[MenheraCollie]

This one's King. The design is by castiiian
nonrarity: sclera color
c: shorter fur, hair above jaw, hound tail

[castiiian]

it's close, but not quite approve-able yet!

linewise/editwise
the hair should be more forward and spiked, there's no side piece thats hanging down
the tail at the end should be more pointed up/curled

design wise/color wise
horns/teeth should be solid yellow! ( the color you saw that confused you into thinking it was a gradient was actually just the geode/shiny shading of the bottle bog :0c sorry about the confusion! )
the "+"s on your design should look more like "x"s!
the stripe on its cheek should actually be higher, near the top corner of the eye!
for the stripes along the shoulder/body, you should add more drippy parts!

here's a visualizer for everything i pointed out!

please feel free to pm/dm me if you have any questions! :-D

[MenheraCollie]

Changes made! (:

[castiiian]

sorry about the late reply for this one!
the design looks good, only a few concerns left!

the bottom/inside of the ear was edited, when it did not need to be! :0c
please restore the original if possible/make it as close to the original as possible!

as for the hair... i still can't approve it 😔
you can use a common hair edit item to change the hair if you'd like to keep it like that!
but otherwise, if you don't want to buy/use an edit item, it should look more like my earlier posted redline. i suggest making it look more like long fur and less like hair, that might help? simpler is better, in this hair's case! less lines, more fur-esq? :0c

please let me know if you have any questions! :-)