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Re: Deer adoptables

Postby ɾïṿεṉḋεll » Sun Jul 22, 2012 3:13 am

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Have you ever expirianced the rushing wind on your face, the ground a blur beneath your swift feet, the blood pounding in your ears? It's addictive, no, it's more than that. It's a way of life, especially if you need to get there quick. "What?" You may ask. "What is this amazing thing?"
Running.
It's like a drug, you can't pull away from it without destroying yourself. But, if you're not careful, you have to pull back, or you will demolish your entire being.
So step carefully.


|•| Username: rivendell |•| Name: Minefield |•| Gender: Male |•|




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spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller"Somewhere cool, trust me Minefield, you'll be glad I decided to drag you along at the last moment," He picked up the pace from a gentle walk to a speedy trot, while Minefield stumbled to keep up on his young legs that seemed to get caught in the dense undergrowth with every chance they got. Huffing, he caught up to Taboo, who had broken free of the forest's clutches and was standing at the edge of a barren cliff of rust colored stone. A prickle of fear and remembrance tickled the fawn's mind, and he opened his mouth, but before he could utter a sound, Taboo stole the words from his mouth. "I know that the elders don't want us here, but look! Look, Minefield. You have to admit that you are in awe. It is impossable not to be." And as he lifted his liquid green eyes from the dusty rock, Minefield agreed in an instant, as his pupils shrunk to pinpricks.

Light.

An abundance of it. Not the darkly glowing flames of the torches in the Dim Forest, not the white flashes of lightning that lit up the world for a moment before fading away and leaving only a fleeting imprint on the eyes. But a bright ball of flame, glowing with the power of millions of torches, painful to the eyes. It lit up the world below, cracked peaks and valleys, a broken up, churned earth with few trees or bushes to offer shelter. The soil burned a dusty red, shot through with white, brown, and even pink in places.

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spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller"Luck, my young brother. Luck." He shot a look over his shoulder at his little sibling. Minefield didn't even have his antlers yet. "In seven days, I will leave this place. I will travel through this barren world, it's called a desert, just so you know, to see what lays on the other side." A hint of bitterness entered Taboo's voice as he finished those last words. "I tire of living my life in darkness. I want to be in the light! And you, you Minefield, you will acompany me." He turned around to face his brother. "That is, if you wi-"
spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller"Great! When can we start?" Minefield bleated, leaping around with exitement. Taboo blinked, slightly taken back.
spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller"It will be dangerous. . ."
spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller spacefiller"I don't care, Taboo. I know I'll be safe as long as I'm near your side," Minefield wriggled around, jumping and leaping and prancing with uncontainable happiness. Taboo smiled. His brother was so innocent and sincere. They would definatly get to the other side, he could feel it in his bones.
And so, the brothers walked back to the Dim Forest together, side by side.





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"Just shut up, will you? Haven't you already done enough damage?" Taboo snapped, a venom in his voice that Minefield had never heard before. He stuttered as the older male added, "I swear that if you say another word, I will leave you here," the young one quickly snapped his blabbering mouth shut and hung his head with shame. "Let's go" The rift of the desert was already beginning to rise between the two brothers.

As the sun sank slowly into the earth and the stars flickered on, they stopped next to a large outcropping of rock. There, that night, Taboo left, never to be seen again. As the next morning dawned, Minefield began to run. He didn't know what for, but if he had been asked, it would've been "To outrun the ghosts." He made his way across the desert, where time has no definition, and each day is but a blur. He only lived because of the many real oasises scattered across the desert. They hadn't found them before because they were out of the way that Taboo had chosen. There, Minefield rested, treated his wounds; sunburn, thirst and hunger, scrapes, bruises, and various other small injuries. Slowly, over the course of the next two weeks, Minefield ran across the desert. He never looked at his own reflection in the small pools of the oasis, afraid that Taboo would be looking over his shoulder as a ghost.





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Then, suddenly, something rammed into Minefield's side, slamming him into a tree and pinning him there. Releasing a terrified bleat, he thought of bears, pumas, wolves, and other, more sinister creatures. But then the weight lifted as another shape shoved the first creature away, and they began to speak very rapidly in a different language. Minefield got a good look at his attackers, and was suprised to see that they were deer, but not like the ones he knew, with their dark pelts of almost black, their oddly colored eyes, and small stature.

No, these deer were large, with proud heads and necks, light caramel, soft-looking coats with many lighter spots, and deep brown eyes. One -the first one, was a buck who looked to be about Taboo's age. The other, a doe, looked a little younger, and she was obviously trying very hard to keep the buck back. Minefield started to slip away when the doe whirled about and said in a commanding voice,

"STOP! Who are you?" Her words were choppy and slow to come, as if she did not speak his language well.

"I'm Minefield. Who are you?" Minefield said, his voice wavering slightly. The doe's eyes widened, and she said something in her native language to the buck. The only words that Minefield caught were "Dim" and "Forest."

"You. Come with us." She approached and shoved him behind the buck, who began to move deeper into the heart of the forest. "Follow Barlo," Minefield followed in silence, and the doe caught up and began to speak to him in his tounge. "I am Erin. You do not look like you are from the Dim Forest. Coat is too light."
"What do you mean, my coat is too light? It's perfectly dark!"
"No. Is light. Like desert sand. You have stripes. They are black."
"What?"
"You heard Erin." Minefield looked at his leg, and stopped moving. The doe was right. His coat looked like the desert. He knew that he had antlers already, he could feel them on his head, and had been aware of them for some time.
"I am." He muttered, catching up to her as they continued on.
"You meet with the chief now. He speaks your language fluent. Goodby." And she shoved him into a glade where the buck- Barlo stood next to an old buck.
Nearly blind, his eyes were clouded over with cataracts, and his fur was tinted with gray. His antlers were huge, showing his impressive age. Even old as he was, the chief was a formidable figure.
"Hello Minefield" He rumbled. "It is good to see you again. I feared that we had lost you forever." Minefield opened his mouth to say something, thought better of it, and closed it again. "Ah, I see you are confused. I'll make it simple for you: Welcome home, my son." Minefield blinked, feeling very stupid, but as the chief shifted and tapped his forhead, memories came rusing back in a flood.
"Dad!" He screamed, tackling the old buck.
"It's good to have you back, Minefield. Erin! Come here please!" Erin came stepping lightly over the leaves that were strewn upon the ground. "Show my son around, he may have forgotten many places of his kingdom." Erin nodded and they left, side by side.



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Re: Deer adoptables [New deer, designed by Concept]

Postby Bast-et » Mon Jul 23, 2012 9:16 am

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After a bad day, I ran to the woods that surrounded my house and angrily pushed aside brush and vines as I moved deeper through the trees. Thorns tore my hands and branches clung to my clothes and as low as my mood was, it seemed like even the forest was against me. Frustrated to tears, I threw myself to the ground where I was and sobbed. Even loud as I was, nothing stirred. The trees stood as silent shields between me and the world, and their leaves kept the silence. Peace came to me gradually and I sat up to watch the small creek bubble by.

Leaves crunching caused me to lift my head as a bear lumbered past, it's arms swinging it's body into a rolling gait. Despite how close I was, it never glanced at me. What makes a bear run so fast? I asked myself. Ravens flew through the branches of the trees, their crude caws a warning to anything on the ground. Squirrels fled chattering through the highest reaches of the trees in bunches. The squirrels and the branches they raced through looked hazy. I squinted to focus on them, but they remained the same. A soft layer of smoke had settled around me, and changed the slightly familiar trees into indefinite bars holding me in a jail of smoky branches. A gasp caught in my throat as I froze in terror. A forest fire...

Coyotes raced past, alongside rabbits, their traditional meal. In the fear of the moment, neither noticed the other's presence and focused all their energies on getting away. I could hear roar of the fire now; feel the heat it drove before it. Stumbling away from the fire in the now harsh forest I ran in both directions, but neither seemed the right way. Then he arrived, the saving grace. He stood bright with color, an orange-y brown that shone even through the smoke, and I caught my breath. He stared at me, and I at him, and I knew that he was here for me. He turned and bounded forward a few steps, as lithe as a stream of water. I understood, and knowing no other way followed him. We continued in this way to the edge of the forest. I knew without me she could have left the danger behind, escaped the grasping hands of smoke that stole into your lungs and made you cough. But she stayed. At the edge of the forest, the deer saw me safely to my yard. We looked at each other over the empty space and it seemed we both sighed. Me with longing, and she with satisfaction. Then my Flame went back to the forest, to save other creatures, or join the his fire I did not know. But I do know that as he turned, a new black stripe appeared along his back. A mark for a job well done? A stripe for a debt I owe? Or something else, I do not know.
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Re: Deer adoptables

Postby -Firesong- » Tue Jul 24, 2012 11:41 am

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I'm a "lost" deer. One with colors so unnatural, I've been exiled. There's many others like me, I'm sure, as I don't believe in the whole "one of a kind" thing. Different pelts, different deer. Different ways of life. But, when you get down to it and push all the rest away, we are the same. All of us unwanted. All of us lost. That is what my name translates to, lost, but nobody has ever called me by my real name so I've never told any of them it.
Rumor is, my mother fought them when they took me away. But it's just a rumor, passed through the beaks of the sparrows and jays, those who gasp in awe at my pelt. Though from them I did hear of a deer with a pelt depicting a wintery forest. I think the humans got their hands on her before anyone else could, and she is at the Smithsonian now. It's a sad fate, but it's a real one. When they find deer like her and me, they put us on the lab table and then we go on display at some zoo or museum. If it's a zoo, we get stuffed when we die. If it's a museum, it's too late for you now.

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Re: Deer adoptables

Postby .Ghost. » Wed Jul 25, 2012 4:59 am

Loving the writings so far. <3
Im leaving this open until friday and will announce the winners on saturday, so there's still plenty of time to write. :3
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Re: Deer adoptables

Postby Nellas » Wed Jul 25, 2012 5:03 am

Good luck everyone! All your entries are amazing O.o
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Re: Deer adoptables

Postby .Ghost. » Fri Jul 27, 2012 9:57 pm

Just a reminder that today is the last day to write or edit writings, I'll announce the winners tomorrow. :3
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Re: Deer adoptables

Postby .Ghost. » Wed Aug 01, 2012 10:00 am

So sorry guys, haven't been able to do any judging until now. ;A;
Depression and an emergency visit to the dentist kicked me away from internet for a bit, but I'm back now and read to announce the winners.

Just want to say I loved all writings so so much and this have been a really hard decision for me to make, I'd give them to you all if I could. ; ;
First off; the buck, you guys really seemed to like this one, didn't you? <D
It's actually inspired by a real animal which have a coppery coat and black stripes down their back.
It took some time for me to decide his new owner, but in the end he'll be going home with Rivendell, congratulations. <3

And now the doe, who's inspired by the appaloosa horse and a rather awesome sheep I saw. 8I
She'll be going home with Nikki, take good care of her. :3


I'm not sure when new deer will show up, just keep your eyes open, gonna try not to take too long. c:
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Re: Deer adoptables

Postby Nellas » Wed Aug 01, 2012 10:02 am

Congrats you two <3
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Re: Deer adoptables

Postby Bast-et » Wed Aug 01, 2012 10:55 am

Congrats guys! Lovely deer!
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Re: Deer adoptables

Postby .Coyote » Wed Aug 01, 2012 3:13 pm

8D Yay! Now I have two does that can play together! Or, after Galla figures out a way to break Doe out of a deer reserve XD
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