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Re: Pinnacle

Postby King Abi » Tue Feb 22, 2011 1:59 am

see now- i wouldn't be able to cope- i think i would either match breaks phyco-frenzic mess thing or just be really REALLY violent and cry pretty much all the time. urgh i hate headaches, ive got one at the moment- doesnt help when im doing exam prep work :/ <3
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby King Abi » Wed Feb 23, 2011 4:48 am

ok, im slightly worried now :O no updates!! ahhh, you should be carefull not to get our hopes up on updates. THATS IT IM OFFICIALLY UNSTALKING YOU.

i joke, im not that petty. im on half term and oh my god i hate my house, im so bored that- if i stay here any longer i will commit homocide/suicide o.o*

any-whoo, update soon-ish, yes?? tah :')
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby DRdoctorlady » Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:24 am

Yus, right now in fact.
But I did update on Sunday.
Just very late Sunday, so it may have been a different time for you. But yesterday I couldn't get on because my brat of a brother was on instead.
But right now I'm in the library at mah school with a good thirty minutes up for typing.
Oh, and Angel, yus. To everything said thus far. Your intellect serves you well. And Ser, I know. My mother doesn't seem to get that distractions help headaches, and makes it worse by making me get off. So I just don't tell her unless its really bad and I can't do much but sit there. Oh, and I have Mr. Pointy right here. I use him to stab apart the walls of writer's block.
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Chapter 2d
-------->Continuation
Its dimmer inside the shop and everything is coated in a layer of dust. From the freezers in the back I can smell things rotting in the heat. Yuck. Ducking under a beaded partition, I trot over to the shelves and peer around. Ice follows in behind me, sounding disgruntled, while Dagger stands in the doorway, wrinkling his nose.
"It smells in here," He comments.
"Shut up," I say, walking into the next isle over. Dagger doesn't say anything. I look at some of the boxes on the bottom and I see bags full of dried fruit. I remember my mom buying me the sugared mangos and pineapples and feeding them to me. Smiling, I throw all the fruit into one box and turn around, thrusting it into Ice's arms. He looks inside the box and makes a face.
"What?"
"This has been sitting in here for six months. Is it safe to eat?" He asks. I think he's more worried the smell of fish will linger.
"Should be. Its preserved," I chuck in nuts and noodles. I trot over to the next isle. It feels weird to be here, systematically going through the shelves. Almost like I'm grocery shopping, but in a store full of rotten food with no clerk demanding money for it. I'm surprised I didn't think of coming here before. Almost everything seems preserved or edible.
"Oi, Dagger, get in here," I say, tossing spices into Ice's full box. After hearing a lack of obeying footsteps, I turn around. Dagger's not in the doorway. Since I'm not always the sharpest knife in the knife drawer, I just walk outside to take a look.
Before you jump to conclusions thinking that something bad happened, stop thinking. Now.
I see Dagger's keeled over across the parking lot, throwing up his insides. Geez. Sure bad fish smells but so do dead bodies, and those are everywhere here.
Dismissing Dagger's wussyness, I walk back in and see Ice stacking candy bars on the checkout desk.
"Can we eat those?" I ask. Calcified rock hard chocolate bars are usually not something I enjoy putting in my mouth.
"Not sure. But I can give them to Coon next time he bothers me."
"Thats a bit devious," I observe mildly. Ice shrugs and puts them in a second box.

((dang I have to go now bell rang gack!Must hurry))
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby King Abi » Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:45 am

your at school at the moment! dangg its 35 minutes past 6 here :O thank you for making my day :') fact: i hate brothers, unless there someone elses, and hot. good day all :)
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby AngelInWaiting » Wed Feb 23, 2011 7:11 am

I'm glad my intellect is working well *pats intellect* Good Intellect!

So, is Dagger really just throwing up over the fish, or something else that will be revealed later?.... Wow, I overanalyze things xD
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby DRdoctorlady » Wed Feb 23, 2011 11:55 am

Angel: Possibly. The thing about life is, sometimes, when you think something will happen, nothing happens. But when you don't expect anything, BAM, suddenly your standing knee deep in cornstarchy water with turtles nomming on your fingers and your hair is on fire. How did this happen? You may not always know, and will sit there pondering this whilst the turtles eat all of your fingers.
But Dagger is basically throwing up cuz he gets struck with those moments when he seems to remember the Apocalypse had happened and gets mentally ill.
And Abi: My brother is the sort of brother that if you give him a hard enough stare he will run away screaming in fear and terror. I raised him well :P
But my parents sometimes make him stand up for himself and force him to do what he wanted anyway.
And yus I was. It was 1 to 1:30 ish
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby Ser'reth » Wed Feb 23, 2011 12:40 pm

*insert witty and completely relevant comment here* :3 *runs away*

P.S. Considering his imperative position in you valiant quest to dismember the oppressing fortress of Writer's Block (booooo!) and bring us the shining treasure that is Pinnacle (yaaaaaaay!), I shall allow you to keep Mr. Pointy in the hope that you may vanquish this horrid enemy. o3o *runs away for real*
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby DRdoctorlady » Wed Feb 23, 2011 12:45 pm

You can have Mr. Pointy's sister, Madam Sharpy.
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby Ser'reth » Wed Feb 23, 2011 1:10 pm

>=D Mwahahahah-Ahem. I mean, Sweetness! :]
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby AngelInWaiting » Wed Feb 23, 2011 2:50 pm

Dragonsrule wrote:Angel: Possibly. The thing about life is, sometimes, when you think something will happen, nothing happens. But when you don't expect anything, BAM, suddenly your standing knee deep in cornstarchy water with turtles nomming on your fingers and your hair is on fire. How did this happen? You may not always know, and will sit there pondering this whilst the turtles eat all of your fingers.



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