Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

[sheep.]

Well dome, Mini <3 I noticed how much you wanted her.

[tennisbutt]

Whooop <33 You did it Mini 83
Do yup judge WIP forms too Nex?
So need that cute design for 21 x-x

[Queen Vivane]

Meheheh I flicked through all the forms earlier and I just knew Mini would win XD
Congrats Mini

[RainbowBizkit <3]

Mini! Congrats I knew you would win! you have been asking me to read your form the past 2 days and tell you what to make better i knew you needed to leave as is congrats my friend! 8D

[Kaylawolf]

Tracker Dog Application Series 7
Username:
Kaylawolf


Tracker Dog you want:
#23

Name you'll give it:
Τοξικό (Toxic in Greek)

Reason why you want it:
The reason I would love this exoticly beautiful Tracker Dog, is when I saw her brother I thought, 'cool design'. But when I saw his twin, #23, I instantly clicked with her. I just love the thought of a Tracker having a twin. And the blue and light black flow beautifully with her white pelt. (If) I win this Tracker Dog, I would like to keep in touch with the winner of her brother, and maybe write a story with the both of them. I would also love to do some art of them, alone or with both.

Will it be used in any kind of story?
Yes. She will be in a story, with her brother (If the winner of her twin, would want to.) The introduction of Τοξικό I would love to have that part of the story. But only if the owner of Τοξικό's twin would alow me to use #22 in my story. I would prefer if we would talk about it. To somthing we both agree. :3

Describe its personality:
Τοξικό may be a girl, but she will not be discrimaged as one. Like what she can to, like hunt, fight, track, and defend herself. She is a tomboy at heart, and always will be. If you want her trust, you will have to work pretty hard for her trust, because is you break your trust with her, there is no second chance for you with her.

Likes:
1. Her brother, she is lay her life on the line for her brothers safety. She will never trust anyone the same way as she trusts her twin.
2. Friends. She loves her friends, they are like her back bone to her life.
3. Her owner. She trusts her owner with her life, she knows nothing can go bad when she is with her owner, she goes every where with her owner, no matter if she wants Τοξικό or not.
4. The forest. The forest is like her private get away. The smells calm her in every situation. Like the loss of a mission, a fight, or just her mind in genral.

Dislikes:
1. White coat humans. She has this hate inside of her, of when she was poked and pried with sharp instraments. She knows that they thought they where doing the right thing, but still.
2. Dogs. It may be weird that a Tracker Dog, dislikes dogs. But she does. The reason is that Τοξικό had many bad experiences with dogs, they had alwayes teased her about her tounge, her having no eyes, and also her markings. But they had not brought down her sprit by thoughs nasty comment, she just held her head up proudly and bared her fangs at the filthy street dogs, and walked away.
3. Animals disrespecting there elders. She had seen a young wolf pup one day, while she was walking in the woods, she could tell that he was the son of an alpha. The pup was talking with some other pups around his age, and an elder wolf came up to them (I could tell the elder was a very experienced wolf, by his scars on his body, and how he walked, with honor and pride.) and asked the pup that his father, the alpha, needed to talk to him. The pup glared up at the elder and growled "If he needs to talk to me, he can come and get me. In stead of sending a old, ready to die, elder wolf." The young pup stated at the elder, glared at the pup. And walked off to tell the alpha what his disrespecting little furture alpha said. Τοξικό know much better to never disrespect her elders.


Write an introduction for your Tracker:
(In the eyes of Τοξικό)
I awoke. I sniffed the air, it smelled like the pine trees that where all around me. Mixed with the suddle sent of a lake. I yawned, the got up to my feet. My pads of my paws tingled as I walked threw the fresh dew on the grass. My tail swayed in the wind. I looked back to see my brother, but I sighed. I had thought it was a dream when he and I had got seperated. I lookd at the ground, it was no dream. I fallowed the sent of the lake. I wish he was still with me. Now it felt like part of me was gone. I got to the lake and laped up some water then sat at the edge of the water, and sighed. I thought about last night and sighed. I dont think I will be better with out my twin, hes more than my twin. He is my brother.

I sighed and laped up some more water, then sat down agian. I remember when I was back in the lab, the horrible sent of latex, plastic, and the gruesome eeire chemical, Eo14. (Somthing I made up. Watch out. It's dangerous. >:3) My paws would burn if I have'nt adapted to the chemecals that where poured on them. I panted; the room was hot and humid. I remember wishing, if there was anything I could do to get my brother and I out of this reched place. I could hear the "doctors" pour things in to beakers. But trust me, they where no doctors. In no way, shape or form. They would prye me open, inject liquids in to my tounge, cut me to see how fast I would heal, take my blood untill I fell limp, beat me to test my reflecses, and worse of all. Seperate me from my brother. Most of the nights I had spent there I would cry my self to sleep. But, I would never cry infront of the "doctors", nor infront of other Trackers, or in that matter any other living animal on this planet, which the dreded humans call "Earth". But, one day was diffrent that any other. When I woke up, I felt diffrent, like a new Tracker. But at that point I thought every thing was going to be the same. Now looking back, I knew somthing was diffrent, something I was stupid enoughf back then to not even thing about. The "doctors" where gone. Or so I thought. I could tell the sent in the air was lighter. And then thats when the chaos broke loose. I heard a crash, then the sent of Eo14 filled the air. I could feel a spark, it flew in to the air and was cought by the Eo14 chemical, and the chemical cought fire. I ran around my cage, I could fell the wire of the cage heat up, I panicked and bolted into the side of the cage, thankfully it broke. There was one thing on my mind. To find my brother. I sniffed the air for his sent. I finally found it, and bolted to him. "Brother!" I yelled for him and I ran to him. "Come on! We have to go. The werehouse will be engulfted with falmes in minutes!" He nodded and fallowed me to the door of the building. I jumped over some burning lumber and landed on the other side. And I bolted, that whole time I thought my brother was behinde me as I ran for miles. But, when I looked back my heart sank deep in my chest. He was gone. I had traced my whole trail. But no. He was not there. I finaly thought about going to the building, and I ran to it. When I got to the foundation of the buliding, everything was gone. I mean everything. There was only a black outline of the buliding. I droped to the ground and began to sob. I cried and cried, I swear for 10 days strate. When I stoped, I thought my life was over. I felt like I wanted to die. But then the thought came to me. He might still be alive. From that point on I have been looking for my brother, and that was one year ago.

When I thought about the memorie, I just sat there. If you would up came up to me, I would look like I had been staring at the Blue Spruce pine tree that was infront of me. But I wasnt. I felt the lake water wash up agenst my feet, and I hunge my head down. I needed to find my brother. I will not stop untill I do. At that thought I got to my sore Tracker paws, and began to run. At first I was slow but I gained up in speed. I could feel the wind slice threw my pelt, and I kept running and running. Hopefully, I thought. Hopefully my brother and I could finaly reconnect. Be as one, but in two bodys. Maybe some day.


I am finaly finished! I am proud of this. I have been lingering at other fourms and I saw some much, much better and longer than mine. But this is the best I could do. Good Luck To Every One Who Enterd For The Twin Trackers!

[DoctorDraca]

Whooop <33 You did it Mini 83
Do yup judge WIP forms too Nex?
So need that cute design for 21 x-x

I judge WIP forms too if the WIP only applies to the story and not the rest of the form.

[Wlyrout]

Oh gosh, I've got lots of competition! Nice forms, you guys.

EDIT: Congrats, Mini!

[corgie]

Thank you so much guys <3
I'm so happy I got her 8D
I'll stick her in my signature right away tomorrow c:

[cedaar]

Congrats Mini. <3

LOL, my form is on page 147. Just so ya'll know.

[cloudling]

Hey Nex. ^0^

First time at this thread, and such, so hello~

Tennis. asked me to crit her form, would it be okay if I edited it for her..? As in I could repost it with edits, but she would still get the tracker? >3<