Fake Nursery Batch #1 - Cirrus x Pheobe by aventurine.

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Fake Nursery Batch #1 - Cirrus x Pheobe

Postby aventurine. » Sat Feb 04, 2017 7:28 pm

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"I ᴅʀᴇᴀᴍᴇᴅ ᴏғ ᴀ ʟɪғᴇ sᴏ ʙɪɢ ᴀɴᴅ ᴛᴀʟʟ
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Re: Fake Nursery Batch #1 - Cirrus x Pheobe

Postby Mima » Sat Feb 04, 2017 10:59 pm

Cute! My biggest comment would be perhaps it would be nice to do a little more mixing with the designs? Granted, they are both pretty simple parents so I totally understand why they're similar, but maybe something like adding Cirrus's stripes over the blocked pattern on Phoebe could work. (Though I do like the darker stripes over the light, so it's a toss up.)

I'm also not sure on the colors for their spots? They look a little bright/saturated compared to the accents on their parents, who are both fairly pastel/dull. The subtle glowing effect is well done, though, and they look really cute on the kit on the left!
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Re: Fake Nursery Batch #1 - Cirrus x Pheobe

Postby aventurine. » Sun Feb 05, 2017 4:59 am

Mima wrote:Cute! My biggest comment would be perhaps it would be nice to do a little more mixing with the designs? Granted, they are both pretty simple parents so I totally understand why they're similar, but maybe something like adding Cirrus's stripes over the blocked pattern on Phoebe could work. (Though I do like the darker stripes over the light, so it's a toss up.)

I'm also not sure on the colors for their spots? They look a little bright/saturated compared to the accents on their parents, who are both fairly pastel/dull. The subtle glowing effect is well done, though, and they look really cute on the kit on the left!

Yeah, I made the glowy spots a bit brighter because the original colors weren't showing up too well on their designs, but I think I overestimated when making them
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"I ᴅʀᴇᴀᴍᴇᴅ ᴏғ ᴀ ʟɪғᴇ sᴏ ʙɪɢ ᴀɴᴅ ᴛᴀʟʟ
Aɴ ᴇsᴄᴀᴘᴇ ғʀᴏᴍ ᴡʜᴏ I ᴡᴀs
Aɴᴅ ᴏᴜʀ ᴘᴀsᴛ ɪs ɢᴏɪɴɢ ᴜᴘ ɪɴ ғʟᴀᴍᴇs
Aɴᴅ ᴛʜᴇ ғᴜᴛᴜʀᴇ ᴄᴀɴ ʙᴇ ʀᴇᴀʀʀᴀɴɢᴇᴅ."


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