Deer adoptables -; hiatus

[Pideaux]

Definitely trying out for this girl. Will post something later. Beautiful, if I must say. :3

[Featherwolf.]

Lawe... is my name <3

I totally fell in love with her! She is just so precious and beautifull. If I will get her, I will do the best for her. I will give her food and water (sometimes yummy juice for young deers) in morning when she wakes up. Then I will play with her in garden, before school. Because I don't want to let her alone in my school-time, I will put her into my private forest place with other deer friends to play and socialize. They will always have toys and food and lake there. When I'll get home, I'll pick her and went to long walk to meadow,forest and finally home. She can do whatewer she wants in this time. Blah, blah... but story? okay :3

"Is there something wrong with me? Why everyone hates me? I... I just want some friends... They also aren't so colorfull as me. Maybe that's it, cuz I'm different and they don't like it. But... I don't want to change... *sigh*" She thought when she was alone in the forest. Noone wants to play or even talk with her. She thought that she is bad. But there was little hope, that she maybe can find some deer like she is. But it was too long way and she was so upset, that she couldn't do anything. Just lay in grass. Sun raised at the sky. Sun rays were visible thought trees. And one ray was warming her nose. She openned her eyes and got up. Finally. "There is hope. I have so much time. I don't want to be alone anymore."

[*~*BurningStars*~*]

Ooh! It looks like another fruit/vegetable deer! Like a Macintosh apple! I'll probably try for this one...

[Lukina]

This doe is lovely and I have to say she really caught my eye, and I think I could find an rp for her and maybe make up a story for her.


One day Lukina was walking through the forest to clear her mind, it was full of upsetting thoughts from the days before this one. As she walked tears filled her eyes and rolled down her rosy cheeks, bringing up a hand she wiped them from her face. "Will these thoughts leave me anytime soon?" She whispered softly. She then came to a meadow filled with bright and heavenly scented flowers and in the middle was a big beautifl lake. A smile came to Lukina's lips as she took in the sight and smells, it felt like she was in a dream as she continued on. Walking to the pond she sat on a rock at the water edge, took off her shoes and rolled up her pants and dipped her feet into the cool water.

She closed her eyes and enjoyed the smells that swirled around her and the warmth of the sun, just then she heard the rustling of leaves behind her. "What was that?" She whispered. She didn't move as she turned her head to scan the area behind her, her eyes widened as she saw a creature emerge from the trees. Lukina's jaw just about dropped at its beauty, it was a doe with a pelt of red and golden yellow. She was a stunning creature as she gracfully headed to the pond, her pelt gleamed in the sunlight and it took Lukina's breath away. She watched as the doe reached the waters edge and dipped her to drink, how is it she had never seen a deer such as this before, was the only place to find them?

Lukina shifted and caused the water to swish and the doe lifted her head and saw her, there was slight fear in the doe's eyes as she went to run. "Please don't run!" Lukina called to the doe. "I won't harm you." She spoke in a kind tone. The doe turned and faced her as she spoke tilting her head a bit. "I could never harm such a stunning creature as yourself, and never before have I seen one like yourself." She continued. Lukina pulled her feet from the water and stood, a warm smile upon her lips. "I would be honored and greatful to be your friend." She said slowly walking towards her with her hand held out. "Your pelt makes me think of a peach and you even smell a little like peaches to me." She giggled. She saw the deer back away and Lukina dropped her hand. "I'm sorry, that was too fast." She said sadly.

She sat down and looked at the beautiful doe that stood just a few feet away from her. "I understand if you wish me not to pet you but I would still like to become your friend. I don't have many friends, for they think I'm a bit strange and don't take the time to get to know me. I spend most of my time drawing and singing to myself, so the sounds around me are my only friends and a few birds and other animals but they still like to keep to themselves." She spoke sadly. "Would you like to be my friend?"

[supernovacity]

I'm applying for the deer who is up for adoption

The forest was for dark colored does and stags. Me i was bright colored they exiled me for my differences. I saw a girl i was fearful she beckoned she has food she looked kind i steadily apporached. and she gave me a hug a hug! we frolocked and played and had a blast that is what she named me Blast i loved the name. It suited me so well. i loved her and she loved me. i was in bliss happy and content. the girl had brought fresh grass i munched happily and we played as we always did happily i jumped and ran she fell and hurt her knee she whimpered and cried. i leaned down and cuddled with her until she felt calm enough to climb onto my back and i took her to her parent who helped and thanked me by letting me stay with them. And so i did.

[.Apocalypse.]

Kiara wandered through the forest. The one place where she could be free. Free of her mean parents, from school, everything. She had her long light brown hair pulled back in a ponytail and was sitting against her favorite willow in a large abandoned Orchard. There were apple tree's, orange tree's, peach tree's, and her favorite in the dead center, the Weeping willow. It looked like an old tree but its vines grew thick enough to swing on. She stood up and wandered over to the apple tree, taking an apple. Kiara took a bite after inspecting it for worm holes. She heard a squeak and turned around to see a baby deer with beautiful markings dash up to her with its mother, eyes frantic. Suddenly, a hunter burst through the orange patch and aimed its gun at the fawn, who was in front of its mother. Kiara dove for the beautiful fawn, pushing it out of range and cuddling it close to her. A horrible bang sounded and Kiara turned to see the mother on the ground, blood pooling out of a bullethole and the gun pointed at her and the fawn. Kiara's eyes widened with fear as she scooped up the fawn and ran. She didn't know where she was going, but she knew she was running fast. She veered off track towards a barn where she dashed in, placing the fawn in the straw next to her. Another bang sounded and a bullet came through the door missing Kiara and the fawn by a hair. Kiara scooped up the fawn again and climbed up the barn ladder to the loft. she placed the fawn up in the straw. Kiara grinned, she was just running for the fawn, she could handle the hunter. "Shhhhhh, we don't want the hunter realizing your up here!" Kiara whispered before opening up the door. The hunter was standing there, an evil grin on his face. "I hope you know your blood type." Kiara snarled before she knocked him out. She dragged him to the Orchard and dropped him. "I just got revenge for all the animals you've killed." Kiara whispered, walking back to the barn. The fawn was standing up on the loft as Kiara climbed up there and soothed it. "I know your mother is gone, but I'll raise you better tham she did and you'll grow up a happy, healthy deer." She said."And I'll live out here with you." The fawn let out a squeak as Kiara added the words. "Good night." Kiara whispered curling up to sleep.

One year later..

Kiara's eyes fluttered open and she realized Sugar was at the bottom of the loft, still asleep. She had grown just like Kiara had promised, a healthy, happy Deer and Sugar's markings were clearer now, the most beautiful markings Kiara had ever seen on a deer! Kiara leapt down to Sugar's level and sat next to her. The door shook. Kiara looked up. Must be windy out. She thought. Suddenly, the door was knocked down and the Hunter stood before Kiara. "You little brat. I've been trying to find you and your equally bratty Deer for a year now." His eyes glittered with hatred. "To get my revenge," He muttered. A glint of silver was the last thing Kiara and Sugar saw.[/quote]

[Bast-et]

Rant can be found on my charter thread, here

Now my story for doe:

The day was past time to dawn. The birds had woken in the early hours of the day as usual, but morning had not followed. Rabbits pulled themselves from holes and stared in wonder at the stars still painted across the sky. Bears grumbled and turned back over in their dens when the sun did not rise. The owls sat on branches, heads twisting side to side called "Who?" " Who?" at the dark sky. The deer chattered among themselves as they moved gracefully through the dark. "Where is she?" grouched one old buck. "Its her first day, poor deer, give the darling a few more moments".

Then a splash of color spread over the sky, purple. Next, brighter- pink. Then orange rose in the sky, pulling a glowing yellow after it. The rich red faded up to join the rest, and last of all the shy sun. The rest of the forest rushed about to finish all that they had missed- Dusk was never late- but the deer remained stared towards the sunrise. "Shes rather talented, if late" "It was beautiful" a young fawn told her mother in awe, "I wanna do that when I grow up" The mother laughed lightly,"Sorry darling, you haven't been marked for it, see your coat?" The child's coat was a soft brown like all of the other deer gathered there.

Then a yellow head appeared over the horizon, the colors fading down her neck and back like a sunset- or sunrise. Then the herd of deer surrounded her complimenting her first day of duty, one she would have until another deer was born with the same fate defining colors as she. The sun glowed above them.

[.Apocalypse.]

Sorry

[astrocompass]

@~Chloe~ and ~Bast~: While you to may differ on opinions it might be better if you take any discussion regarding this over to the PM's. This thread is about the adoptables and the stories people write to obtain them, not about the ethics in hunting. Bast, you really should not have posted what you did. It is a stereotype, and what many people believe. Don't temp the wolves out there by posting something that others may find offensive. Chloe, please do not retaliate on this thread, it simply spams it to be quoting everything, as I said before if you have an issue please take it to PMs

And on a lighter note, I will be updating the archives soon as I have been gone for some time now. Concept, the new deer is beautiful. I may have to write for her later :3

[Concept]

Okay guys! I'll be back to judge these applications after I get back from the city! So if there's any last minute finishes anyone wants to make, they better do it now!

And thanks so much to everyone XD I think you'll all be surprised on the ACTUAL inspiration for this deer... in fact, you'll laugh yourselves silly, I bet.

Okay, so I'm back, and I'm ready to judge!!

After reading all of the entries, I've made my decision. This doe is going to go to <3Fenris<3. Everyone else, I really appreciate the time and creative stories you made! They were a joy to read <33

Here ya go, <3Fenris<3, here's your code!

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And now, for those of you who were curious!

This Doe wasn't inspired by sunsets, or apples, or anything beautiful like that XD In fact, her origins are so much more simple. Now, anyone who's gone down the soda aisle in the store might just know what I mean when their eyes land on the Ruby Red Squirt bottle *trollface*

You betcha! This is a pop doe!