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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby dove. » Sun Oct 30, 2016 1:54 pm

juliebean223 wrote:Guys I need something to write and draw about


Oooh! Maybe a halloween story? (if you celebrate it of course).



DeMaizu wrote:Everyone's asking quetions . . . .

@CC I'm sorry, but my brain is a little fried in the critique department right now. Maybe I'll come back later and have something to say, but for the moment I'm out.

@Dove, I pick . . . . mystery.

@julie, write/draw about someone who goes through in an accident that involves them losing a lot of blood, and they have to go to the hospital. However, somehow they end up with the blood from some mythological being (like a griffin or a banshee or something with wings). Then, a little bit later after they've been discharged, they're talking or interacting with their group and something surprises them into jerking back, and wings pop out of their back so that they're hovering a little above the ground.


Thanks! Also, you can pick one more. Since that's what is aloud for what i'm putting it up on.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby BucketORandomness » Sun Oct 30, 2016 1:57 pm

@Dove, I think your story ((or what you've described so far)) sounds like a mystery or family novel. Possibly developing into a romance, but it didn't have the feel of being focused around a budding love between characters.

@Julie, you could try writing about a hidden civilization and draw the random people you meet in their unique outfits or actions. Or ((If you're practicing descriptive writing)) you could find a small object and describe it in as much detail as you can for each of the five senses. Either that, or you could do a scribble, find a picture or image in that, draw it in more detail, and then write about the picture. Not sure this helped, but it's something you could try. >^.^<
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby dove. » Sun Oct 30, 2016 2:00 pm

BucketORandomness wrote:@Dove, I think your story ((or what you've described so far)) sounds like a mystery or family novel. Possibly developing into a romance, but it didn't have the feel of being focused around a budding love between characters.


Thank you! Also, I was a little iffy on asking for romance just because it doesn't extacly seem like that besides that there is a bit of a budding romance in it but it's not a main idea.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Sun Oct 30, 2016 3:06 pm

It sounds a bit like mystery to me dove, depending more on how complicated the rest of the plot is anyway.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Silver Pandorica » Sun Oct 30, 2016 3:11 pm

DeMaizu wrote:Everyone's asking quetions . . . .

@CC I'm sorry, but my brain is a little fried in the critique department right now. Maybe I'll come back later and have something to say, but for the moment I'm out.

@Dove, I pick . . . . mystery.

@julie, write/draw about someone who goes through in an accident that involves them losing a lot of blood, and they have to go to the hospital. However, somehow they end up with the blood from some mythological being (like a griffin or a banshee or something with wings). Then, a little bit later after they've been discharged, they're talking or interacting with their group and something surprises them into jerking back, and wings pop out of their back so that they're hovering a little above the ground.


Oh my gosh, do you mind if I use this prompt?

@Dove.- I think romance and mystery ^^
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby dove. » Sun Oct 30, 2016 3:12 pm

Alright, I'm writing a scary story (kinda) and hopefully it turns out well since I suck at scary stories.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Suhø » Sun Oct 30, 2016 3:16 pm

@dove,
good luck

I have the oddest desire to write a Rocky Horror/Black Butler crossover. I kind of have a summary...thing.


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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby DeMaizu » Sun Oct 30, 2016 3:22 pm

SilverCrescentMoon wrote:
DeMaizu wrote:Everyone's asking quetions . . . .

@CC I'm sorry, but my brain is a little fried in the critique department right now. Maybe I'll come back later and have something to say, but for the moment I'm out.

@Dove, I pick . . . . mystery.

@julie, write/draw about someone who goes through in an accident that involves them losing a lot of blood, and they have to go to the hospital. However, somehow they end up with the blood from some mythological being (like a griffin or a banshee or something with wings). Then, a little bit later after they've been discharged, they're talking or interacting with their group and something surprises them into jerking back, and wings pop out of their back so that they're hovering a little above the ground.


Oh my gosh, do you mind if I use this prompt?

@Dove.- I think romance and mystery ^^

No, go ahead :D
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby birbmememaster24 » Sun Oct 30, 2016 3:27 pm

You know when your emotional and sometimes it channels your writing? It happens to me all the time but its not working this one time.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Silver Pandorica » Sun Oct 30, 2016 3:30 pm

juliebean223 wrote:You know when your emotional and sometimes it channels your writing? It happens to me all the time but its not working this one time.


Same haha

@De- Yesss, thank you ^o^
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