Symphony Character Adoption Agency - CD + OPEN! :)

[sundance,]

Sorry to. Sk so many questions, but can I apply for any kennel I want??

[Solanum]

Sorry to. Sk so many questions, but can I apply for any kennel I want??

As long as you follow the preferences of the design, of course you may.

[sundance,]

Sorry, dropping out.

[Solanum]

We do ask that when posting you do fill out some of it straight away. The simple things like kennel number and your username for starters x3
It helps wes sort out the form list posts.

[Folmes]

June

166

Mainly as my main character and she is amazing to write about! She covers all aspects of a good character, she is SO easy to write about from her personality! She is just such an amazing character and I would love her <3 and show her off as much as I can! She has so much potential and has made me think about what I'm truly writing and thinking when I think about actually having this character!

- About Angel -

Angel

Female

Dachshund with wings

Angel is sweet, sweeter than a lot of dogs in her pack. She is sweet, caring, and loving. She always has a soft spot for her friends and family. Her sweetness comes in handy when socializing with her master and others, her caring is always dependable and she is very independent and strong. She is also extremely hardcore when it comes to defending her friends and pack. This characteristic comes in handy during battle or hunting.

Angel was born in the summer along with her 4 siblings, Larka, Kia, Recha, and Elch. Angel was actually the smallest pup out of the litter and always had to fight hard for food and a spot next to her mother, Juna. This was Juna's second litter of pups and always tried to stick up for Angel. Angel looked up to her older, stronger siblings but never met their standards. Often, whenever the played, Angel would jump in only to be pushed out of the games and often excluded from a lot of things. Rarely their father, Olecha, would take the pups out for hunting lessons but Angel was never strong enough to keep up with the group, she would stay behind dreaming that she could go with them.

A few weeks after the began hunting, Olecha came for the pups for a fighting lesson, Angel thought that she was finally strong enough and decided to go along. The other pups snickered and glared at her as she nudged her father for approval to go, he nodded and trotted of to the fighting clearing. Her siblings struggled to keep up with his path through the forest but Angel, in the time her siblings had learned how to hunt, had been exploring and knew a path to the clearing and had no trouble keeping up.

She and Olecha finally reached the clearing and waited for the others, Olecha sat down and opened is huge, black wings. Angel stared in awe at the as the sun glittered around them. Thats when she noticed she had them too, just smaller and white with black tipped feathers. She moved this part of he body for the first time and started to trot in small circles. Eventually falling she looked to her father who was giggling at the small pup. He licked her ear and started to walk toward the forest right as her siblings came into the clearing. She had noticed the all her brothers and sisters had wings too.

Olecha had lined up the pups and told them to give the practice all our energy. Angel wagged her tail and watched her father nudge Kia to the center followed by Recha. Recha looked at Olecha in concussion but Kia pounced on her, he pinned her to the ground but in an instant Recha was kicking Kia's massive body off of herself. Slowly Recha got back to her feet and head butted Kia's large chest pushing him to the ground, she pinned his shoulder and back legs to the ground. Suddenly Olecha barked and Recha, stunned, jumped off of Kia, Recha got pushed to the side while Kia got pushed back to the pups.

Angel's feeling of confidence was slipping away as he nudged Elch and Larka forward. Angel swallowed hard as she saw the two go at each other with all they had, Elch went strait for Larka's tail and bit down hard. Her instant reaction was to kick, and with all her power, kicked his chest, it sent Elch flying back close to Angel. He got up and lounged strait for her Larka's chest, swiftly, she dodges it letting Elch fly toward Olecha and Recha. Before having a chance to respond, Elch bounds toward Larka landing heavily on her chest pinning her. Their father barks again and Elch is sent with Recha. Larka is sent back with Angel and Kia.

Angel's stomach fluttered with energy and suddenly realized, who would she fight? She prayed it wasn't the father. But when Olecha nudged Elch and Recha to the center, the pups were baffled and looked at one another. Elch booted towards Recha and pounded her front legs. She nipped and barked but he slowly pinned her. Olecha barked and scooted Recha out to the rest of them and pushed Angel towards Elch. Angel could her the snickers and laughter of the others, suddenly Olecha snapped at them. Angels blood was pumping as she approached Elch.

Angel raced toward Elch, catching him off guard. He got back up and snapped at the small dog. She bolted near the edge of the clearing and saw she was being chased by him, she dashed, opened her wings and fluttered them sending her far above her siblings and father, they all stared in wow and awe as her wings let her soar over the clearing. She stumbled coming back down but managed to tuck her wings in and roll.

Olecha ran up to her licking her face and smiling. The others ran up behind him and stared at her wings and all expanded their own and admired them.

~

A few months passed and all the pups knew how to fly, hunt, and fight. But Juna soon fell ill and became weaker and weaker. Olecha took best care of her as he could with the help of the Healer of the pack, Secle. Angel admired Secle and offered to fetch medicine and anything else needed. Her mother slowly recovered as the pups got set for the choosing of their place in the pack.

Soon enough, Juna was well again and Olecha called for a pack meeting. He announced that the pup's positions would be chosen. Kia was the first to be called up. He swallowed and trotted up to his father, Olecha barked out that Kia was a hunter. The pack howled as Kia stumbled over to the pack. Next was Larka, she padded up to her father and he announced she was a hunter too. She embraced the howling and moved to the pack. Recha was chosen next, Angel could she her shake as she was nudged up to Olecha. He announced her as a fighter, she grinned and padded over to the pack. Elch was sitting tall and embracing the stairs as he walked up. He was chosen to be a fighter, which wasn't a surprise.

Angel knew her turn was next and she braced herself for the position. She took a breath and trotted up to her father. He hesitated and look at her then Juna. He announce that Angel was the Healer's apprentice. Angel looked at the pack and opened her wings and smiled. The howled and barked as she went to them. She was finally in the pack.

~

- Other information -

Likes:
-Water
-Flying
-(Most) Other dogs
-Other animals
-Exploring

Dislikes:
-Fire
-Humans
-Snakes
-Ice/Snow

Age:
1 1/2 yrs old

Mate:
None

Fav color:
This color

Round one adoption form

[Folmes]

Username:
June
Kennel that you are applying for:
166
Preferred critic [any judge or sub-judge including myself is a valid request for critic. Please put 'any judge/subjudge' or something along those lines in this section if you do not have a preference]:
Any judge
What do you wish to get out of this critique? [What do you want us to let you know? How can we help you improve your form? Would you like advic on the contents, the length, the name of the character? How harsh should we be on you?]:
Critique on it in general and how I can inprove anything on it, brutally honest
Link to form:
viewtopic.php?f=58&t=1379673&start=160#p44209777
Round one critique request

[sundance,]

Dropping out!

[Electriic]

Applications sound fun...
So shall we do this the easy way, or the fun complicated way where I write something with deliberate mistakes and then ask for crit from each of you... Mwahahahahaha. -cough-

You sneaky Pix x3

We'll be holding critique applications soon!

Ahh I'm so excited <3
If I win then I'll make everyone give me a national holiday
If that makes sence |D

Are you going to be holding them within this code drop or a farther away one? x3 I can't wait .

[Tano-kun]

Pup 1
Username: Tano
Name: N/A
Gender: Male
Breed/Species: Wolf
Preferences and Requirements for adoption: Please don't change the gender and base design. Accessories may be added.
Lineart Link, design credits, etc.: Design (c) charmens, linearts (c) Taliska. and Apple respectively
Round one donation form

[perros1234]

Droping out. :c I just have no inspiration for those two.
Good luck to everyone else! c: