[Syla Delaney]

The first page, chapter 2....
YES.

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Don't you dare come back here again.

See, I broke it. Gone. All mine now. You can't come here anymore.

JUST YOU TRY.

I'm ME now, not you, not yours. MINE. ME!

Hahaha....

That's right... I'm a terror.

You asked what I would do... Is this enough of an answer?

[Syla Delaney]

Comments and critiques are beautiful things.

[.Red.]

I don't really under stand the whole... talking thing. Who was it, Zane? And if so, was he talking to sombody else?

[Syla Delaney]

It's Zane, and he's SORT of talking to master.
It's like one of those moments when someone might not really be in the same room, but you still might say 'darn you so-and-so'.
I apologize for the confusion.

[falling city]

Zane the terror! :P
I like the frames on this one, it captures the effect.

[.Red.]

It was o huge confusement, I thought that was what it was, i just wasn't very sure. Thanks for clearing it up!

[Syla Delaney]

Thank you!
XD
This one was a bit of a challenge.
I would have liked to make the spiral gate engine larger and more detailed, but that would require the scene to take two pages... not two panels...

And you're welcome!
Sorry, sometimes the scenes can come off a bit... confusing.
If you ask me, I never mind telling.

[LonelySnowGirl]

nice o.o i like it :3

[Syla Delaney]

nice o.o i like it :3

Thank you so much!
XD

[Keero]

Haha, it's great to see little Zane breaking things. xD
So unlike the little guy earlier on.
I want to know what he broke. :U
Can't wait for the next page. <3