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Re: Zvers ~Join the Hunt!~

Postby Cion Keiasta » Sun Mar 06, 2011 4:34 am

*kicks Metta for not telling about this thread*

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Zver you want:
Escaped Zver #CC7332
Name:
Azura Zelda meaning "blue gray battle maid"
Reason you want it:
Well... She is very beautiful and the color combination fit well with her design. I would love her very much xD Even though there was another zver that I could have posted a form for, but I just fell in love with her instead so I posted a form of course. So yeah xD
Personality:
She may look gentle but she is very dangerous. But with her owner she can be very kind and obedient. She has a yin yang personality. When I mean by yin yang personality is one moment she is sweet and all that and the next something vicious and dangerous. One of the ways she gets at her enemies is lure them into her trap and kill them. She is courageous, strong hearted, and determined.
Introduction/Story:
First point of view:
Ugh... Where am I? All I remember is having freedom in the woods then something hitting me on the head. Wait. What is this smell? Cage? Wait another smell of another zver. I look next to my cage, I see another male zver. What are they doing to him? Inserting something sharp in him. He just dropped dead suddenly. Then those two legged people stood there laughing. I heard them say, "What should we do to that one" while pointing at me. I realized what they were doing. I had to I must get out of here. But how? But then I heard them saying that they'll deal with me tomorrow. Good that will let me make my escape tonight.
A Few Hours Later:
How to get out of this cage? I'll try to body slam it. It took me a few times but then I smashed it open. I was running around the whole place blindly. Its dark here... I realized the exit is just around that corner. Darn.. That night guard is in the way. I have no choice. I must kill him. I can hear him screaming for his life. I don't care. Now my freedom is here! I run outside into my freedom... And who is this? Whose dark shadow looms over me? Wait it is doing what to me?!?! It has a warm and kind feeling hands. Just who is this?
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Re: Zvers ~Join the Hunt!~

Postby Metallic Dragon » Sun Mar 06, 2011 4:55 am

*gets kicked* Owwie... Haha I knew you'd find it in your own due time, and it's only been up for about 5 days, so you found it fairly quickly.
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Re: Zvers ~Join the Hunt!~

Postby LostPeace » Sun Mar 06, 2011 4:59 am

FINNISHED!
Username: ¤legend¤
Zver you want: CC3114
Name: Titan
Reason you want it: Zvers look AWESOME. plus cc3114 fits my personallity
Personality: Aggressive, Headstrong, kind to only the ones he likes, Brave
Introduction/Story:
(Sorry for spelling and sorry for saying a whole bunch 'I' for legends story
Italics mean they were thinking)

¤legend¤'s story

Here i am, walking around a dense forest, the place i like best, moving around the trees, bushes, ivy. Left, Right, weaving through. I take in my surroundings as i move farther in the woods. I stop near a small stream and i nothice in the mud is a paw print.
Its freash i thought, and stared following the tracks curious of what it is. I make my way into a large grassy meadow. Looking around i hear moving in the tall grass and a head pokes out and stares at me. He growls stareing at me. I back up just alittle bit and the creature moves closer and i notice he has a scratch on his side. I try moving closer but he just lunges foward. I back away just alittle bit and sit down on the cold ground. I watch as the creature settles down and lays down onto the ground. i laid my head onto the ground pretending to sleep untill the creatre gets up and moves farther away then laying back down falling asleep. I move closer to him and i look at his wound. I walk back to the stream and i take off my sweater and soak it with water. Wow it was chilly just wearing a tee shirt. I walk back to the sleeping creature then i remember a post about him
Hes a zver i thought,
I carefully cleaned his wound as lightly as i can so i dont wake him then i went back to my spot and lit a small fire to warm up.
Suddenly the Zver woke up fast and was shaking.
I smiled at him and said calmly "Its warmer by the fire"
She watched as he got up and layed down by the fire. He liked his wound then laid his head onto his paws. I reached out my hand and started to pet his head but the moved his head away. I kept my hand there waiting to see if he wanted peted. Surprised he put his head under her hand as if wanted peted and layed his head back onto his paws and i started to pet him again. He fell asleep and i stoped petting him and layed down in my spot falling asleep as well.
The sun was shining by the time i wake up, The Zver was still sleeping. I get up and walk toward the stream. I looks around waonder how i can get some food for the Zver. I start to dig a large deep hole and the Zver appears. I keep digging and when im done i stand up and look around for some large sticks, I put them over the hole and i put some leaves on it. Also i throw some dirt on it as well. I start to walk back to the fire pit and turn to looks at the Zver. he was stareing at the pit trap.
"You coming?" she called to the zver. He wagged his tail then took one last look then came over.
I sit down then reach my hand to pet the zver, "Thats i pittrap i made, Animals will walk over it and fall in, we will go look later to see whats in there.
Ater and hour or so i got up and started to walk to the pit trap, The zver was at her site.
"Your alittle bigger than a great dane i think ill call you Titan. They arived at the pit trap and the sticks were broken. I look down into the trap and see two rabbits. One dead, it looks like it broke its neck, The other alive
Hmm thats werid they must have fell together she thought
i reaches down and pulls out the dead rabbit
"Here titan" i said
He fearcely grabs the rabbit and he bites my hand
"Ow!"
i pull my hand away quickly and looks at the bite.
Surprised he rasped his tounge over my hand. I smiled slightly and walked to the stream to wash it off. She came back to titan and petted his head. He still looked hungry. I reached down into the pit and grabed the alive rabbit by the neck. I looked at Titan "Still Hungry, boy?"
He started to wag his tail.
"Ok im gonna sit this rabbit onto the ground and relese it. You chase it and capture it"
I sat the rabbit on the groung and looked at titan stareing at it. I relesed it and watch as titan chases it down and catches it quite fast. I turns her head away not wanting to see him eat the rabbit
After he has finnished I ask "Titan do you wanna come home with me."
He wagged his tail and I smiled.
They set off weaving through the trees making there way to a house. I walk toward a door and look back at titan "Come on its safe dont worry" He darted over and they go into the house.
"Thank Goodness my parents still arnt home from their buessness trip or they would not let me keep you cause of my hand, Make yourself comefortable"
I got to a table and look through the mail finding the flyer about lost Zvers. I pick up the phone dialing the number.
A man Picks up "Hello, Have you seen any Zvers? "
"Yes i have its in my house i trust him"
"Be carefull their dangerous"
"I know"
"What does it look like?" he asked
"He is Brown, Black and white"
"Sounds like your talking about #CC3114"
"I like him, I call him Titan, Hes super nice"

(This part goes with Numbers. If i get Him read number 1 below if i dont read number 2)

(1 is if i get him)
1. "How nice is he to you?"
"Well he had a wound and when he was asleep i cleaned it, He bit me when i gave him food but he licked my hand, He wagges his tail to me, He allows me to pet him"
"Humm, it sounds like you two have a close bond, You should should keep #CC311.. I mean Titan.
"Really Thank you!!"
"But if he causes any trouble call us right away"
"Ok"
I hang up the phone and pet Titan, "You get to stay here this is your home now"

(2 is if i dont)
2. "Ok we will be by to pick him up"
"Aww Ok"
i hang up the phone and look at titan sadly.
"You have to go back where you came."
He started to growl at her his eyes full of anger then he stalks to a different room
An hour later a truck came and 3 men came in.
He fights the men, Attacking, biteing anyway to get away. She watches sadly as they overpower him and drag him into a crate.
"Bye titan"
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Titan's Stoary
He was running, faster than he wanted. The only thing on his mind was to get away from humans, go as far as he can. He kept going and ran into a path of a bear. He let out a fearce growl
I can take him! he thought.
The bear roared fearcely and stood on its hind legs.
He backed up alittle bit then he lunged foward and bit its hind leg.
The bear when back onto all fours and racked its large claws down his side
He let out a whimper and ran off. He made his way to a stream and bent down his head and lapped up the chilly water. His moved on walking, the scratch gave him to much pain to run. He made his way to a large meadow with tall grass. He walked into the grass to stay hidden and he layed down onto the terrain and licked his wound. He started to doze to sleep but his ears perked and he heard someone by the trees. He stood up and peaked out of the grass to see a girl looking at him. He let out a growl
Stay Away he thought
But she just took a step back. He step out of the grass hoping that that would make her go away or move away but she just came closer. He lunged foward hopefully to scare her. It worked a little bit but she just backed up like two more steps and sat down. Too tired and weekend from the bear to attack he laid down to rest. The girl layed down and fell asleep.
I cant stay this close he thought and moved alittle bit father away and layed back down and feel asleep.
(Dreaming)He was running around a lush green forest, There were no humans for miles, He felt happy, Prey everywhere, More of his kind. He could have ran forever around the forest he was in. Suddenly he fell into ice cold water. It stunded him and he thrashed trying to get out. Shivering he woke up. He looked around seeing the girl next to a fire. She smiled at him and said "Its much warmer by the fire"
So he cauthously stood up and moved toward the fire and layed down next to it. He looked at his side to look at his wound and licked at it more, it felt much better as if someone put cold water on it. He looked at the girl
I like her, he thought, shes very nice and cares.
He layed his head onto his paws and the girl reached over and petted him. He moved his head away but she kept her hand out, He put his head under her hand knowing he can trust her. He layed his head back onto his paws and fell asleep with her peting his head.
He wakes up. The fire burnt out and the girl has gone. He streches and starts to follow her scent. He finds her digging a large hole and he sits and watches. Curious he wonders what she is doing. He watches as she finnishes digging and watches as she puts large sticks onver the trap along with leaves and dirt.
What is she doing? He wondered. She started to walk away and he as still looking at it. She called to him "You Coming?"
He couldnt help to wag his tail, he took one last glance and troted over to her. They arrived to where the fire was and she sat down and started to pet his head,
"Thats a pit trap",She told him, "Animals will walk over it and fall in. We will go look later and see whats in there"
He couldnt help to let his tounge roll out. He was starving, He couldnt recall the last time he ate.
After it felt like ages, They started to go to the the pit trap.
"Your alittle bigger than a great dane i think ill call you Titan." She told him
I have a name, he thought and wagged his tail. They made it to the pit trap and the girl looked down, He looked down also, His mouth started to drowl
FOOD!!
She pulled out a dead rabbit and held it out to him
"Here Titan" she said
His mind went blank, He lashed grasping onto the rabbit pulling it away from her.
"Ow!" he heard
He droped the rabbit and looked at her, He rasped his tounge over the bite.
She smiled slightly and went to the stream.
He dung his teeth into the soft flesh of the rabbit, devoreing it in large bites.
She came back and asked, "Still hungry, boy?"
He started to wag his tail
YES! YES!
"Ok im gonna sit this rabbit onto the ground and relese it. You chase it and capture it" she said
He watched the rabbit and braced himself as if she would relese it when he was not ready. She relesed it and he started to chase it, Gaining speed till he was on the rabbits heals. He leaped on it pining down the small creature and dug his insizors into the flesh till scarlet blood ozed out of the wound, Perceing the rabbit's jaggular the creature went limp.
He cared the rabbit back and layed it down and devored it in large bites.
After he was finnished the girl askes "Titan wanna come home with me?"
A home? Really? Will a really have a home?
He waggs his tail enthusiasticly.
They Make their way to a house. he stays near the trees while The girl goes to the door. She turns to lok at him
"You coming?"
He looks around then bolts to her. They go inside.
"Make yourself comfortable"
He lays down while the girl goes to the table.
He closes his eyes and he hears the , Beep, Beep, of a phone. He dozes off while she talks on the phone not paying attention.

(Remember numbers again. 1 if i get him 2 if i dont.)
( 1 if i keep him)
He started to pay attention again,
"Really Thank you!!"
"But if he causes any trouble call us right away"
"Ok"
She hangs up the phone and pets him, We waggs his tail happilay
"You get to stay here this is your home now" she said
He waggs his tail faster
I HAVE A HOME

(2 if cant have him)
He started to pay attention again
"Ok we will be by to pick him up"
"Aww Ok"
She hangs up the phone and look at titan sadly. "You have to go back where you came."
His heart sank, He stood up and growled at her, eyes blazing with fury
I thought i had a home, i guess not
He Stalked off into a different room
After a while a truck came and 3 men came in. She watches sadly as they catch him and drag him an a crate.
They tryed to catch him,
No im not going back!!
He lashed out, attacking the men, But they caught him and put him in a wooden block.
He peacked out a hole looking at the girl sadly.
"Bye titan"
bye






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When trying to enter the Queens Chamber:
"LostPeace was alarmed by a large beetle scurrying down the back of their shirt and ran to get changed."
Haha, So me.
You know I am in love with this summer event because I plan to be an archaeologist myself. x)



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Re: Zvers ~Join the Hunt!~

Postby Metallic Dragon » Sun Mar 06, 2011 6:44 am

The forms for #CC3114 will be judged in approximately four hours, hurry and get them done!
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Re: Zvers ~Join the Hunt!~

Postby LostPeace » Sun Mar 06, 2011 8:29 am

Cool im finnishing my form, Im almost done Yay XD
When trying to enter the Queens Chamber:
"LostPeace was alarmed by a large beetle scurrying down the back of their shirt and ran to get changed."
Haha, So me.
You know I am in love with this summer event because I plan to be an archaeologist myself. x)



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Re: Zvers ~Join the Hunt!~

Postby Metallic Dragon » Sun Mar 06, 2011 8:49 am

Awesome! I'm sure it will be great!
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Re: Zvers ~Join the Hunt!~

Postby LostPeace » Sun Mar 06, 2011 9:10 am

Yay now im finnished,
these are so awesome i would never pass them up
When trying to enter the Queens Chamber:
"LostPeace was alarmed by a large beetle scurrying down the back of their shirt and ran to get changed."
Haha, So me.
You know I am in love with this summer event because I plan to be an archaeologist myself. x)



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Re: Zvers ~Join the Hunt!~

Postby Metallic Dragon » Sun Mar 06, 2011 9:22 am

Alrighty, I'll probably start judging in about 30-40 minutes^^
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Re: Zvers ~Join the Hunt!~

Postby RainbowBizkit <3 » Sun Mar 06, 2011 9:47 am

wait! i just found these can I make a form? will new ones be out today?
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"I was sick of restrictions sick of the boundaries about to close the door
Such a lack of conviction no real connection what should I settle for
But you caught my attention you built on the tension and you left me wanting more
Now I don't know what to do with myself do with myself I don't want nobody else"
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Re: Zvers ~Join the Hunt!~

Postby Metallic Dragon » Sun Mar 06, 2011 9:49 am

The new ones will be out tomorrow after I judge the third one. I'll be judging #CC3114 in a few minutes. So if you'd rather wait for the next group to come out tomorrow, you can do that and have the full amount of time to fill out the form.
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