[Toppyrocks]

So this is a work in progress, most defineatly not done. I need some advice, and maybe some crit. But first, this is my inspiration and kinda what i based it off:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iWOyfLBYtuU

The three hooves that aren't purple need a colour ( purple is supposed to be sparkly) I think the mane needs something more, maybe the tail too, the cloudy bits on the shoulder will probably go, but I need something to replace them. Maybe some more leg markings ( the two leg bands are supposed to be like actually seperate, not markings). I need to fill in the inside of the ear and something with the nose. As well as clean up around the outlines.

Any suggestions?

[Oddly Shaded]

Well, if you want crit (as you asked), i'd have to say that the colours should go more together. You have a group of different colours that don't really match. The clouds make it looks slightly messy, and the main should have maybe a black at the tips.

<3 Oddly Shaded

[Toppyrocks]

Ok, thanks. I was going to get rid of the clouds anyways, I was just playing with them before and was too lazy to get rid of them before posting. I'll try adding the black in the mane. Thanks!

I fixed it, mostly I think. I clicked colour me in by accident, so it's in that spot now. What do you think, Oddly Shaded? Is it better?