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by Hollywood Undead » Sat Feb 26, 2011 10:15 pm
Nex wrote:Starfighter, it might be good to look at other people's form to get the general idea of a good application. Yours is far too short right now and could use some work. Also, if you're confused about the introduction, it's a short story written about the first time your character (that will adopt the Tracker) and the Tracker meet. Or it can be written from the Tracker's point of view about the first time he/she's out on a mission or something like that.wolf_girl_14 wrote:Really? Thanks Icesky! Well, does any one have any tips for me to improve my form?
As much as I appreciate the enthousiasm and willingness to improve, I'd rather have you ask these things either on the fan club (which is here on CS) or on the forum. It prevents too many posts here.
Alright, thanks Nex!
.. I looked on the front page and couldnt find a link to the fanclub, could you post it?
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by starfighter123 » Sat Feb 26, 2011 10:21 pm
Tracker Dog Application Series 7
Username: starfighter123
Tracker Dog you want: 20#
Name you'll give it: daze
Reason why you want it: I will use her in so many things and she is so cute
Will it be used in any kind of story? mabey.
Daze looked round the corner she saw the crime and ran out after the criminal the criminal started to run faster but Daze caught up with him.Daze dragged him to her owner she jamp about her owner to show her what she had caught,the criminal,Daze's Owner looked at the criminal and phoned the cops."My tracker dog has caught the criminal for you.The criminal is out side my house for you" "OK we will be with you in a few minutes"
Describe its personality: Kind good on missions and loves to jump
Write an introduction for your Tracker:
As she waits calmly in the pound she see's someone walk past Daze looked at them and whined as if to say "please take me" The person walks back to the whining pup and says "I will take this one" Daze jumps about crazy in her cage waiting to be let out and took to her new home.when she got there she ran about the house looking for a toy,for her new owner to play with her.her owner looked at her and said "do you want some food daze?" daze ran to the kitching yelping for food.Her owner pored the food in the bowl "there you go daze" daze started to eat it!.
I hope I get her dont do my other one just this one
I love riding,I have two horses,Buzz and magic
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by Bartimaeus » Sun Feb 27, 2011 12:22 am
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Please disregard this post as of now. :L I've decided this isn't the tracker for me. I can't think of what to write now, and if I'm not bothered enough to try obviously its not the one I've been looking for. Thank-you for your time anyway, and good luck to those who try out for #23! ^-^
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