Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby ↫mars↬ » Fri Mar 04, 2011 2:35 pm

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Tracker Dog Application Series 8

Username:

Quill.

Tracker Dog you want:

# 24

Name you'll give it:

Seer

Meaning of name:











~S~
Stealth. He can maneuver through wooded jungles or open fields regardless of time of day, or terrain.

~E~
Exceptional speed. He is fast, and light on his feet. He does what he has to do, to get the job done.

~E~
Excellent Timing. He is always ready for action, never willing to back down from a mission.

~R~
Rigorous Skills. He has been trained for perfection. He's a no room for mistakes kind of guy.


Reason why you want it:

~ He would be my first tracker, and he is lovely. His coat glistens, and glows, as if there is a blue fire under his skin.

Will it be used in any kind of story?

~ Yes! I have a wonderful idea, in which I will write the introduction here.

Describe its personality:

~ He is loyal and caring for his owner and is eager to please. He keeps his mind focused on the mission at hand, so he can find who is needed to be found. Seer tends to keep by his master's side, at all times, protecting him from suspicious men and women, even other trackers.

Write an introduction for your Tracker:
~ Darkness. It was night. Seer sniffed the air with his large nose. His glowing markings were off, for they were being watched. "Good, Seer." His master said, patting his head affectingly. He nuzzled her hand with his nose then went back to sniffing the air. It was damp, and musty. I sounded like they were in a swamp or forest, right after a rain. He caught the smell of something else though, human? No, something far more sinister... Hybrid. He growled and pointed with his nose down the trail, much like a Pointer Dog. His owner keeled down on one knee next to him and said, "What is it boy? Hybrid?" He nodded understanding. He looked at her and blinked his lights once, to see if she wanted them on. She patted is head, "In a little bit, bestie." He lead her, and the other people of the team down the trail, their feet sloshing on the muddied ground. Seer continued to sniff the air, slowly being able to draw a sent picture in his mind. It was a swamp, definitely, with vines meandering from rotted tree to rotted tree. The water churned with the algae and wastes of the few animals of the woods. They arrived in a clearing, and Seer could tell that the grass was considerably taller than him, and possibly taller than his fairly short master. He looked back and wagged his tail, in asking if he could continue. His master's hand gestured, and she said, "Yes, lead the way." Seer wove through the grass, following the sent trail of the Hybrid. He wanted to growl every time he scented it.

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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby nowi » Fri Mar 04, 2011 2:41 pm

Tracker Dog Application Series 8
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Username: TessaKitty

Tracker Dog you want: Tracker Dog #25

Name you'll give it: Somniloquence, or "Somni" as he prefers to be called^^
Gender: Unknown (I'm calling it a he in my form, as it makes it easier for me. It might take some effort to turn him into a female, but I could^^)

Reason why you want it: I would like to adopt Somni because I just love his colors. Purple is my favorite color, and, well, black just goes perfectly together. I have been trying to keep myself from adopting, because I never seem to have time to actually fill out the form, but I couldn't help it. Somni stole my heart, and I decided I must try for him. So, good luck to all applicants for him, and may the best form win^^

Will it be used in any kind of story? Of course! I love to write, and although my writing skills leave a lot to be desired, the more I practice, the better I get, and I am writing a series of short stories featuring many of my charries, and Somni will be a welcome addition to the family. He'll make a great companion for Kynä, my custom^^
Describe its personality:
Somni is a both an early bird and a night owl. He's great at both day and night missions, and he's very energetic. He loves the outdoors, and is often found frolicking around outside. He's generally very happy, and is a very boisterous tracker who is happy to help in any way he can. He's very loyal, and immediately trusts anyone who is kind to him. If you befriend him, he will fight to the death for you. He's a very strong tracker as well, and he's always picking fights with other trackers to see who is strongest. He's very brave, and he's quite defensive of those he loves. He's not a very good peacemaker, though, and sometimes it is hard to separate him from a fight. Somni is fast and has great stamina. He's very proud of his traits, and is often known as a show-off. He's not pleased with failure, and will do anything to succeed, which sometimes can lead him into precarious and dangerous situations where it's a miracle he actually made it out alive. Somni is a hard sleeper, and it is quite hard to wake him up. He is, however, susceptible to the bucket of cold water on the head trick. Fortunately, Somni rarely ever sleeps, and is always alert (but he has been known to take a few cat-naps on the job^^). Despite the fact that he often picks fights, Somni is a great friend, and he's very friendly, once he's determined that you're not an enemy. He's always happy to help, and will always try, even if it's not his strength. But to those that ask for his help, I warn you, he won't stop until he's succeeded. Somni hates the indoors, but he's willing to endure if it's for a job. If not......you'll have trouble getting him inside. Somni loves the rain, and is often found jumping around in puddles - while it's still raining as well as after. However, Somni hates lightning and thunder, and can sometimes be found cowering inside a fallen log while there's a thunderstorm. Afterwards. he's back to his old, boisterous self~

Likes:
-Outdoors
-Nighttime
-Females
-Rain
-Friends
-Family
-Skirmishes (to determine his strength)
-Showing Off

Dislikes:
-Thunder
-Lightning
-The Indoors
-Trackers who are stronger than him
-Sleep
-The Cold

Write an introduction for your Tracker:
(From the diaries of Somni and my custom, Kynä (yes, Somni writes in a diary). I have also included another character, Adrienne, to include another perspective besides just the Tracker's.)
NOTE: The dates I use here are always in lowercase.
NOTE 2: Kynä loves big words~

Kynä - the fifth day of the third lunar cycle, year two-thousand and eleven (March 5th, 2011)
I met another tracker today. His name is Somniloquence. He goes by Somni, though. I must say, he's a pretty spectacular tracker, if I do say so myself. His strength is marvelous, and, well, I think he's pretty attractive. Pity he's not an Aerial, though. He'd probably look quite nice as one, but I suppose the wild body fits him more. He's quite the show off, though. That irks me. If he didn't have that showy quality, I'd say he's perfect. But until he fixes that, he's still imperfect. I won't accept an imperfect Tracker as my mate, if I even do accept one in the first place. I shall watch him with great interest.

Somniloquence - the fifth day of the third lunar cycle, year two-thousand and eleven (March 5th, 2011)
That Aerial sure is sweet. What was her name again? Kynä, was it? Ahhh, she's a beauty. Though I can't actually see, I can sense her beauty. It's overwhelming. I think I felt her watching me. Maybe we'll get put on a mission together. Then maybe I can try to impress her with my epic skills. If she wants something from me, I'll give it to her without hesitation. I must have her as my partner. But will she accept me? I'm not an Aerial. Perhaps I'll get lucky.

Adrienne - the fifth day of the third lunar cycle, year two-thousand and eleven (March 5th, 2011)
That was really rather amusing to watch those two trackers today. If Somniloquence could see, it would have been even more amusing. I saw the female, Kynä, keep sneaking glances at him. I wonder what she sees in him. He's just a big snooty show-off. I, personally, would prefer someone more.....gentle, not Somniloquence's type. Someone with a soft heart who's always ready to support me. Not a Tracker, of course. A wolf. Maybe I'll see if I can watch Kynä and Somniloquence's joint mission tomorrow. I'm prepared to die laughing.

Kynä - the sixth day of the third lunar cycle, year two-thousand and eleven (March 6th, 2011)
That stupid Somniloquence! I will never forgive him! He took the whole mission into his own hands, and wouldn't let me do anything! Urgh! I won't stand for this. And of course no one felt for me. It was all "Oh, Somni, you're stupendous," or "Somni is the best!" No one cared that I didn't get to prove myself. Next thing, he'll be tarnishing my perfect record. I'm staying away from that stupid fool. I don't want him anymore. I want someone else! Someone who's not.....impure like that impudent fool Somniloquence. So why is it that I feel so alone?

Somniloquence - the sixth day of the third lunar cycle, year two-thousand and eleven (March 6th, 2011)
I totally blew it. Why did I have to be so rash and go ahead of Kynä? Now she's mad. Like, really mad. Why? Why did I have to be such an idiot? What should I do? What can I do to get Kynä's affection? She's the most beautiful tracker I'll ever meet - and of course I blew it. Maybe she's just not right for me. Maybe my true mate would be proud of me for completing that mission the way I did. Maybe Kynä's just not the one. Maybe I need to keep searching. Perhaps that is the case. Tomorrow, I won't even talk to Kynä. I'll find someone else who actually appreciates me. I have lots of fans, surely there's one.........but why do I feel it's an empty effort?

Adrienne - the sixth day of the third lunar cycle, year two-thousand and eleven (March 6th, 2011)
Ha! I was crying today, that scene was so funny. Here, I'll tell you exactly what happened. So, Somniloquence was trotting next to Kynä, who was hovering above the ground. I saw him shuffle his paws and then he said the stupidest thing. He was all like, "So, Kynä, would you like to follow me?" And Kynä was obviously offended. She alighted on the ground and snarled.
"I don't want to follow." She spat out the word follow. Somniloquence seemed pretty offended. He got really mad.
"Yeah? Well, you're gonna have to. I'm the best at missions!" You should have seen my face then. It was so funny to see Kynä's response. She tackled him! She actually tackled him! Then he ran away and did the whole mission by himself. You should have seen Kynä when everyone cheered Somniloquence when he returned. She looked so furious! What a pity. They were so perfect for each other. Somniloquence probably shouldn't have said that. Maybe then, he and Kynä would still be eying each other.

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I will actually try to finish this round, I promise.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Jezi » Fri Mar 04, 2011 2:49 pm

Alright... I can't stop myself ;_; I'm trying out for #25 tomorrow, I'm stuck at home all day so I'll have plenty of time to work on it X3
And I can already think of how Revo will react the first time she meets him... heheh... (he'll be owned by Fin's wife if I win him, Fin if you remember is Revo's owner ^^;)
Stuck at home 'cause of a torn ACL XP at least I'll have something to do ^^
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Aki~ » Fri Mar 04, 2011 3:25 pm

oh my... 26... You might just win me over...
And in the end,

The love you take,

Is equal to the love you {make.}
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Ali19 » Fri Mar 04, 2011 3:31 pm

Tracker Dog Application Series 8
Username:Ali19
Tracker Dog you want:#24
Name you'll give it:Death
Reason why you want it:I love the colors and i really would like a tracker dog

Will it be used in any kind of story? Yes
Describe its personality:Tuff,Sweet,will bite,

Write an introduction for your Tracker:
On a dark stormy night i heard a scratching sound i looked out my window and saw a tracker dog, I couldent just leave it there so i had to let him in. When a let him in i needed to call him a name i choose Death and he defends for love ones.
I'm very socially awkward and sometimes not good with words xD
Send me a trade if you want too :P

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My favorite anime is Attack on Titan, and I also love Fullmetal Alchemist.

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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Bast-et » Fri Mar 04, 2011 3:57 pm

Tracker Dog Application Series 8
Username: SnailsCanFly
Tracker Dog you want: # 26, the beautiful green aquatic
Name you'll give it: Mako

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Reason why you want him:
I'm sure you hear this a lot, but I have been stalking this thread for awhile now, and every time I see a new series of Trackers the quality of artwork makes me impressed all over again. Your work on these dogs inspires everyone who sees them. Every Tracker that is won has a unique adoption form that shows the full potential of it's new owner because of their inspiration of the dog they are adopting. When I checked in on your thread today and saw this lovely green aquatic (my favorite color and favorite branch of trackers) It was my turn to have a storyline spill into my head. I would like this tracker because he fits my vision of a perfect Tracker, and because every time I look at him I see scenes that I can't wait to write.


Will he be used in any kind of story?
He certainly will if I get him... But It wouldn't be fair to write about him if somebody else gets him.

Describe his personality:
The three words that best describe him are:

INTELLIGENT; Mako grasps new ideas, even abstract ones, quickly. He enjoys learning, but usually more so after having exercised and worn his hyper energy down some. Finding things by using facts and knowledge is what makes him happy- when the things he finds makes other people happy, that's when he is happiest. His major fault, and his only one as far as Snails is concerned is his lack of patience with other animals and people who are not able to work things through their brain as fast as he can.
ATHLETIC; Mako loves physical challenges just as much as mental ones. Despite his breeding as an aquatic Tracker, Mako is proficient on land as well. However, it is the water that calls to him, and there that he truly excels. His webbed feet speed him through the water, and his powerful eyes pull all that he sees into clarity. He easily glides himself through the waters with the help of fins and his powerful tail. For all his ease in the water there is one area that he is not quite as comfortable with- that moment when he changes from breathing air to water or breathing water to air. It gives him momentary pause. But he and Snails are working on it.
DISCIPLINED; Mako folds himself to a high standard. Like all perfectionists, Mako wants everything he does to be the best that he can do it, from swimming, to tracking, to making sure stone is flipped over. The hesitation he feels when switching mediums creates an itch in the back of his mind every times he thinks about it. But he will fix it.
Several others things about his personality you need to know:
For all his dedication, Mako has a sense of humor. In every situation there is a funny side, and Mako can find it. Mako enjoys being slightly different from the "normal" trackers, although he still respects them.
Mako is honest, and gives his sincere opinions about everything. So don't ask him how that sweater Grandma made you makes you look unless your prepared for an unhappy growl.
Finally, Mako can be slightly vain. He is beautiful and knows it, and he takes pride in himself. This helps more than hinders as it gives him a glow of confidence that makes his actions bold and decisive.


Likes
•challenges
•praise
•physical exertion
•solving puzzles
•water of any kind
•Snails =)

Dislikes
•airplanes and flying
•lack of information
•cages
•auctions
•other dogs
•failure


Write an introduction for your Tracker:
Snails pointed at the map. "It could be here. That's the most likely spot for it to have gone down according to currents and the Captain's account. We're lucky he made it to shore" Lying on the floor behind her, Mako growled. "You don't think so? But look, we know the ship went down here" Snails jabbed the map again, "and because of the shoreline here we know the current would have pulled the wreckage down the coast." Mako got up and walked to the map. He traced the shoreline with his pointed tail, then drew a second line parallel to it in the ocean. "What are you- the shorelines receded. I never even thought of that, you smarty. That would put the wreck further out here. Gosh, thats pretty deep." Mako grumbled an affirmative. It was deep, but that added to the challenge. Life wouldn't be fun without challenge. Snails came over and scratched his head enjoying the short silky fur under her fingers. "Okay man, we'll give it a try." she promised with a smile. Without warning, memories welled up of how she had gotten Mako...

Snails had been escorted blindly into the building and then left in the dark auditorium with around fifty other people. Representatives of Mafia Dons, spoiled oil tycoons, billionaires, and foreign governments were spread around the room. A multitude of languages could be heard talking quietly about the reason they were all here- A stolen Tracker pup. Looking around the room Snails acknowledged everyone she recognized with a polite nod- everyone here was wealthy, influential, or both. Ignoring or insulting any of them could be... Dangerous. Before any fights could break out a cold voice came over the intercom system surrounding the bidders. "Please be seated. We will be beginning now" Two burly men appeared on the stage with a metal crate on wheels. Every eye in the room focused on what lay between it's walls. A beautiful green aquatic paced back and forth occasionally growling. Alone in the room, Snails heart went out to the creature trapped in the cage surrounded by people who sought only to use him. A couple of Russians snorted a few rows back. "Its only an aquatic. I thought they had gotten a wild" In a perfect world, your head would explode for thinking thoughts like that Snails thought to herself. Then the bidding began. In a room filled with people who had been instructed by their bosses to win the pup at all costs, the price sky rocketed into the millions within moments of bidding. Snails alone sat in a bubble of calm watching the pup with sympathy. We'll get you out lovely. Then she turned her attention to the proceedings and rising price. When the ticket reached the hundred millions, bidding slowed down. The Russians got up in disgust and left the proceedings. Gradually one by one the bidders dropped out, already anticipating the brow-beating they could expect from their bosses. After several more minutes only two bidders were left stubbornly refusing to fold. But once the price hit a billion one man's shoulders sagged in defeat. "Going once" came the cold voice over the intercom. "Going twice..." Snails bid for the first time. Startled the man who thought he had just won turned in his seat to gape at her. Snails returned his look with a cold smile. The man shook his head. He was already over the limit set by his boss by a million It was a lose-lose situation. He might as well save the money. Maybe somebody would get their hands on another Tracker. Yeah right. The voice came back over the intercom. " Thank you for your participation. You are free to go now. If you do not leave the estate, you will be helped." the voice ended in a crackle of static. With self important huffs and grunts of disgust the representatives rose and exited until Snails was the only one left. A handsome man entered the room and gave a slight bow to Snails. "thank you Miss..." his voice was the same one heard over the intercom. "SnailsCanFly." she answered the man. His face twisted into a moment of confusion. Was that a code? "Er, yes, thank you Miss- may I call you Snails." "Might as well" she smirked "Everyone else does" "Thank you. Now, you and your new Tracker will be escorted out shortly and taken to the nearest airport. From there we leave you and how you fare is your own business" He turned and left the room, leaving Snails and her new tracker alone for the first time. "Hey pretty" Snails greeted the pup. He growled.

At the airport they were promptly picked up by a chauffeur in a limo. "Well pup, we got you for the boss. What he wants with you I have no idea, but at least I gottcha outta there." The pup she had decided to name Mako, after the shark that shared the same confidence as as he, stared at her through intelligent, glowing green eyes.

Snails thoughts returned to the present where a sunken wreck pulled on her attentions. She gazed at the Tracker who looked back at her with with those very same green eyes. "Ready for work Mako?" she asked him " we have a job to do!"

To be continued...      



Wanted to apologize for the lack of focus on Mako, but it is just the introduction to his story. If I adopt him, I plan for the rest of the story to tell of Mako and Snail's adventure to find and raise a forgotten sunken ship. It will also include flashbacks revealing how Snails and Mako came to be such a close and trusting team. I wasn't sure if my introduction really made that clear, so there's the rough outline of my ideas. Thank you Nex!
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Jezi » Fri Mar 04, 2011 4:58 pm

Tracker Dog Application Series 8
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Username:
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Tracker Dog you want:
#25

Name you'll give it:
Coin
(He'll be male if that's alright ^^; the personality I gave him really only fits a male)
Reason why you want it:
He seems so... I don't know how to describe it, mysterious maybe? But that's not quite it. He caught my eye immediately and even though it was obvious #24 would be the most popular I just fell much more in love with him. I can think of the perfect scenario between him and Revo (one Revo isn't to thrilled to be in, but she is flattered XD) I've been kind of keeping an eye out for a tracker Revo could have some sibling-like "bickering with" and the personality I put with him right when I saw him would be perfect.
Will it be used in any kind of story?
Most definitely. Once I get this scene between him and Revo out of my head I'll give him his own wild adventures with Kari in the police field. He'll work mostly at night, where his colors will blend in well enough, helping to track down drug dealers who work under the cover of night. (more about his job later)
Describe its personality:
As you said Nex, strong, loyal, brave,energetic, but I'll expand on that :)
Strong- even around the most notorious drug dealers Coin will not lose his focus nor his calm demeanor rigorous trainig has made him not insensitive to the dangers of a gun but it has taught him that the more he panics and threatens the gun holder, the more likely he is to be shot.
Loyal- A police dog and his owner are always nearly inseparable, they are one force united in one purpose and one job. Coin and Kari are no different. Coin would risk his life for Kari as any police dog would and he wouldn't think twice about it.
Brave- Working in the field has exposed Coin to many things and after seeing so much he barely flinched at even the largest explosions. This does not mean he is ignorant of the danger but he does know he still has a job to do no matter what the circumstances.
Energetic- Coin's high energy helps him keep awake on late night jobs, but it sure makes him a pain at home. Kari has already made plans to build a fence around the yard so he can run as much as he likes but she won't have to worry about him running away ( if there was no fence and he caught scent of a rabbit he'd be gone without a second thought.
You didn't mention these Nex, they are my own add-ons.
A bit of a joker- When hes not working Coin loves to be in your face and making you laugh. He could easily entertain a party if you wanted him to, however this also means he comes off as very pushy and abrasive to some, he still needs to learn when he should get in peoples faces and when he shouldn't.
Lady's man- Oh boy.. When Revo comes home there is no way to keep Coin away from her. He is always following her around and trying to impress her, Revo doesn't find this very amusing but she politely allows him to make a fool of himself (he seems to become very clumsy when he is trying to impress Revo, or any girl tracker for that matter)
Write an introduction for your Tracker:
My dear Kari,
I will be returning home soon, though I wish it would not be so brief. The commander has given me only a week with you before I must return to that war which is deafening on both sides on us. I will be bringing a new partner home with, do not worry she will not make a mess (and she has just growled at me for suggesting she might ever do such a thing). Her name is Revolution, or Revo as she likes to be called (she growled at me again for using her full name, she seems to despise it so), she is a 3 year old stealth tracker. I trust you have heard of the breed? Well whether you have or not you will soon love her as much as I do. I will be counting down the days until I see you, and then willing the day not to come when I must leave you again.
Soon, my beloved.
Fin

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I need to think about this, its going in a completely different direction then I wanted, i'll work on it tonight and hopefully get back on track with what I wanted to do.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby orange.c y r u s♥ » Fri Mar 04, 2011 5:58 pm

cam someone PLZ crit my story?Ya now tell me if it's good or not?it's on pg 188
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there's so many ways to love ya
baby I can b r e a k you down
there's so many ways to L O V E ya
I mean like, oh my g o s h i'm so in love
I found you F I N A L L Y, it make me want to say
oh my gosh

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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby DoctorDraca » Fri Mar 04, 2011 6:42 pm

BeL0VED, I'll add your shop to the front page.

Hyena, don't ask for form crits here.
Ask them either on the forum, or on the fanclub.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby -Obsidian » Sat Mar 05, 2011 4:13 am

Tracker Dog Application Series 8
Username:
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Tracker Dog you want: #25
Name you'll give it: Arrow
Reason why you want it: I have been watching the tracker dogs for a while, and at last there's one i really like! (Well, i like all of them, but this ones special). I espically love the stipy markings and grey is one my favourite colours. He reminds me of a zebra, with the dark and light markings. Plus, the purple makes him stand out. His colours and markings suite his sub-species (wild tracker, right?) and he seems very hansome!! I'd call him arrow because he was described as "energetic", and arrows are like...fast and dangerouse :D And he seems dangerouse...yes, dangerouse...

Will it be used in any kind of story?
Yes! I like writing background stories for my charries, so he wom't miss out if i get him - yay.

Describe its personality: Arrow is very excitable, clever but loyal too. He loves doing his missions, and is always very enthusastic about things. This can sometimes be a bit of a down side, as he can get too carried away, but generally he's a good worker. He hates being enclosed and is a little claustrophobic, so he needs lots of space when not on a mission to burn out his energy. Arrow is quite popular among the trackers, though he is too much for some.
Along with being excitable, he is also very, very smart. He knows basic human stratergies, whihc criminals may use to escape, though he still has much to learn. Arrow likes learning, so long as he's free to do it when he wants. So after a long day at work, you'll often find him trying to get his head round criminal's minds. he hopes to be able to out-smart all criminal master-minds when he's older, but for now he's content with being able to work out how a child steals some sweeties!!
Now, loyalty: Arrow is very loyal to those he trusts, so be nice to him, and he'll be nice to you...

Write an introduction for your Tracker:
Arrow flicked his tail in annoyance. For two days now he'd been tracking a teenager who'd broken into a house and murdured two little humans. 'Children - yes, that's what the little humans are called' he thought bitterly as he treked through the outskirts of Cambridge. Yet again, his uncontrolable excitement had turned the tables yesterday, and he'd found himself running away from the scent trail. Arrow sighed and sniffed the pavestones and garden walls.
"Dratted rain," He muttured. He'd better pick the odour up soon, or the wrath of the stormy skies above would wash it away altogether. Arrow suddenly raised his head. The image in his head infrnt of him was reconisable - the bus sign with graffiti all over it. Arrow dropped his muzzel again and sniffed around eagerly. 'There!' he thought as the familiar scent washed over him. It was stale, but his sharp senses soon picked out the path the criminal had taken.


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