Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby winter. » Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:02 pm

Phew! Finally finished my form for Nix. I would have written a longer story, but I wouldn't have been able to finish in time.
Congrats Mini! You deserved her, no doubt.
Good luck to everyone trying out for #21. I know I am so nervous right now, as I am sure every one else is.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Coy » Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:21 pm

Just for reference in this story, CSIA stands for Chicken Smoothie Intelligence Agency

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Tracker Dog Application Series 7
Username: Coy
Tracker Dog you want: 21
Name you'll give it: Special Agent #07 (Nickname- Apo)
Reason why you want it: I saw him and immediately knew he was the tracker dog for me. I am very obsessed in artillery and weaponry and I'm currently training to become an agent when I'm older (in my dreams :3 ). I can be handed a weapon and know how to work it and fire it. Anyway, so when I saw this tracker dog with a gun I instantly knew he would be perfect for me. I've always wanted to write a story with an Agent feel to it, since that's a major part of my personality and my life. I love his colors and generally, everything out him. From his general description to his major weaponry attached to his back and central nervous system.

Will it be used in any kind of story? Yes, I would like to write an Agent story and I need partners for my humans.
Describe its personality: Apo is a very serious Tracker. He takes work very serious and would never hurt a mission with his presence. He works along side a CSIA agent who has the exact same personality: Serious; Skilled; & Sharp. They can take on any mission that is thrown at them together as a team, but cannot take on anything by themselves. Apo was given to the agent by a scientist who gave no explanation as to why this puppy had extreme weaponry attached to his back, but when analyzed by the CSIA scientists they discovered how powerful this dog was and how much he had already bonded with the agent. That's when it was decided he would stay with the agent who found him, and that proved to be one of the best decisions the scientists had made.

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CSIA Files: Special Agent #07

July 16, 2025

Coy here. I'm writing down everything as I look for a special agent. CSIA needs more Special agents for our Special forces branch of the CSIA. I'm looking into a bunch of different breeds and species of hounds and special animals. Someone tipped the CSIA that there is a new breed of dog-like species that is especially designed for Missions, which is exactly what I do. They're holding a special one of these "dogs" for me to take a look at. Apparently, this one is special, but I haven't been told why.

I found this place where the species is freaky and this dog has a blaster. It looks like a science fair in here, or a mad science fair. I'm not scared, just a tad freaked out. I'm still looking for the dog, but this species seems to be designed perfectly for what we need at CSIA. The scientists told me I could find the dog in the special section of this place: The Trackers Weaponry Facility. I'm rather excited to see how far their weaponry has come. I hear it's pretty impressive.

Well, I found the dog. Here's what went down: I walked into a large white science looking room. There was a small puppy asleep on what looked like an operating table. "Ohmigosh!" I screamed, "What are you doing to this poor animal?! If the CSIA finds you guilty for animal cruelty, you are in for a world of pain." I was incredibly worked up and barely noticed that this animal was not a dog, but it had a dog like look to it. It was more of a science experiment. And not just a science experiment, a mad science experiment. This dog was natural browns colored, but had lime green accents. His face looked more like a spider's than a dog's and he had weird paws and muzzle. His nose was a long, think line and his tongue was that of a snake's. The weirdest part of this whole experiment was that this poor dog had a massive gun strapped to his back and wires that were connected, going into him. "Calm down, miss. We're not hurting him; we're helping you." a scientist said to me. "Helping me?! How are you helping me by hurting this poor animal?" I was extremely puzzled. They couldn't expect me not to freak out at a dog who looks like he's in terrible pain. "Your Agent #07, correct? Coy, is it?" The man asked and held out his hand, "I'm Mr.McGaver. A scientist here at Nex's facility. We work on creating Trackers for agencies like yours. This Tracker here, Apo, will help you immensely on your missions. See, Apo is a Stealth Tracker, the fastest and smallest Tracker we develop here in this facility. But, he is also very, very, very special. We have equipped Apo with a special type of weapon that is connected to his central nervous system; that's what the tubes are going into him. He is not in any pain now, and he won't be; ever. His gun is loaded with this special substance called "Aponoxide", that's how he got the name "Apo". Upon contact with the skin, Aponoxide with instantaneously paralyze it's victim and they will stay that way long enough for Apo and who ever he is helping to capture the criminal. Apo is specially trained to know the command "fire" means to activate his gun. He is completely immune to this substance and it will not harm him in any way. Any questions?" Mr. McGaver was a strange looking man, but he spoke well enough so that I knew what he was saying. "So basically, his special ability is going to help the CSIA to take down criminals and protect Chicken Smoothie?" I was a little confused, but I think I got the basic concept. "Exactly. Now, I have to warn you. If Apo feels his gun is being abused, he will return here and not to his agent. Also, the command must be said by his agent or he will not respond. That way criminals cannot use him as a weapon. Apo will give his life for you and protect you in every way. He is capable of way more than you can imagine. All I ask is for you to be careful and take care of Apo; he's our greatest weapon against criminals." By the tone of Mr. McGaver's voice, I could tell he was serious, and kind of scared. "I will do what ever is in my control to protect Apo. He will be an amazing friend and agent to me and the CSIA." Mr.McGaver smiled and walked me over to the table where Apo was lying.

I stroked Apo's head gently as he lied on the table fast asleep. They were working on final inspections of Apo's gun, so they had given his a sedative. He looked so peaceful; it was kind of strange to think he'd be our greatest advance against criminals. "He'll be awake in a while. They're just running some more tests on his spinal cord to make sure the mussels can support the weight of the gun. Just some final tests. Don't worry, it's safe." Mr.McGaver said to me as he could tell by my expression that I was worried for the sake of Apo. I hadn't even met him and I already loved him. And knew he'd be my partner forever.

I continued my chat with Mr.McGaver while the tests on Apo. The scientists stood in a circle and I turned around. Apo was waking up. He shook his head and yawn. Next he looked around at everyone in the room, gathering in all the faces and objects in the room. Then he stopped at me. He stared at me for what felt like a really long time. He stood up, well aware of what was on his back and also aware it would be used for good. "Apo, this is Coy. She's an agent for CSIA and you will be her Special Agent. Your new name is Special Agent #07 and Coy is Agent #07. When you two return to CSIA headquarters, those are what you'll be called by. You need to help Coy in every way possible, okay? That is your job. She will take care of you to the best of her abilities." Mr.McGaver turned away from Apo and looked at Coy. "I need you to bring him back once a month so I can run tests on his spinal cord and nervous system, and make sure the gun is working alright. Come back immediately if you have any problems or questions. Here's my number, Nex's Facility's number, and the Tracker Weaponry Facility's number. If you have questions or need to make an appointment, call any one of those numbers and they'll tell you exactly who to contact. Also, if there's an emergency, call the number in red. That's the emergency contact number. The people who work in that department know everything about every Tracker and have files with every single piece of information on every Tracker that has ever been produced at Nex's Facility. Good Luck." Mr.Mcgaver shook my hand and turned to Apo. "Apo," Apo stood up immediately, "Go with Coy." Apo hopped off the table and walked over next to Coy and sat down. He was a small guy, who seemed to have a lot of speed and stealth, like his named suggests. We walked together out of the facility, as partners and friends.

We arrived back at the CSIA head quarters around 5pm. Apo was quiet throughout the entire car ride. He didn't seem to understand why the cars and scenery were moving by so quickly; and why they were moving so quickly. I didn't realize this, but Apo, for being incredibly intelligent and equipped with possibly the most advanced weaponry ever developed, was just a baby. He'd been created in a lab and had lived there for his entire life. He'd never been to the park, played fetch, chased his tail, or any fun stuff normal puppies got to do. Instead, was forced to live with a giant gun on his back and be used as a weapon for other people's safety. I felt bad for him. He could never stick his head out the window and feel the wind in his face; well, he could, but there would be a lot of suspicious activity calls to the police department. But Apo wouldn't be able to do any of those things. Why? because he was here to protect me. We walked into the CSIA office building and took the hidden elevator down to the hidden headquarters. First on Apo and my agenda was to talk to Ms.Iger. Ms.Iger was the head of CSIA and the General. And she was the craziest person I had ever met. I mean, she was nice and a great person, but she had an element of destruction to her. She didn't just want stuff done, she also wanted stuff destroyed. Where my favorite weapon was a 22 hand gun for missions, she always had to have a bazooka in the truck if she was coming along. That's what made her crazy. Other than that, she was an amazing person and one of the best bosses CSIA had had in a long time. She was a also an animal lover, that's why we got the Special Agent Department of the CSIA. And why I got Apo. "General, this is Apo, my special agent. He's a Tracker, a Stealth Tracker to be exact, and is equipped with the most advance technology developed." I smiled at Ms.Iger and Apo sat up perfectly straight, sensing my need to look good. "What is a Tracker, Agent 07?" Ms.Iger looked at Apo strangely. "It's a species created by Nex, a scientist who works on them. They are all developed in a lab. Apo is from the Tracker Weaponry Facility. Mr.McGaver worked on him and gave him to me, General." I explained to Ms.Iger. "Well he's quite impressive. Glad to have you as a Special Agent, Apo." Ms.Iger smiled at Apo and then looked at me. "As for you Agent 07, I have a mission for you and Special Agent 07. I need you to go to Ageadonia. We have a report from one of our Spies over there that they are developing major weaponry and I need you to inspect what the status is. Also, while your there, I'd like you to take down and capture this man," Ms.Iger held up a mug shot of Irven Stuva. " Irven has been found guilty the illegal purchasing and selling of highly destructive weapons. I need you two to locate him and bring him back alive to head quarters for questioning. Good luck to you both." Ms.Iger turned away from us and her guards showed Apo and I to the door. Next thing we had to do was suit up for our mission.

Down in the weapons section of the CSIA, I packed everything we would need for our mission. I brought everything for Apo as well. Apo sat on the floor patiently as I loaded all the guns and weapons into a bag. I also brought food and extra clothes. In the weaponry bag, I brought an extra cartilage of Aponoxide for Apo if he ran out. I really wanted to practice with Apo to see what his weapon could do, so this mission would be a perfect opportunity. Irven Stuva was an upper class man with lots of money, weapons, and men working for him. He was a trained criminal and worked for ACA (Ageadonian Criminal Agency). ACA was the anti-spies of Ageadonia. They only wanted destruction and had no interest for helping anyone, but themselves. They had billions of dollars and hundreds of high powered weaponry. It would be tough, but I had Apo with me. We boarded the private jet and took off for Ageadonia.

This is just the first part in Coy and Apo's story. All Places, Names, and Agencies are made completely up. Just thought I'd point that out <3 I'm going to make a sketch of Irven's mug shot and Apo when I get home. If I have some time <3
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby cedaar » Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:26 pm

Coy wrote:
Just for reference in this story, CSI stands for Chicken Smoothie Intelligence Agency

Tracker Dog Application Series 7
Username: Coy
Tracker Dog you want: 27
Name you'll give it: Special Agent #07 (Nickname- Fen)
Reason why you want it: I saw him and immediately knew he was the tracker dog for me. I am very obsessed in artillery and weaponry and I'm currently training to become an agent when I'm older (in my dreams :3 ). I can be handed a weapon and know how to work it and fire it. Anyway, so when I saw this tracker dog with a gun I instantly knew he would be perfect for me. I've always wanted to write a story with an Agent feel to it, since that's a major part of my personality and my life. I love his colors and generally, everything out him. From his general description to his major weaponry attached to his back and central nervous system.

Will it be used in any kind of story? Yes, I would like to write an Agent story and I need partners for my humans.
Describe its personality: Fen is a very serious Tracker. He takes work very serious and would never hurt a mission with his presence. He works along side a CSIA agent who has the exact same personality: Serious; Skilled; & Sharp. They can take on any mission that is thrown at them together as a team, but cannot take on anything by themselves. Fen was given to the agent by a scientist who gave no explanation as to why this puppy had extreme weaponry attached to his back, but when analyzed by the CSIA scientists they discovered how powerful this dog was and how much he had already bonded with the agent. That's when it was decided he would stay with the agent who found him, and that proved to be one of the best decisions the scientists had made.

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CSIA Files: Special Agent #07
To be finished tomorrow <3

Um Coy, there is no Tracker Dog #27... :/
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby icarusAbstracted » Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:29 pm

Snowballz is Epic wrote:Um Coy, there is no Tracker Dog #27... :/


I think they mean 21 because the day it is judged is the 27th. I think they just looked at the wrong number.

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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Catalyst » Sun Feb 27, 2011 4:01 pm

Congrats Mini. You're form was very good. ^^
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Coy » Sun Feb 27, 2011 4:05 pm

Lulu Saphire wrote:I think they mean number 21 that ENDs on the 27 xP


Oh goodness. I did put the wrong number, didn't I? I'll fix that tomorrow. Its super late here :c
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Disarrae » Sun Feb 27, 2011 7:20 pm

Tracker Dog Application Series 7
Username: Ѵισℓɛитℓʏ βɛαʋтιғʋℓ
Tracker Dog you want: Tracker Dog #23
Name you'll give it: Radiant Blue
Reason why you want it: Ive been wanting a Tracker Dog for a very long time now and i havent found the right one for me until now so now is my chance to get the Tracker Dog that I have really take a liking to.
Will it be used in any kind of story?: yes I was wanting to make one for a while now but wanted to get the right Tracker Dog before I did.
Describe its personality: Radiant Blue is shy, sweet, kind, loyal, slightly outgoing but she can also be feirce if she has to but for her that would be her last option. She loves people (that dont try to hurt or take her) and loves to play with them.
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Radiant blue lifted her muzzle at the scientist when she sheriked. She sat down panting lightly smelling all the new scents around her. The scientist stoped screaming looking down at Radiant Blue with a discusted look then looked at the other scientist "what is that thing?" she asked like it was some type of scary looking bug. The other scientist softly laughed at her and replied "well thats one of our newest tracker dogs" he said patting Radiant Blue on the head. Radiant Blue's tail thumped loudly on the white hard floor as she tried to keep still.

As the glass door slides open I come in and Radiant Blue pricks her ears to listin and turned her head to face me. Radiant Blue gets up and walks over to me and sniffs my leg to see who I was. I smiled at Radiant Blue and pat her on the head "so this the new one?" I asked. The other two scientist nodded and I looked down and Radiant Blue "I would love to have her....I mean whoever gets her is really lucky" I said thinking how much they probablly dont want to talk to me. The male scientist looked at me with a smile on his face "you know she doesnt have an owner yet amd i now some of us wouldent want her at all" he said slightly tilting his head to the other scientist for a moment. I smiled and looked at Radiant Blue then back at the male scientist and nodded "thank you thats very kind and i will take care of her with all of my heart" I said kneeling down beside Radiant Blue to pet her. Radiant blue turned her head towards me and licked me down the side of my face and i laughed at her " your so silly" I said petting her.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby DoctorDraca » Sun Feb 27, 2011 10:29 pm

Whim wrote:Hey Nex. ^0^

First time at this thread, and such, so hello~

Tennis. asked me to crit her form, would it be okay if I edited it for her..? As in I could repost it with edits, but she would still get the tracker? >3<

Hallo to you too.
That's fine. You're allowed to repost her form with the edits you made.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Bartimaeus » Mon Feb 28, 2011 2:04 am

:< I have a huge writer's block at the moment, and I can't think of anything good to write. What I've got so far is a bit crap as you can see, so until further notice I don't think I'm going to be able to continue this story. D8 I'm trying to think of an effective way to get across the message that Katie is deaf, but its not really working for me. The way I've done this so far isn't good enough, so I'm probably going to scrap it altogether and come up with something else. :L

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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Mon Feb 28, 2011 2:07 am

When is the next one to be judged?
im basically never on, so if you wanna with trade me or if you message me, be prepared to wait a while for a response. this account is first and foremost a personal archive for sentimentality's sake as it was a big part of my childhood.
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