Xhat, Your attention to the story portion of your form was great and built upon the info I had written within the stories and lore prepared. Overall it was a very strong and interesting form, though I would have liked to see a bit more depth in the personality section, elaborating on all of his inner workings. You did a lovely job, and even though it did contradict some of the lore in regards to age that info was not posted on CS and should not be counted against you for this competition. Congratulations on your first LOC, and welcome to the community!
River Song, though you form lacked in a true history section (not required info so not big deal) the character you were able to pull together through the personality segment and reuired questions really sold me on him as a well rounded individual. Though the lore did convey him as a more agressive and “evil” character, loyal to the end to his cause, the lore and story was not set in stone and you were able to see beyond the story I created and piece together a lovely character and lion. Unfortunately, the lack of additional info and extras in comparison placed you in a very close second! I do hope to see you around and have a loc of your own very soon c: <3
Hainu, your form was simple and to the point which is always a nice sight in contrast to other longer and bulky forms. Every info you provided was important and just enough to convey the character you created through your words. However, in the case of this comp it came down to the extra little details and additions that picked a winner. I did greatly enjoy your work and do hope to see you around the community with a loc of your own! <3
Charboo, you and Pengu. gave those judging a run for their money. Seriously, you both were SO close that we felt a RU was in order for this comp also. You created a wonderful character who was solidified through the story you told and the personality traits that weaved through every word of your form. The size of your form was just right, and the character you created really felt right. Congrats dear on your new boy! You really deserve him <333
Pengu. , wow like I said to Char, your form blew us all away. Your stories showed how much effort you put into this competition and each story developed further and further into this LOC’s personality. The relationship with the now rebel dream lioness was a beautiful touch and added an even deeper story to this male. Unfortunately both you and Char couldn’t win this boy, though we would like to offer you a RU design that can be an event lion from this event so your boy can keep his info and stories! Because I already designed him, you can either take this design and use him as the event Lion or have one designed/ you design one!
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Bluemoon, like I have said before, this competition was such a hard one to judge. Your form really competed with Chars and Pengu.s and if I could give a prize to you all I would! Your form had a lot going for it, personality, story and extras. And if it wasn’t for the steepness of this competition or the specialty of the event Lions this boyo would be yours. I hope to see you around dear, and give a big thank you for participating! It was privledge reading your form!
Red weasel
While your form was the only one for this girly, it certainly didn't disappoint. The character you made was well developed and the history was well written. The effort you put into this girl showed in your form and I am happy to announce you as the winner of this event lioness. Congrats <33
Nizoluv
I enjoyed reading your form and the character you made for him was very well developed and stayed consistent through your form. I loved the history you wrote for him My guest judges and I agreed that you will be the winner of this boy. Congrats <33
Vraska the Unseen
While I liked your approach with his character, his history was a bit lacking. My guest judges and I felt like it could've used a bit more information. We would've loved to see you go deeper into his history, perhaps explain how he started out and came to join Merikh. I wish you luck in any future comps and I would be more than happy to help you out with any future comps <33
Ccrow
Your form clearly showed all the effort you put into it, the history and personality were amazing, well written and easy to follow... However, I'm afraid to say that it didn't follow loc lore. I wish you luck in future comps! If you need any help let me know <33
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