Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby paola . » Thu Feb 17, 2011 11:47 am

Tracker Dog Application Series 6
Username: skyler<3
(do you want me to put it in the normal fancy form?)
Tracker Dog you want:
Tracker Dog #18
Name you'll give it:
Saatan
Reason why you want it:
I think she is beautiful and very different from others to me, she was very appealing and spoke to me, something about her makes me feel like I can relate to her and she can relate to me and what I am going through right now. Everything about her, her details and colors are beautiful and she just fits with me.
Will it be used in any kind of story?
Saatan will be used in some dark and some winter stories of mine when I get bord in school and at night and when I am at the park waiting for my brothers to finish practicing.
Describe its personality:
Saatan looks like a evil, sinaster, mean, rude and dark tracker, maybe even imposing she is violent but she is actually sweet, kind, compassionate, benevolent, meticulous, cordial, wonderful, amusing and gentle tracker. She is very loyal and brave too but she can be sarcastic and demanding at times.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby CharyouTree » Thu Feb 17, 2011 1:09 pm

Tracker Dog Application Series 6
Username: MishaMinion
Tracker Dog you want: #17
Name you'll give it: Whiskey

Reason why you want it: I've always been a fan of the trackers (although it's more of a secret love), and althought I do already have one, I'm looking to get another to be a main character in story I've been working on. This guy has the perfect look, purpose, and I've already got tons of ideas for him.

Will it be used in any kind of story?: Yes ^^ (see above)

Describe its personality:
Whiskey is a very focused and intelligent tracker. His specialized training in a city enviroment gives him a certain determination to get things done, and get them done right. He very rarely ever gets distracted from a mission, and he will never let personal things get in his way. His ability to make difficult decisions in a short amount of time makes him extrememly efficient. The only thing that ever holds him back is his short temper, ecspecially when it comes to his partner. The difference in priorities makes Whiskey feel like he's responsible for both of their jobs. This keeps him from noticing the details that he usually focuses on to get the job done right.

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The scents of blank faced people, foggy exhaust, wailing car horns, and loudly ringing bells. This was the everyday world of the tracker dog, Whiskey. Today, his owner had given him a mission: to track down a drug dealer who'd been evading the police for months now, but was still managing to get his product into the system. When the cops couldn't catch them, they sent Whiskey in.

This job wasn't much different from most. It involved all the standard procedures. First was to find a scent. His owner had given him a old article of clothing that belonged to the dealer, and now Whiskey stood at an intersection trying to catch the faint scent underneath the everyday smells of the streets. For several minutes he stood almost paralyzed, trying to find it. And suddenly, there it was.

Whiskey immediately formed an image of the scent trail in his mind. It appeared at a silvery blue in the midst of the black and white fuzz of what he initially pictured. Weaving carefully through hurried feet past the brightly flashing lights of a casino, he followed the trail easily to the steps of a small resturaunt. The scent was strong here, much stronger than it had been at the intersection for sure. He could tell now that this is where the man was. As he was about to enter, a familiar smell hit him briefly, and was accompanied by a fleeting shadow. His partner, an aerial tracker, was keeping up on what was happening from up above.

Trying to stay focused, Whiskey ignored this and tried to find the easiest access to the buidling. Quietly, he circled until he found a half opened window. Using his muzzle, the tracker pried open the window the rest of the way and leaped nimbly into the room. The first thing that hit him was the intense smell of drugs. A weakness of Whiskey's, that that startling scent, that hit him like a roundhouse kick every time. The few seconds that he was stunned was all the drug dealer needed. He had been sitting at his desk when the tracker jumped in, and now he had leaped to his feet with a gun in hand. He clumsily fired a shot at Whiskey.

The sound in the small room was deafening for the man, but it was enough to startle Whiskey back into action. The dealer had fallen to the ground clutching his head. Whiskey took two large leaps, then sunk his sharp teeth into the hand that held the gun. It was dropped immediately, and accompanied by a scream of agony. From here, the work was over. All the tracker had to do was keep the man pinned, which he happily did. Holding his neck down firmly with his teeth, he waited for the team to arrive. Minutes later, they did. They cuffed the dealer securely, and hauled him off to the back of a police car. Whiskey watched this expressionlessly. As always, his owner and the team praised him for his work, and as always, Whiskey recieved this passively.

p.s- I'm sorry if the story is a little short. I already typed it once, but it took me around an hour and I was automatically logged off, so I lost the whole thing. This is a recreation.
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"Open your blessed wings
And wrap them around all your things
Keep yourself in the company of kings
Cause it's their hands that bleed from the strings"
My first thought was, he lied in every word
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
Askance to watch the working of his lie
On mine, and mouth scarce able to afford
Suppression of the glee that pursed and scored
Its edge at one more victim gained thereby.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby icarusAbstracted » Thu Feb 17, 2011 5:25 pm

Thinkies Nex. Oh, and one last question, on the custom form, what is the 'Alternate' section? Sorry to be such a bother!
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby DoctorDraca » Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:34 pm

Ananda98777 wrote:Thinkies Nex. Oh, and one last question, on the custom form, what is the 'Alternate' section? Sorry to be such a bother!

Well, you can write anything there that doesn't fit the other categories. For example, a certain wound or part of the ear bitten off. Stuff like that.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Fri Feb 18, 2011 12:01 am

Is the form for the special custom going to be the same as the normal one?
im basically never on, so if you wanna with trade me or if you message me, be prepared to wait a while for a response. this account is first and foremost a personal archive for sentimentality's sake as it was a big part of my childhood.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby kartharon » Fri Feb 18, 2011 1:00 am

Tracker Dog Application Series 6
Username:
Emeraldarrow
Tracker Dog you want:
#18
Name you'll give it:
Vuori (Goes by Ven)
Reason why you want it:
Why? Well first off, her color clashing. I love it! Black, white, and red. Probably the best I Could ask for. Also the species, I am more interested in the "wild" and normal trackers, as I prefer them but will make exceptions for the aquatics. ;) The "wild" versions with the longer than most fur, actually gives the Tracker detail, and I am one who enjoys being overly cold than overly hot, so one that is fit for ice storms and the mountains really speaks to me. :)

Will it be used in any kind of story?:
Si (yes), I will feature it in a Tracker Story as mentioned in my other form, I think I am liking this one better than the last one, I am actually glad I did not win the last one XD
Describe its personality:
As her looks clarify, Ven is a very dangerous girl, ready to rush into her missions without hesitation, bringing down her targets and enemies as she went. Though she has a very dark side, she has a sweet side deep down within her, covered in everything she hides it with, though it doesn't come out very often. As for her temper.. Well let's just say it would be best not to get on her bad side, or else you may be in for some of the moves she learned in training. XD Well she isn't cold, or evil for that matter, but she holds grudges and is very un-forgiven once you have done something that has possibly made her mad.
Anything else that is hidden deep within the depths of her fur is unknown to those around her, unless you are close enough with her to somehow unravel her past and delve into her hidden secrets. Along with her fiery attitude, Ven is very very sarcastic, and has a tendency to call you out if she thinks you are wrong.

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Job
Ven lives within the mountain region, having mastered this region and its snowy terrain, she couldn't imagine leaving it. Her job is to rescue and sniff out skiers that have been caught in avalanches, or children that have possibly strayed a bit to far from the ski resort. Her job also includes the occasional tracking down criminals or shooters that have caused trouble or disruption to the average life of the skiing vacationers.

Master/Trainer

Ven currently has no owner or master, she is just used by one leader or the other, only going on jobs with certain trainers when she's needed, other times she just lives alone at the facility, spending the nights there with her sister Sahara, an ariel tracker that was altered and suited for the desert, soon being transferred to Mount Kia with Ven. Ven has hopes that she'll find the right owner one day, but no one has the guts to deal with her "blow at any second" temper.

Climate Prefered
As shown in her pure white fur, Ven is more of a mountian and ice kind of girl, not really one that enjoys heat, even if it is just a heater in the base. Her thick fur helps her keep heat in her body for long periods of time when she goes out in the snow or out into a blizzard, and her paw pads are much thicker so she doesn't sink in the snow, instead runs on the top of it. Since her sister Sahahara was built for desert, she doesn't normally go out on missions and is considered useless to the team when there is big avalanches, having she has a much smaller build than Ven, and her fur is thin and wispy, suited for hot climates.


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"Ven! Ven you have to wake up!"
Vuori blinked open her eyes wearily and then snapped her head up, leaping so she was standing on all four paws, her fangs bared and her jaws stretched wide as if she would bite at any moment. A low guttural snarl emerged from her throat as she scented the air until realized it was just her sister Sahara.
... But something was still wrong. The desperation in her voice made Ven worried right away, if she cared for anyone in the world of Trackers, it was her sister.
"Sahara? What happened." Ven demanded quickly in a series of barks. As she "looked" around, she realized that everyone in the building was gone, none of the owners nor the trainers were in the base.
Ven felt Sahara take a shaky breath and then pricked up her ears in confusion at what she heard next. "They invaded. Everyone is gone."
Ven shoook her head slightly and then barked at Sahara. "You know it's not funny to joke around like that. Seriously, where did everyone go?!" When Sahara didn't answer Ven ran to the control moniter that sat on a black and white desk, the base was themed in those colors, kinda like a retro look.
Ven heard the alarm system, the adrenaline had been flowing so fast through her veins and messing with her head that she hadn't hear the distant squealing until that moment.
Ven whimpered slightly as the high-pitched noises made her ears ring, but she raced around the base, getting scents of the people that were gone and the ones that had invaded.
As Ven scented the air again, getting a picture, Sahara really meant it, everyone was gone. Not a single tracker was left, not even Rivera, their only aquatic tracker.
"Why didn't they take us?!" Ven snarled at her sister, as if she would know the answer. She wanted to hunt down the invaders and kill them off one by one, listen to their screams when they finally stopped breathing. Her mind was on a rampage at that moment it seemed, Ven's temper had blown.
Sahara just shivered and sat there, her eyes directed at her paws as she tried to respond but her words choked up in her throat.
"Well?! Answer me Sahara!" Ven snarled slightly and leaped up, landing right in front of her sister as her white and black fur gleamed in the lights from the ceiling.
Sahara "glared" at her sister and snarled back slightly, her fangs glinting slightly in the dim light as Ven's fur had. "How am I supposed to know Ven?! They took everyone, they gave me some sort of shot that put me out, I thought that they were going to take me, but then they left you behind to! I don't know why they didn't take us, you are perfect for blizzards and stuff, I'm perfect for deserts, they should have taken at least one of us!" As her breath ran out she just sat there, stiff, her ears lower than usual and her tail drooped low.
Ven lied down on the ground, her head on her paws as she tried to think of a perfectly good explanation, but none came. "How are we going to find them?" Ven asked finally, her voice filled with a calm that was hinted in rage.
Sahara shook her head but then replied, "We won't."

WIP... I guess that could be the end, I didn't know what to put. :)
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby RainbowBizkit <3 » Fri Feb 18, 2011 9:29 am

forget my message before i am staying in the running for 17 after long thinking... i know i can only have 3 trackers but 17 is amazing i love him and i will add so much detail to my story xDD
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Such a lack of conviction no real connection what should I settle for
But you caught my attention you built on the tension and you left me wanting more
Now I don't know what to do with myself do with myself I don't want nobody else"
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Fri Feb 18, 2011 10:00 am

Also, does sleeping gas affect trackers in any way?
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby DoctorDraca » Fri Feb 18, 2011 10:19 am

ravenmoon wrote:Is the form for the special custom going to be the same as the normal one?

Probably, yes. I'll work out the exact details with the person getting that slot.

ravenmoon wrote:Also, does sleeping gas affect trackers in any way?

I reckon it does..
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0

Postby Winterfaux » Fri Feb 18, 2011 1:45 pm

Tracker Dog Application Series 6
Username:
Bk13
Tracker Dog you want:
#18
Name you'll give her:
Lyra
Reason why you want her:
Well, I have been stalking this thread for a while now just waiting for a tracker to catch my eye and she is very pretty ^^ Many of my characters have a light and dark color scheme so I think she would fit in perfectly with the rest of my misfits, I also really like how you explained how tough she looks but that looks can be decieving, I think that fits very well with her. Plus, shes beautiful =3

Will she be used in any kind of story?
If I can think of a plot line, heck yes. But I'm working on a number of different stories (All of which I'm stuck in xp) so for now, no. In the future, maybe.
Describe her personality:
A quiet and well behaved girlie; loyal to a fault and quite ladylike in public situations. However sometimes due to her 'proper' behavior she can seem kind of cold (Haha pun. Cuz she lives in the snow, and snow is.. Cold... Yeah.) And cold she can be, with ease, due to her training. She was trained to be stoick in all situations unless signaled that it was ok to be relaxed. In those relaxed situations she tends to take the attitude of a caring older sister; assertive but also concerned with the welfare of her companions.

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WIP

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