❛ the lazy writers ❜

[Silver Pandorica]

Finished the prologue of my story: here.

Woah...that was amazing...I need more!!

hello lovely people! i am floki, but feel free to call me flo or westy (which is what i am on AS). i am hoping to join this wonderful club if that is good with y'all.
i am currently in the process of writing a short story, and a book of short stories and poems. but yeah, i hope that is all good with everyone. c;

Welcome, welcome! The carrot is the all powerful enemy, so stay away from it. ;D

Finished chapter four! The fantasy part of the story finally started, but you can't really tell what's happening yet

[floki,]

@DeMaizu; why thank you! and stay away from carrots? i love carrots...
@BucketORandonmess; thank you as well! also i guess i shall have to share them will y'all for critique soon! but i am too lazy to put up links and stuff XD
@SilverCrescentMoon; thank you!

my goodness, all of y'all are really hating on carrots. why not broccoli, or brussel sprouts?

[Silver Pandorica]

A while back, someone had a villain in their story that was really powerful and evil or something like that and someone suggested they choke on a carrot. Carrots are deadly to writers because all writers are evil X3

[Ranger of the North]

Welcome, Flo!
Eeyy I know you!
totally isn't watching your writing boards

Silver, Terry, (輝馬─(Tᴇʀᴜᴍᴀ)- can we call you that for short?) I'll read you two's bits-s soon

Guys, could I get some thoughts on this?

“Crowns and kings!”
a small girl sings.
“A dragon roams the land!”

“Don’t be silly,”
protests Old Millie,
and quickly takes her hand.

“It’s true, it’s true!”
the child wa-hoos.
“You’re scared and ran real grand!”

“I am not.”
Old Mill turns hot,
As the dragon shakes her hand.

It's just supposed to be a light-hearted thing, but I don't know much about poems' grammar :-/

[Suhø]

Yeah you guys can call me Teruma, the characters are Japanese for 'shining horse'. Long story.

[DeMaizu]

@Teruma I like long stories! *leans forward* Why don't you tell me all~ about it?
If anyone at all got that reference I will love you forever and ever as a fellow Yu Watase fan

[Arid Wyvern]

Hello everyone!
Could I get some feedback on this? viewtopic.php?f=57&t=3255431

[anxious ghost]

I desperately need help, peeps. I have four characters who all need to be on the same flight. Mack is in Washington (state), Dessie in Detroit, Michigan, and Spencer and Toby are in Manhattan. They all need to be on a flight that passes over (or at least gets semi close to) the Bermuda triangle. Please help.

[CJClaire]

I desperately need help, peeps. I have four characters who all need to be on the same flight. Mack is in Washington (state), Dessie in Detroit, Michigan, and Spencer and Toby are in Manhattan. They all need to be on a flight that passes over (or at least gets semi close to) the Bermuda triangle. Please help.

Have them all have to transfer flights. This is pretty common! They could all get off their flights to get on another one in Detroit or Denver or somewhere else, and then they fly over.

[Aliria]

I desperately need help, peeps. I have four characters who all need to be on the same flight. Mack is in Washington (state), Dessie in Detroit, Michigan, and Spencer and Toby are in Manhattan. They all need to be on a flight that passes over (or at least gets semi close to) the Bermuda triangle. Please help.

Hmm... To get them all on the same flight, the ones in Washington and Detroit would have to be taking a connecting flight where they transfer in Manhattan (or Detroit, both are major hubs. I'm too lazy to research two cities though). Then, to pass over the Bermuda Triangle... I looked at a flight map, and the flights from JFK airport in New York which appear to go over the Bermuda Triangle go to Santiago, Dominican Republic; Santo Domingo, Dominican Republic; Turks and Caicos Islands; Aruba; and Buenos Aires, Argentina, though there might be a few other good ones I didn't see. There probably aren't connecting flights from Washington and Detroit through New York that go to any of those locations, but you can probably just pretend there are for the good of the story. Hope that helped a bit!