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Postby Tea... » Tue Mar 07, 2017 10:43 am

so im really want to work side by side with lost sole and I think this is a good way to do it!!
I don't know how well this turned out. . .to much? or not enough. . . I don't know maybe some potters pointers someone?
(also should I but this here or somewhere else?)
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Postby The Lost soul » Tue Mar 07, 2017 1:10 pm

Honestly, you did some really nice work. The markings are interesting and intricate. There's just one thing that we can think of. The markings are a bit crude. Smoothing them out, or using a softer tool, might help. We tend to use Pen on a slightly less opacity, and running over the markings a few times, along with trimming and cleaning up the markings afterwards. The Watercolor tool is also really handy. Past that, you've got a really nice headstart into this. We'd love to see more color combinations and see how you fare with different palettes to test your sense of color theory. ^u^
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Postby Tea... » Wed Mar 08, 2017 11:26 am

omg thanks. . . okay I fixed it up a little is that better?
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Postby The Lost soul » Wed Mar 08, 2017 11:41 am

It's a bit too blurry now. It's hard to get them just right(took us about a year, and we're still having trouble). Using the blur tool tends to remove the defined features, losing aesthetic, and is only used when transitioning through gradients. We'd suggest something more middle-ground, like the watercolor tool. It helps to leave the marking some bit defined, but more natural-looking.
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Postby Tea... » Wed Mar 08, 2017 11:50 am

okay I will try that on my next entry thanks.
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Postby OliCat » Thu Mar 09, 2017 2:05 pm

eeekkkk I love it!! wish it was an actual adopt id definitely have it. Good luck on becoming an artist!
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Postby Tea... » Thu Mar 09, 2017 4:14 pm

aww your so sweet!! thank you! it means a lot!!!!!!
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