29, 2017 11:36 pm

This is stunning!!! The only thing I don't like/am confused about is the white lines? I don't really see a point in them? Unless you plan on making some white items like a few other artist it's kinda confusing and hurts my eyes ^.^'
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Re: kalon artist entry - ワン

Postby eli ayase » Thu Mar 30, 2017 12:16 am

i personally love the white lines! it gives a touch of artistic liberty and its quirky! excellent entry!
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Re: kalon artist entry - ワン

Postby colambo » Thu Mar 30, 2017 12:53 am

its so pretty ;o;

critique: use the eye ref so i can see what the other eye and tongue looks like! ^w^
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Re: kalon artist entry - ワン

Postby rem sleep » Thu Mar 30, 2017 1:03 am

This is pretty. :0c
I feel like the white lines are distracting and a bit too harsh on the eyes in places, however, and I think the design is a bit busy in the mid-section with too many different patterns-- though that might just be me. cx They do look nice though! The edits are really well done. I look forward to seeing more of your entries! :0c
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Postby Guest » Thu Mar 30, 2017 5:17 am

      ghh ,, i love ,,
      ngl i really like the white lines :0
      the whole design gives off a v experimental feel, but in a good way !
      rly good way
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      one thing i noticed though, is that the lines on the tail are a bit thinner than the rest you used for edits, which makes it look a bit out of place n odd -- it might be a good idea to use the same brush size for all your edits which are all done really well mm unless you were going for that ? <":
      & it also might be good if you added the eye + mouth ref, [palette/paw ref prolly aren't too important in most cases] so we can see what colour those things are ! super neat design in general tho, i highkey hope you become an artist my guy
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Re: kalon artist entry - ワン

Postby Curious » Thu Mar 30, 2017 8:20 am

whe e ze
this is so good i love it
especially the colors and the texture
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